Fan Fiction |
by indigoluck
Argh! I think chapter 14 was pretty sucky. I mean, I didn't bring out the emotions well enough and I made Jay's death seem so, fake. Man, I really have to rewrite that chapter. Anyway, sorry guys if you're expecting a happy ending. From the beginning I said that it was going to be a sad one... anyway, hope you enjoy this last chapter okay?
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[Jolin's Point Of View]
"Gillian, what happened to him?" I asked, having hiccups in between due to the crying.
My tears had dried and my eyes felt sore. My mind was blank and my heart was torn. He's gone, this is no joke. Gillian won't joke about death, she's not that sort of girl. I know her.
"Let's not talk about this," she replied with a weak smile, trying to comfort me. She's mad at the same time sorry for me. She hates me because Jay lost his life because of me, yet she knows that it's not my fault and can't really throw it out. I feel so miserable, why didn't I ask him, why did I leave?
I'm starting to regret.
"Anyway, he wants me to give you this," Gillian interrupted my thoughts as she took out something from her handbag. It was a small box, covered in red felt. It looked royal, it looked elegant, it looked expensive.
She reached for my hand, I panicked. Gently, she placed the small box onto my palm and closed my fingers for me, knowing that I would definitely not have the courage to look at it. "Open it Jo, it'll tell you how much he loves you," she ushered me and nodded her head.
My hands were trembling. The rich cloth felt so soft. It was small, I already knew what was inside. I was afraid. Slowly, I lifted the lid. I wanted to close my eyes but the glittery object inside the velvety box drawed me to it.
It was a ring, an engagement ring. It was made of silver. A diamond, about 4 karats was centered perfectly on it. It was beautiful, my jaws fell apart.
"He.. he..." I stuttered and a smile started to form. But my heart could not last from the happiness. The terror of his absense was starting to return and tears started to fall once again. I felt so lonely.
I wanted to cry out his name, but I could not, not in front of Gillian.
"Don't worry Jo, he's gone, but you just need to know that he loves you," Gillian rubbed my hand. "I'm going now, take care," she bidded good bye as if she was never to return...
but will she?
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haha... okay guys... a lousy ending I suppose... sorry, i really suck at endings... anyway... i'm considering a sequel but we'll see.. =)