Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 12

The Dating

Enjoy
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In the Hospital---------------------------------------------

Louis: Mum this is Dr Choi she will be your doctor

Mrs Koo: Hi Dr Choi

Charlene: Just call me Charlene

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At Work-----------------------------------------------------

Annie: *waiting for the lift*

Kevin: Annie*ran over*

Annie: Hi*then they went in the lift*

Kevin: Are you free tonight??

Annie: Yeah

Kevin: I have 2 tickets here but... Do you want to come???

Annie: Ok*went out the lift* See you later

Kevin: See ya*so happy* YES!!!!

In The Pub--------------------------------------------------

Raymond: Where's Michelle???

Gillian: At home

Raymond: Why don't she come down here??

Gillian: Because someone doesn't want her to come*look at Jessica*

Jessica: What?? I didn't tell her that she couldn’t come

Gillian: But your face tell her that you don't want her to come

Charlene: ED???

Edison: *turned around* Charlene??? Hi, when did you come back??

Charlene: Just last night

Louis: Hi Charl

Charlene: You're here as well??

Edison: You two met??

Louis: Yeah today in the hospital

Gillian: *pulling Edison’s T-shirt*

Edison: Let me introduce this is my girlfriend Gillian

Charlene: *sad* Hi

Gillian: Nice to meet you*shaking hand*

Tavia: Common sits down*move in*

After The Pub-----------------------------------------------

Raymond: *walking on the road and he saw Michelle* Michelle??

Michelle: Hi

Raymond: I thought you were at home

Michelle: *smile* Where are you going??

Raymond: Home

Michelle: Did Charmaine say anything to you??

Raymond: Say what???

Michelle: Ha??? Nothing

Raymond: My car over there

In The Car--------------------------------------------------

Michelle: I have a friend, she has a boyfriend and they were getting married. But one day I saw her went out with another guy. Then I asked her why??? She said that she and him only friends. But I saw they kissed. And she said that she would choose her boyfriend. Should I tell her boyfriend about that?? What do you think??

Raymond: You know her boyfriend???

Michelle: Yeah, should I tell him??

Raymond: Then tell him

Michelle: But I'm affair that he won't believe me

Raymond: Then don't

Michelle: But affair he will mad with me if he find out

Raymond: Then tell him

Michelle: I don't want to ruin their relationship. But If and don't tell him then my friend may choose that guy. Then her boyfriend wills really hurts

Raymond: *looking at Michelle*

Michelle: *notice* what???

Raymond: You like her boyfriend, doesn't it??

Michelle: Of course not

Raymond: But you really care for him. But who are they??

Michelle: You don't know them

Raymond; *stop the car*

Michelle: *get out* Bye

Raymond: See ya*drive away*

At Home-----------------------------------------------------

Michelle: *came in* Hi Gill

Gillian: Hi Michelle

Michelle: *came over and sat down* Where's Annie and Jessica??

Gillian: Jessica in her room and Annie went out with a guy called... what’s he name?? Yeah Kevin

Michelle: Kevin??

Gillian: You know him??

Michelle: Yeah he is my boss's son

Annie: *came home and went over to Michelle and Gillian*

Gillian: How's your dating??

Annie: What are you talking about??? We're just friends

Michelle: But did you have any feeling while you with him??

Annie: We really happy together, I can tell

Gillian: Do you think you want to move on??

Annie: Maybe

Michelle: I thought you like Louis

Annie: *stared at Michelle*

Michelle: I'm go and have a bath*went in her room*

Gillian: Are you wanted to move on?

Annie: I don't know*then she ran in to her room and locked the door*

2 Weeks Later----------------------------------------------

In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Mrs Koo: *fainted*

Jessica: Auntie...Doctor!!!!!!!!!!

Louis: *came* Jessica where's my mum???

Jessica: She's inside

Michelle, Annie and Tavia came

Michelle: Louis how's your mum???

Louis: She's inside

Charlene: *came out*

Louis: How's my mum???

Charlene: Sorry, we tried our best but...

Louis: Came in and see his mum, crying*
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In the next chapter, Annie went out with Kevin. Tavia and Benny fighting. Please read on nod Comment.