| Fan Fiction |
by Erii
After the day I met Onew I felt happier than I had been for a very long time. I couldn’t feel the bruises on my body or the pain in my back. All I could think of was that man. His chocolate brown hair and big brown warm eyes. His skin so peachy and clean, and his inviting red lips, but the thing stuck on my mind was his smile. That smile that made my knees go weak. Was this what they called ‘Love at first sight’ ?
I was lying on my bed in my own room, just starring out into the air, thinking back at the episode over and over again. Replaying it like a movie. For every time I replied it I would add a little extra, and he just became better and better. He was so close to perfection now! The way he hadn’t looked at my body, but straight into my eyes. The way he has respected me like a likeman, how he had smiled and asked my name. And the short contact our skin had made. Oh, how I wanted to feel that again.
I heard someone argue in the room next-door and I sighed. At least I had my own room, but the fact that I had my own room wasn’t really an usual thing, cause the rest had to share rooms.
They thought I was the lucky one, having my own room, personal space and my own master, but in fact I wasn’t. Of course I didn’t have to fuck all those old men coming over, coz someone more or less owned me, but at the same time. I was only human too, and there were limits to what my body could take!
My owner paid Jonghyun so that no one else was allowed to touch me. I was only his, and he had marked me, and he would keep marking me until the day I’d be able to buy myself free.
He came two times in the week, and if I was lucky only one time, but it had also happened that he had been here every night in a row for a week. After that Jonghyun had brought me to the doctor, and guess who stepped into the bar that night. Either Jonghyun was a hella good business man, or that doctor was a bloody pervert!
I was in my dreamland, still replaying Onew in my mind when suddenly the door was banged open and the man I hated with my all stood there, his presence throwing shadows into every corner. That smile, the sense in my head, all of it disappearing into a black hole of fear.
«Dreaming of me, huh?» He had his evil smirk on, and his eyes were burning with lust like he had been waiting for a long time. I winced in pain, I knew what was coming.
Before I could do anything he had jumped on top of me, pushing me down. Pinning me to the bed. I couldn’t breathe!
«Choi…» It was his last name, and the only name I knew and was allowed to use. One day he had come to the bar, and out of all the boys he had chosen me, the dancer. Why me? I asked myself the same question every day! Why did it have to be me being here in the first place, and then why would he chose me?
Every time I would hear the same things. Him telling me about his boyfriend, how stupid his boyfriend was, his life, the fact he was living off his boyfriends money, pretending to not, and that I was his, and only his.
His hands went under my shirt, touching my sore skin. Rubbing my nipples. «My dear, dear Key.. You know why I love you right?» His smirk, so evil, making the devil look nice.
«Moan for me!» He suddenly hit my head, and the pain washed over my head and I got dizzy, letting out a moan in pain. My vision got blurry and all I felt was the blood pondering in my head. His hands went down in my pants, pulling out my member, already knowing what to do to get me hard.
«You are so easy going, not like my boyfriend. So naïve, thinking I love him! Pathetic! Believing I’m so hardworking. That rich little bastard! All the money he gives me, what do you think he would say if he knew it all goes to you?»
He stopped, and pulled off my pants completely, leaving me with only my shirt on.
«Undress me!» He commanded and sat up looking at me with a daring look.
I got up from the bed, and I slowly pulled his shirt over his head while I was kissing his well built chest. I knew what he liked. He liked it soft and fragile, he liked me shaking in fear, knowing he could do everything he wanted and more.
Then I pulled down his pants while massaging his cock, slowly taking it inside my mouth, taking it all the way in, closing my eyes as it hit the back of my throat. I just held my mouth open as Choi grabbed my hair slamming himself in and out of my mouth, for every thrust, my stomach would turn. He stopped and I felt the tears star running out of relief. If I’d throw up on him I knew I wouldn’t be able to walk tomorrow from the beating I would have gotten.
