| Fan Fiction |
by IHeartWangZi
Title: 4/5
I thought the title wasn’t unique enough, but I understood how it related to the story
Poster/Background: 10/10
I am a huugee fan of photoshop and I just wanted to say I think your poster and background are great! Props to the creator
Forewords: 4/10
Uhm Forewords was kind of plain…doesn’t really explain anything
Plot: 10/15
You had like 2 stories, both different topics..the first one was really short…it wasn’t a story more like a memory. The second story was better it had a storyline and a climax
Creativity/Originality: 8/15
Umm it was kind of original but not really. I’ve seen a lot of stories with that kind of storyline, it could’ve been more unique
Flow: 7/10
Well for the first story it was way too fast. The second was pretty ok. Although I wouldn’t know which to rate
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
All of the spelling, grammar, and vocab was not bad. Although your Chinese pinyin were spelled wrong…well some like you spelled “Ni” like “Ne”
Characterization: 4/10
Uhm you didn’t do much on characterization since you didn’t really explain their characters in the forewords of the story.
Writing Style: 10/10
Liked your writing style kinda glad its not in a script format
Overall Enjoyment: 2/5
Sorry I didn’t really enjoy it
Sub Total: 69/100
Bonus: 4/5
-I love love love Gui Gui
Total: 73/100
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What can i say?...
Not bad..Uhmm..im not disappointed.
Im actually pretty glad! :)
HAHA!!!
much love,
IHeartWangZi
071209
1:36pm