| Fan Fiction |
by jyyms
Reviewer: Silver
Appearance: 10/10
You kept the appearance fresh and clean and the dark font was easy to read against the light background.
Title: 5/5
I thought the title fit well with the story and plotline.
Forewords: 10/10
Straightforward and to the point without boring the reader or telling too much about your story.
Character Development: 8/10
I think you developed your characters and their personalities well. (Mr. Jung reminds me of one of my old high school teachers *lol*)
Creativity/Originality of Plot: 12/15
Since I’ve seen other stories along the same plotline, I docked a few points, HOWEVER, I will point out that you (like any other real writer and not someone who just plagiarized someone else’s work) have your own style of twists and events weaved into the story that make it original.
Writing Style: 12/15
I like the paragraph way of writing better, but your writing style was clean and made the story easy to read.
Flow: 14/15
There were some points where I thought you moved the story too fast or too slow, but other than that your flow was good.
Spelling/Grammar: 5/10
I found a few spelling errors (ex. aprreciated should be appreciated) and there were a few grammar problems (ex. There should be a space between the end of your sentence and the beginning of your quote: she said. “Soo Kyung…”), but otherwise I thought you did really well.
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
I really enjoyed your story, you got my hooked on you as a writer, so I will try and read your other stories too :D
Total: 86/100
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Thank you for the honest review Silver~ This review was done weeks ago, didn't have the time to post it up. :)
I wasn't hoping for a mark higher than 80, hehe. Lucky me.