«Ahh.. Key, you are so good. My stupid Boo, never touches me like you do. I don’t even get to touch him. He doesn’t understand that this is what I need. I need you»
Before I could prepare myself he had flipped me around and entered me. I let out another moan in pain.
He slammed inside me, every thrust hurting so much. In the start it had been some pleasure involved, but now it was only pain and disgust. Like the expiration date was over and my body couldn’t take it anymore.
His hands were around my neck, leaving me with no breath, my whole body tensed, and I winced in pain. It felt like I was going blind as the pain kept going and my body was running out of oxygen.
«Scream.. for.. me!» Choi hissed in my ear. I used my last strength, the last breath in my body, letting it fill my lungs, coming out with so much pain. «Ahhh.. Choi..hhhh» He let go of my neck and started to hit my body instead, knowing it would leave bruises. He slammed in me hard two times before he dropped down on me, panting while sweat was covering his face.
My body shook as it finally was getting oxygen. I gasped for air and slowly my vision was coming back, the grey walls coming back in view, the dirty concrete walls holding me prisoner.
«Tell me you love me!»
«I love you» I couldn’t breathe steady. My throat burning again, my body aching, not even able to move!
Suddenly he was stroking my hair so gently, patting my head, drawing circles on my skin with his index finger.
«If I could I would leave my Boo for you, but I can’t. Without him I don’t have the money and I want to show the world I got the most beautiful boyfriend in the world. Coz he is, but still you are much sexier, and he is just so inexperienced! I like you better, a lot better, but I can’t leave that rich boy!»
The same thing he always would say. The same things that would always disgust me, letting me know what kind of bastard he was. Telling me how he wanted me, and how he used his boyfriend, but for some reason I felt no pity for the boyfriend. What person would out of their free will stay with Choi?!
He suddenly bit my chest leaving another mark there.
«Don’t let anyone else touch you. You’re mine!»
He got off the bed and while his eyes were glued on my body he got dressed again. He smirked before he blew me a kiss. I felt like such a no life, if this was luck, I didn’t need it. Yes, he was young and sexy, but I didn’t want that. I didn’t want any of it. I’d rather sleep in a room filled with other people starving than having to go through this!
After he left I felt my tears running down my cheeks, and I cursed my family for a second. One day there was no more money left and we sat there with a huge debt, and me as the eldest of the kids had to save the family so my father sold me to Jonghyun. In the start I was just a dancer here. Strip teasing for the old men, until Choi came and bought me as his sex slave.
I looked up in the air, my vision blurred with tears.
«Onew, I miss you! Come and save me...»
I knew it was only a wish, something that would never happen. Why would he even be thinking of me?! I was nothing. I wasn’t even human. I was worse than a dog. At least you treat your dog nicely...
I felt my vision get dark, and the last thing I saw before I slept in was Onew’s big warm eyes and his smile encouraging me. I needed that right now.
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A boy looked through the crack in the door, and slowly tears starting rolling down his cheek. He looked at the guy smirking as he was handing Jonghyun a pay check.
His face full of satisfaction. That was the one and only person the boy hated with all his might. Every part of the man disgusted him. How could he hurt Key like that?!
The boy knew one thing.. If he could he’d save Key. They had already planned that. Their life after becoming free. Travelling around the world, together...
He opened the door and he slowly tiptoed over to the bed, not waking the other one up. He slowly removed the ripped shirt and tucked Key safely under the blanket. He just stood there watching Key’s sleeping face and he really wanted to be the one Key was dreaming about.
Someone shouted his name and he hurried over to the door, looking one last time at Key before he closed the door.
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Key ~ -_- !
I know the chapters are shorter than what I tend to write for the main time, but it’s all because I don’t change much of the plot, not yet!
I just hope it’s still good, so that I’m not disappointing anyone!
