Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 10

I Think We Can't Be Friend Anymore From Now On

Enjoy
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In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Benny, Jessica, Annie and Tavia came in

Benny: Louis how ism Auntie??

Louis: She still inside

Michelle: Don't have to worry Louis. She'll be all right

Jessica: Michelle why do you with Louis??

Michelle: I...

Doctor: *came out*

Louis: How's my mum???

Doctor: She had cancer

Michelle: What?? Cancer???

Louis: Can she do an operation??

Doctor: No, she can't it was in the end of the cancer. She only has 1 month left

Louis: *nearly faint*

Michelle: Louis... *caught him back*

Louis: Can I go in and see her???

Doctor: Yeah

Michelle: Louis I come with you

Annie/Jessica: Michelle we've got something to tell you

Louis: You can stay here Michelle

Michelle: Oh

Louis: *went in*

Annie/Jessica: *dragged Michelle with them*

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Michelle: Let go me...What do you guys doing??

They let go Michelle

Annie: You said that you and Louis only friends

Michelle: Yeah

Jessica: Then why you always go with him??? You and him always together

Annie: What do you say Michelle?? How can we believe you?

Michelle: I and him...

Annie/Jessica: What???

Michelle: I cannot say it

Annie: Because you and him were a couple

Michelle: We're not

Jessica: Then tell us why you always with Louis

Michelle: I said it one more time we are not a couple

Jessica: Stop lying Michelle

Michelle: But...

Annie: Maybe we cannot be friend anymore

Michelle: But I and him...

Annie: We don’t' want to hear you lie again

Michelle: I'm not

They walked away

Michelle: Annie.... Jessica...err

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Tavia: Louis' mum were in the hospital

Raymond: How come??

Benny: She had cancer

Raymond: Are she all right??

Tavia: We don’t' know

Annie and Jessica back

Raymond: Lets' go and see her

Benny: Ok*they nearly get the door Benny turn back* Annie, Jess are you guys not coming??

They: NO!

Tavia: Oh common, Louis now really need someone beside to comfort. This is a good time for you guys to action

They: But...

Tavia: No but. Now common

Inside The Hospital-----------------------------------------

Michelle: Please Louis...

They came in: Michelle

Michelle: *turn around*

Raymond: Why are you here??

Annie: See, someone was already here beside him

Benny, Tavia and Raymond started at Michelle

Michelle: Benny Raymond please tell Louis to eat the some food. He didn't eat anything all day

Mrs Koo: *woke up*

Louis: Mum. no don't sit up. How do you fell??

Mrs Koo: Fine

Louis: Why don't you tell me that??

Mrs Koo: I don't want see you unhappy

Louis: Mum*holding his mum' hand*

Michelle: I want to make a call first*went out*

Annie and Jessica went home

Michelle: *went in to Sonija's room* Sonija, I begging you please wake up. Louis cannot loose you. Tai Ma (Louis mum) she had cancer. The doctor said that she only have 1a month left. Louis is going to loose his mum. If you go as well. Then Louis is very sad I don't want to see him like that. Please wake up*crying*

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Raymond: Charmaine

Charmaine: Raymond, let getting marry will we???

Raymond: Marry?? Are you kidding???

Charmaine: You don't want to??

Raymond: I...

Charmaine: You not love me??

Raymond: No but it's too early to get marry

Charmaine: But after married we can go to England to have a new live

Raymond: But...

Charmiane: Will you marry me or not??

Raymond: ok...

Charamine: Raymond*hug him*

At Home-----------------------------------------------------

Annie/Jessica and Michelle didn't talk to each other nearly a week

Gillian: What is going on here, can anyone tell me??

Annie: I gotta go now

Jessica: Me too*then they went out*

Michelle: *walked in her room*

Gillian: Michelle...

At Work-----------------------------------------------------

Guy: Wait! Wait!!

Annie: *opened back the lift*

Guy: *get in* Thanks

Annie: *weak smiled at him*

Guy: What's your name???

Annie: I'm Annie

Guy: I'm Kevin *nodded*

They out of the lift

Charmaine: Kevin over here

Kevin: Charmaine

Charmaine: Listen everyone this is Kevin my brother. She will come here and work with us. I want we have a great co-operation, ok???

Everyone: Ok*then they introduced themselves to Kevin*

Charmaine: Kevin I'll bring you in and see your room

Kevin: *followed Charmaine*

Girl: Wow he's very handsome

Gir1: I wish I could be his girlfriend

Tavia: Stop dreaming you two

Michelle: *ignored them just keep working*

After Work--------------------------------------------------

Tavia: Michelle are you come to the pub tonight??

Michelle: No I think I can't go tonight. Ok bye*then she left*

Tavia: What about you two???

Annie/Jessica: Ok

On The Road-------------------------------------------------

Michelle: Charmaine Steve???*She saw them. Steven tries to hold Charmaine's hand but she shoves her hand away. Then Steven kiss on her face* Uh! *The he drive away. Suddenly others people rushed up and pushing Michelle. When she looks back Charmaine was gone*
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In the next chapter, Raymond tells everyone that he and Charmaine getting marry next month. Michelle has a little conversation with Charmaine about her and Steven. Stay tune for the next chapter. Comment please.