| Fan Fiction |
by mg6991**
Author: mg6991**
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/lies/
Status: completed
Reviewer: candycane
Title: 5/5
You picked a great title. It suited your story really well. Though the tiltle was quite unusual but since it suited the story, it made sense picking and using it..loltz
Poster/Background: 9/10
I really like your poster. Its plain and sweet. Same goes for your background, although if it was me, I wouldn’t have the background purple, I think black would have suited better..no offense, just my own opinion..but it suited the mood of your story. I really like the quotes on the background and poster, it helped to convey the mood.
Forewords: 9/10
I like your summary a lot. It looked so interesting, I was so looking forward to your story after reading it. You manage to describe a bit of your characters but it wasn’t really in depth..overall I think it was really good!!
Plot: 14/15
I like your plot a lot. How you made the lead character life’s from perfect to nothing. So cool!! Its really different from other stories, which made it fresh.
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
Most of your plot were pretty original. There were some parts that were a bit alike like some other fanfics. The part where her boyfriend left her and how she was adopted..though I really like the part that her brother started falling for her..yikes..unique much!!
Flow: 9/10
I think you wrote the story really well. It had links all the way through. You manage to convey the mood and feelings to the readers. Great Work!!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I think most of your story was perfect. There were a few spelling mistakes, not really obvious though…I’m amazed by your work really!! Excellante!! Keep up the great work!!
Characterisation: 9/10
You manage to bring out and describe the characters really well. Really impress!!! A good writer can alwayz bring out the characters personalities to make it seem real. Thumbs up!! :)
Writing Style: 10/10
I really like how you write your whole story. You manage to make the whole story sound real. The flow was good because of how you write the story!! Keep up the work!!
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Total: 92/100
I really like your plot, its different and unique. Keep up the work!! Can’t wait for your other works!!! Good Luck!! Love it!!!
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Yeah!! Got a high score!!! I love it!!