My READERS! <3
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Comment replies:
sa itte miyo → You’ve been a silent reader? Woah~ And I thought I didn’t have any silent readers xD (Glad you commented after all though =) ) Haha, I know~ I mean about Onew stumbling into that place Xd It’s just so him! Well, at least you know that Key’s owner’s last name is Choi, so you only have a few people that could be xD Glad you’re still interested in this fic and wants to know ~ ^^ Loove ♥
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2minLOVE → Seems like all pairings are okay, I’m like that too, but my favourite pairing is actually JongKey, but I like writing OnKey xD Uhm.. Yes, there is someone bad.. And you can decide if he’s so so so bad or not yourself xD Loove ♥
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Ida~ → C—crying? In the beginning? OMG... What have I done? Was it really that sad? xD And I though it was kind of bad written... Tsch.. Onew have more than enough money to save Key. He just doesn’t know that he should do that yet xD JongHo? Uhm.. Actually, they are only alone on one side in the poster because they are the bad ones while the rest is nice xD Aww.. I’m really touched.. Good writer.. (That one is still kinda... off xD) Anyway, Loove ♥♥
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HikariTeiruzu → Actually, my favourite couple is JongKey, but I love writing about OnKey, plus they match well in this fic. You have a FanFic? I’m going to read it when I have time, okay?! I’ll comment for sure ^^ Loove ♥
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TheBlobMaster ^^ → Aww.. I’m really glad you liked it! Actually I didn’t have to correct that many spellings mistakes.. (Okay, that’s a lie) but I had to add a lot of things because the original chapter was really short and I can’t have a chapter to be under 3 word pages xD Tihi.. Jonghyun is being a bad boy.. Have I ever made him bad before? Can’t remember xD Comeback, lol.. Anyway, Thanks~~! ♥♥♥♥
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iluvhenrybb → Haha, I don’t know if I can call it angst or not xD Don’t really know, but since it’ll be a little darker than the original and everything I guess I’ll call it angst xD I’m not sure I should give the link to the original... I mean.. Since that will kind off ruin the plot for this one even though I’m changing the end and adding something more and something.. Buuut... Since it sounds like you have read that fic back then I guess it’s okay xD /xOlivaax
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sushil0v3 → Really, you like it? Thanks! I’ll try not letting you down! =D You’ve publishes some books?! Woah.. Respect! xD I’ve actually been thinking of sending in some of my FanFics, just changing the names or something, just to see if they would publish it even though it’s yaoi xD (Guess they wouldn’t.. but anyway...) It should be allowed to publish FanFics yes! xD I really hope you’ll keep reading anyway =) Loove ♥
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juphen → Heey ~! So Onkey is your favourite pairing? =) Haha.. The title was daring? I guess.. Some parts are kind of... Uh.. But about the OnKey smuts xD Well.. There might be some, but that’ll first be in a lot of chapters xD I’ll update every day, more or less with this fic, don’t worry ^^ Loove ♥
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AhMin → You’re thinking too much about the future ^^ (I mean the future of the fic xD) You don’t like OnKey? xD Let’s just say that all of the SHINee boys have been in the fic by now xD Jonghyun is a sucker for money, but yeah, I guess it’s about his past, but at the same time... You shouldn’t think too much about it because we won’t get to know in quite a few chapters xD I know the poster was too obvious, but.. anyway xD Empty hearted person.. That’s just the word to describe him ^^ xD Jonghyun being good..? You know, you might even be right =) I have realized.. I mean the thing about Jonghyun. I think whatever he does it’s close to perfection! It’s not only the object for your desires xD Loove ♥
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Cindy → I think anyone would fall for Onew’s smile =D Nah.. Key wouldn’t be thinking of suicide when he’s still dreaming about getting free ^^ (And now he got Onew xD) Nope, Jonghyun doesn’t love Key even though he cares, but now I’m being a spoiler xD The original of this is really crappy, I mean, has a lot of mistakes and the end is not good at all! That’s why I’m changing the end completely this time, plus I’m making it darker xD Anyway, here you go /xOlivaax/
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