Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 14

Picnic Day

Enjoy
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They have a picnic today. Everyone come included Steven, Charlene and Kevin.

Annie, Tavia and Jessica were taking out the foods and the guys were turning on the fire.

Raymond: Come over and fry your foods now!

Others came over and sat down. Charmaine sit between Steven and Raymond. Michelle sat beside Louis and Jessica sat beside him. And Edison sitting between Gillian and Charlene

Charlene: This one is finished, Edison you eat la

Edison: Ha???*Affair that Gillian may cross with him* No thanks, you can eat it yourself

Charlene: Ah! *She burned her hand*

Edison: *noticed* Are you ok Charl??

Gillian: *put down her food* I'll go and get some drink*stood up*

Michelle: I'll go with you*then they walked away*

Steven/Raymond: Charmaine you eat this one*they give it to Charmaine at the same time*

Charmaine: I'm not hungry

Then they took it back and eat it themselves

Michelle: Are you ok Gill??

Gillian: Yeah

Michelle: But I saw you didn't really like Charlene sitting beside Edison

Gillian: She is his ex-girlfriend

Michelle: Really???*Surprise* you affair that they might go back together???

Gillian: You can see he still cares about her

Louis: *came* what are you two talking about???

Michelle: Girl's stuff. Now go over and fry something for me. Go*put her hands on Louis' shoulder and pushing him* Come Gill

Gillian: *followed Michelle*

Benny: What do we do after the picnic??

Tavia: Let's go and looking around??

Jessica: I'll go with Louis

Michelle: You get into trouble now*whispered to Louis*

Louis: Shut up*whispered back*

Benny/Tavia, Annie/Kevin and Louis/Jessica/ they all gone

Michelle: *tidy up*

Raymond: Let me help you

Michelle: Ok

Raymond: Why don't you go with them??

Michelle: I'm not feeling like to

Raymond: I'll g with you

Michelle: Where's Charmaine???

Raymond: Steven said that he got something to tell Charmaine

Michelle: You let her go with him but her own??

Raymond: What's the matter???

Michelle: Ha?? Nothing I'm just asking

Raymond: Common

~*~

Charmaine: Lat go me1*shoved her hand away* I told you we have to end it. Raymond and I getting marry next week

Steven: I don't think that you haven't got any fell with me

Charmaine: Steven we have to end it*try to walk away*

Steven: *pull her back and kissing Charmaine lips*

Charmaine: *trying to push him out*

Michelle: Let go over there

Raymond: Ok

Michelle: You and Charmaine...*she saw Steven and Charmaine kissing*

Raymond: What??*Try to turn around*

Michelle: Don't! *Stopped him*

Raymond: What???

Michelle: Lets' go over there

Charmaine: *pushed Steven out then she saw Raymond and Michelle* Raymond!!*Ran over to him*

Michelle: *staring at Charmaine with disappointment*

Raymond: You finished talking with Steven???

Charmaine: Yeah common let have a walk over here*they went over there*

Michelle: *sad face*

Steven: You like Raymond???

Michelle: Ha????

Steven: *weak laughed*

Michelle: Wai!

Edison: When do you go back to New York???

Charlene: I'm not going back

Edison: You stay here???

Charlene: Yeah...

Gillian: *feel that Edison not caring her anymore while Charlene's came back* Edison let's go back

Charlene: But I want to have a walk over there

Gillian: I'll go back myself then

Edison: Sorry*to Charlene* Gill waiting for me*ran after her*

Charlene: *walking behind Edison and Gillian*

Jessica: Louis what kind of a person do you want to be your girlfriend??

Louis: Em... Someone like you...

Jessica: That's meant you like me??

Louis: Ha??? Let's go back

~*~

Jessica: *whispering to Michelle* Louis said that he like me not you

Michelle: What???

Jessica: You jealous don’t it???*Evil laughed*

Michelle: *walked quickly over to Louis and dragged him away with her*

Louis: What do you dragging me here for???

Michelle: What did you say to Jessica????

Louis: Nothing

Michelle: Nothing??? She told me that you like her

Louis: What??? Oh no

Michelle: She now will think that she is your girlfriend now

Louis: What should I do?? Michelle helps me

Michelle: How can I help you?? Do it yourself*walked away*

Louis: Michelle! *Then walked back*

Jessica: Louis!

Louis: What???

Jessica: I got some drink for you

Louis: Thanks*took it*

Tavia: Wai Jess you treats Louis so good

Benny: You two...

Louis: Of...

Jessica: *nodded and smiling*

Louis: Michelle

Michelle: What???

Louis: Say something

Michelle: Say what???

Louis: You...

Raymond: What's wrong Louis???

Louis: Ha??? Nothing

Michelle: *burst out of laugh*

Annie: What so funny Michelle??

Michelle: Ha?? Nothing*but still laughing*

Louis: Shut up Michelle Yip
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In the next chapter is Raymond and Charmaine's wedding day but... What will happen??? Please stay tune for the next chapter. Comment please.