Fan Fiction

Mg 3 - Teary eyes to be wit' u.. *+completed+*

by haney

Chapter 39

Words of Comfort

from this chap onwards, i'll write in this
format.. what do u think ? u prefer me write
like this or in a script form? vote, 0k!

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** Ximen is looking everywhere fo shancai. Merely
asking everybody about her, describing her appearance**

ximen approaching a nurse who was walking towards his direction, " excuse me, miss.. did you by any chance saw a young lady with long hair down her shoulder wearing a sleeveless blouse and jeans? asked ximen waiting
patiently for an answer.

** The nurse took about a minute to answer to
ximen's question **

" um,i think yes... if i'm not wrong, she went to
the garden in this hospital.. i saw a person you
described when that way. i'm sorry though if she's not
the one u're finding. " replied the nurse.

Ximen's face changed from an impatient look to a smiling ximen, " thanks, nurse! thanks!! " ximen said, thanking
the nurse several times.

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** Shancai is sitting on a bench, a frowning face can
be seen.. everything in this garden is so peaceful..
so quiet.. as though can forget all problems..
everything .. **

shancai thought to herself, " i'm really ashamed! i'm the
one that coz ah si to .. "

** juz then, someone interupting her thoughts.. **

** shancai then felt someone sitting beside her but
she juz ignored him until he interupted thoughts **

" what are you doing here, my dear sister! you make me
worried about you! "

** shancai turned around to see her brother, ximen,
sitting beside her.. **

shocked, " da ge! wh.. what are you doing here? how
do you know i'm here ? " asked shancai.

replying shancai with a smile, " i have my own ways,
of course! "

" oh .. "

saying in a serious tone, " you shouldn't be here!
you should wait for ah si! "

** Then, out of a sudden, tears started to pour thus
wetting her cheeks. A feeling of sadness mixed with
guilt **

" shancai.... "

** Wiping away the tears, ximen hug his sister and began
comforting her.. saying words of comfort **

Feeling that she need to pour out to someone, " it's my fault, da ge! i.. i should be the one in the operation
room now!! not ah si! it should have been me! mr lin
wants me, not ah si! why.. why did he shiel me! i
should be the one! mr lin wanted to take revenge on
behalf of his dead daughter! "

Brushing through her hair, " ssh.. you're not at fault!
ah si did that b'coz he love you, he can't bear to
lose you, to see you in that kind of state.. he rather
lose his life than to lose you.. let's forget about
it now! mr lin is captured! "

" But.... " shancai wanted to protest to ximen but
was interupted by him instead.

Interupting shancai, " no buts! we better go.. i know
ah si doesnt want to see you in this condition! "
ximen said, full of concern.

** ximen got up.. but shancai remained there, not
moving .. **

" shancai .. let's go.. " persuading shancai gently.

** shancai nodded.. got up from her seat.. ximen putting
his hands around her waist **

" um, do u think we're acting like a couple? " shancai said, teasing ximen.

" well.. we're siblings!! it's our rights to do what
we want to! no harm, right ? " teased ximen.

laughter brought shancai, " haha! who wants you! i
have my ah si already! "

" i also have my xiao you! " replied ximen.

ximen's pov:

at least she is beginning to laugh now..
not frowning, thinking about ah si..

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fuhh!!
that's all for today!

comments pls!
**haney**