Fan Fiction |
by haney
hope u enjoy this one!!
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** The moment in the room juz now **
** Shancai met her real parents and had a great time with them and eating breakfast together……
shancai: dad !! mum!! I better go now !! or not…… ah si
will be worried sick!!
Mrs ximen: you didn’t tell ah si yet ??
Mr ximen: yeh??
Ximen: we intended to make it a surprise to everyone
including ah si….
Shancai: yah!! That’s why I kept that secret from him!! I
juz want him to feel a little bit suspen!! That’s all… I
don’t meant anything harm!!
Ximen: yes..
Mrs ximen: shancai arh… I can see how in love you are with
him… you love him ,don’t you ??
Shancai: i… i…
Ximen: eh, scared to say?? Ah, shancai??
Shancai: ge!! Mum!! Dad!! Look at him!! He tease me!! Ergh!!
Mr ximen: ximen….
Ximen: ok … ok …. I’m sorry….
Shancai: of course I love ah si!!! He’s everything to me…
but….
Mrs ximen: but what??
Shancai: I hope he don’t propose to me now.. it’s juz to
early… I want to set my own career first…
Ximen: eh… career??
Shancai: yes… I hope you give me the freedom to have my own
career…
Mr ximen: sure…
Mrs ximen: but for ximen, he will have to take my place…
Ximen: I know… I be more powerful than you, shancai!!!
That’s good!!
Shancai: what?? Then I work with ah si orh… more powerful
than you!!
Ximen: you!!
Shancai: I what?? Can you finish the incomplete sentence??
Ximen: eh!!
Mr ximen: you two stop it!!
Shancai: bye, gotta go now!!
Mrs ximen: what about the surprise??
Shancai: tonight at vs?? ge ??
Ximen: sure!!
** shancai then gave her parents a friendly hug….. ximen accompanying her…
** shancai then went home, finding that ah si is not at home... leaving her all alone in the house **
shancai: guan jia!! come here!!
guan jia: yes, shancai xiao jie!! what is it?? is it
something important??
shancai: where is ah si shao ye??
guan jia: oh, he have gone out early in the morning.. after
you went out...
shancai: after i went out?? do you know where did he go,
guan jia??
guan jia: umm.. i'm sorry, shancai xiao jie.. but he didnt
tell me where he is going... i'm really sorry!!
shancai: it's okay!! umm, did he tell you anything??
anything?? even one sentence??
guan jia: umm, no... wait!! yes, he told me something
before he go..
shancai: what is it?? tell me quick!!
guan jia: ok!! he told me that he might come back home late
at night and dont bother to cook for his meals... as he
wont be at home...
shancai: really?? is that it, guan jia?? he said that?
guan jia: yes... and he told me to tell you not to wait for
him if he come back home late..
shancai: ( murmuring ) that idiot!! where the hell he went!!
oh, thanx!!
** A few hours later... **
(( Ximen and shancai are at the Daoming Mansion.. discussing their surprise for tonight... talking and at the same time ... teasing each other... laughter ... can be heard .. ))
shancai: haha!! ximen!!
ximen: haha!!
** Mei zhou, lei came into the living room, holding to the drunk ah si... surprised to what ah si said is true..
note: they still didnt know that ximen is shancai's brother..
mei zhou: ximen!!
lei: shancai!!
** the two then noticed that the rest were here..
shancai: eh, lei?? what happen to ah si?? ( goes to ah si )
ah si: let me go!!
shancai : shut up!! let me bring to your room first!!
ah si: i dont want!!
shancai: come!!
** shancai dragged ah si to his room... **
ximen: eh, what happen to ah si??
mei zhou : stop pretending, ximen!!
ximen: pretend what??
lei: what actually happen to shancai and you??
ximen: arh?? nothing!! what the heck is going on?? u guyz
are getting me crazy!!
mei zhou: you kissed shancai!! you hug her!! still dont
know what happen!!
lei: ximen, you know that ah si really love shancai but how
can you do this to her??
ximen: oh my god!! you misunderstands us!! i should have
told you guyz earlier!!
mei zhou: tell us what??
ximen: u thought that shancai and i are in a relationship??
oh my!!
lei: then what??
ximen: actually... shancai is my younger sister!! we wanted
it to be a surprise but i guess it have all gone wrong..
mei zhou n lei : what??
mei zhou: shancai .. ur sister??
lei: really ??
ximen: yes!
mei zhou: what about ah si n shancai??
ximen: should we go up and see??
lei: no, let them settle between themselves..
ximen: but..
** lei look at ximen...
ximen; ok .. ok ..
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oops.. wat's gonna happen?
i smell ... trouble!!
see ya!!
comments!!
....haney...
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