Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 11

A New Doctor

Enjoy
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In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Mrs Koo: Michelle

Michelle: Auntie, how do you feel today??

Mrs Koo: Fine

Michelle: Oh I made some soup for you do you want some??

Mrs Koo: Ok

Michelle: *poring out the soap*

Jssieca/Annie: *came in* Auntie how do you feel today??

Mrs Koo: Common in

Jessica: You here as well

Michelle: Hi

They ignored her

Annie: Auntie we made some food for you

Jessica: Do you want to try??

Mrs Koo: Sure

Michelle: Jessica Auntie can't eat any too oil for food

Annie: Don't mind her

Jessica: *helping Mrs Koo sit up*

Annie: Let have a try

Michelle: Wai...

They pushed Michelle out of the way

Louis: *came in*

Michelle: Louis tell that your mum can't eat anything too much oil

Jessica: This not too much oil

Louis: Michelle's right, my mum can't eat anything too much of oil

Michelle: Drink the soup it's not too much oil in it

Louis: Yeah mum

Jass/Annie: *jealous*

After A wile they all went out

Louis: Jess, Annie you guys don't have to cook anything to my mum again. Michelle will do it

Annie: Why???

Jessica: Michelle can cook why can't we??

Louis: Because she know what to cook

Jessica: So do we

Annie: That's not fair

Michelle: Common Louis*pull him away*

At Home-----------------------------------------------------

Michelle: *came home* I'm home!!!

Gillian: Michelle over here

Michelle: What is it??*Took off her handbag and put down the keys*

Gillian: Jessica made the cookies. Let try how it taste

Michelle: O...

Jessica: My cookies they're too much oil in it. I don't like people touching my things without asking

Gillian: What??

Michelle: No, I'm too full, you taste it yourself*then Michelle took her handbag and her keys and went into her room*

Gillian: Jess what are you doing??

Jessica: Nothing

Inside------------------------------------------------------

Michelle: *gasps, quickly taking out the inhaler in her handbag out and put it in her mouth*

Gillian: Michelle..*Knocking on the door*

Michelle: *still gasping*

Gillian: Michelle! Are you all right??!!

Michelle: *opened the door*

Gillian: What took you so long??

Michelle: I'm changing

Gillian: Don't change, we going to have the dinner now

Annie: Gill only three of us go

Gillian: Why?? What about Michelle??

Jessica: She sad that she's full. Common*dragged Gillian away*

At Work-----------------------------------------------------

Raymond: *Charmaine standing beside her* I've got something to tell you guys

Benny: What is it??

Raymond: Charmaine and I will get marry next mouth

Michelle: *surprise*

Tavia: Really??

Raymond: Yeah....

After Work--------------------------------------------------

Michelle saw Charmaine and Steven together again. This time Charmaine saw Michelle as well

Charmiane: Hi

In A Restaurant---------------------------------------------

Charmaine: Me and Steven...

Michelle: I don't want to hear you explain. What about Raymond?? You two are getting to marry next mouth

Charmaine: Me and Steven is just friends

Michelle: I saw he kissed you. It's that mean friends? How can you do this to Raymond?? This not fair to him

Charmiane: I know

Michelle: You know??? Who'll you choose???

Charmaine: Of course Raymond

Michelle: Then you must have to tell Steven

Charmaine: I will

Michelle: It's time for me to go now*stood up*

Charmaine: Please don't tell anyone what you just tell me

Michelle: ...

Charmaine: Please*begging Michelle*

Michelle: *nodded and walked away*

Charmaine: *collapsed back on the chair*

In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Dr Chueng: Louis, this Charlene she will be your mum's doctor. She really good at cancer

Louis: Nice to meet you

Charlene: Nice to meet you too

Dr Chueng: Louis is really famous doctor in our hospital

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Cillian: Ed did you know we have a new doctor coming to our hospital today??

Edison: Who is it??

Gillian: It's a girl

Edison: Girl??*Surprise* Do she looks pretty??

Gillian: *put her hands on her waist and stared at Edison*

Edison: I'm just kidding*put his hand round Gillian*

Charlene: *saw Edison walking with a girl (Gillian)* Edison???
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In the next chapter Louis' mum dies. Please read on and comment.