Fan Fiction |
by haney
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enjoy,k!
btw, this is the only chap i'll write
in this format! juz trying out! :)
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** Ah si leaned to the wall, groaning in pain, holding his right hand to his left shoulder. He felt an unbearable pain he hadn’t felt before… **
“ ah si ! “ shouted shancai, rushing to his side, without
even caring that mr lin is threatening them with a gun.
** Shancai saw a blood stain on his shirt on the left side of his shoulder. **
“ ah si.. you.. you’ve been shot ! “ said shancai in shocked, though she saw everything but she juz didn’t saw the part where ah si was being shot.
“ shancai… I .. I’m sorry.. shancai, if .. if I die, you must.. not wait for .. me .. “ whispered ah si, trying to say everything out to her.
** Mr lin pointing the gun towards shancai again, but this time, he felt a strong hand attacking from behind. **
Hitting mr lin hardly, “ how dare you do this to her ? my sister!! And you even shot my best pal! You’re gonna pay for it ! “
It’s Ximen!
** shancai didn’t realise that ximen was not in coma now, coz he really needed to save his sister and best pal… **
shancai hugged ah si tightly, as if she not wanting to lose
him, " no.. you musn't die.. you must wait! you'll survive!
ah si! you must listen to me ! i.. i .. cant afford to lose
you! " shancai whispered sadly.
ah si was touched when she said that, but he's too tired already, he can't take it anymore, his eyes are too heavy now, " shancai.. i .. love .. you . " ah si last words to shancai, b4 closing his eyes.
note: ah si will not die!
shancai shook ah si hardly, tears pouring, wetting her cheeks, " no.. you.. cannot die .. ah si, i love you.. more than you'll imagine.. ah si.. no .. " whispered shancai, hugging ah si tightly.
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Suddenly, shancai felt someone calling her, " shancai ! oh my god! we need to bring ah si to the hospital now ! " ..
shanci looked up and got a shock ! " ximen ge! i thought .. i thought you're .. you're in coma .. "
ximen patted shancai's back, " we got no time to talk about that now. we.... " his words stopped suddenly when he saw more mens coming towards them. " what the heck ! how on earth did he bring so many men ! " ximen said in disgust.
mr lin smiled evilly, as though he was real proud of his achievement, " haha! u've got no way to escape now ! and you, ( pointing to shancai ) ximen zhing er ling ! ( eww!! is this name ok ? i donnoe, me made up one )you will lose the one u really love ! daoming si ! he'll be dead and .. "
** there was another ' bang ' on the door.. **
voice : well, we'll see about it, you idiot guy! we're gonna put our dirty hands on ya ! oh, yummy.. yummy! this is my work !
voice 2 : ah si ! ( saw ah si lying motionlessly on the floor with shancai hugging him, blood stain on his shirt ) we need to go to the hospital now ! fast! ( dial the ambulance )
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hehe.. so how's it ?
i've never posted a chap in this format..
so, hope u guys like it !
comment!
esp 4rm meteor lover, meteor starz, noa, annie .. um,um..
did i not mention anyone else? hehe..
anybody ! leave a comment!!
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