| Fan Fiction |
by D. Fizzle
Reviewed by @m@nd@
Title: 5/5
- Very interesting, it says a lot to what the stories about and Its not very catchy but I like how it relates to the story.
Poster/Background: 8/10
- In the poster it kinda is hard to see some of the pics, the background is nice, you can read the words clearly.
Forewords: 7/10
- the foreword was kinda short, didn't really say much. I really like the quote.
Plot:: 15/15
- The plot was very good, it showed how much she felt and it flowed very well.
Creativity/Originality: 15/15
- You put so much of your originality and its very good. Keep it up!
Writing Style: 10/10
- Just amazing. You really are one good writer, you describe so many things as a fish or even a subject. Very nice.
Flow: 10/10
- As i said in the plot, it flowed very nicely. There wasn't a time you went off subject, you kept it flowing right to the end, I really like that.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocab: 9/10
- Little in some spaces but very minor.
Characterization: 10/10
- Very nice, I like how you did it from the girls pov.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
- I really enjoyed it, it was very nice and very well done.