| Fan Fiction |
by keerain
Warning : The reviewer has nothing against the author. This is just an honest and strict review which will help the author to improve himself/herself in the next attempt of writing a story. Please do not get angry if there any unpleasant comments.
Title: 4/5
Though the title ain’t that catchy and doesn’t grabs my attention if I were to see it in the main page, but it was a good choice of title which totally links up with the plot.
Poster/Background: 10/10
The poster’s lovely and I liked what you wrote in the poster. And so was the background, which doesn’t clash with the colour fonts.
Forewords: 9/10
The foreword’s great. I like how you start your forewords with a quote and it’s very catchy, it makes me want to know more.
Plot: 13/15
I liked the plot of your story, it’s something refreshing and what I don’t usually come across. It’s simple, yet enjoyable to read.
Creativity/Originality: 13/15
I’d say it’s quite original and creative to me. I liked how you start your chapters with a quote and then about Seungri and Minri’s past.
Flow: 9/10
The flow of your story’s good; from the very start of your story till the end. Not too fast not too slow. Well done.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
Wow, I don't know if its just me but I couldn't spot any spelling mistakes. But I did spot one or two grammar mistakes in the first two chapters. Bravo.
Characterization: 9/10
I also liked how you write about your characters. From how they communicate, what are they thinking; I could feel what they are feeling, I could feel that they are totally alive.
Writing Style: 8/10
Your writing style’s fine with me. Very neat and detailed.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I must say that I really enjoyed reading your story. To be honest, I cried a little whenever I read how Seungri felt. I just couldn’t stop reading it once I’ve start reading your story.
Sub Total: 90/100
Bonus: 5/5
Looking forward to read more from you (:
Total: 95/100
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[a/n] HAHA to be honest, i don't know what to call my story either XD hahah i thank everyone for their time, once again. XD