Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 15

A Wedding Without A Bride

Enjoy
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Wedding Day-------------------------------------------------

Raymond...they came to Charmaine's house. But where her dad live

Benny: *knocking on the door* Open the door!

Raymond: Charmaine!!!

Then a girl opened the door

Girl: I think you is Raymond Lam

Raymond: Yeah that me

Girl: Charmaine have a letter for you and she told me to give it to you

Raymond: *took the letter*

Louis: Open it

Raymond: *opened it*

Charmaine: Sorry Raymond I can't marry you. I'm so sorry. Hope you forgive me. Charmaine

Annie: OMG

Raymond: Where did she go???*Asking the girl*

Girl: I don't know

Raymond: What do you mean don't know?? HUH??!!

Girl: Let go me*then she went back into her house*

Edison: What happened???

Jessica: Did two of you fighting???

Raymond: No

Michelle: *mumbling* Oh, no how can she do this. She said that she would marry Raymond but now...

Raymond: What did you say Michelle???

Gillian: I hear you say something marry Raymond

Louis: Michelle did you knew something???

Michelle: I...

Raymond: Tell me*yelled at Michelle*

Michelle: One day I saw Charmaine went out with Steven and saw they kissed as well. But when I asked her she said that she would choose Raymond. I didn't know that she would go away with Steven

Tavia: When did you see them????

Michelle: A month ago*wannna cry*

Raymond: Why don't you tell me??

Michelle: She told me that don't tell anyone

Louis: Michelle

Michelle: Sorry Raymond I didn't mean

Raymond: *shook his head and walked away*

Everyone went as well

Michelle: Sorry *crying*

After that nobody talk to Michelle again

Michelle: *saw Raymond drinking she went over* Raymond

Raymond: Go away I don't want to see you

Michelle: Stop drinking

Raymond: None of your business. GO-AWAY!!!!!

Michelle: *went out and waiting for Raymond outside that pub*

Raymond: *went out hold a bottle of beer*

Michelle: Raymond

Raymond: *drunking and he fell*

Michelle: *went over and try to help him up*

Raymond: *but Raymond push Michelle out*

Michelle: *she fell and hurt her leg*

Raymond: I don't want to see you. Go away...*then he fell into asleep*

Michelle: *rang Louis and told him to come and take Raymond home*

Raymond went to the pub everyday and Michelle waiting for him everyday he went to the pub. But Raymond still don't forgive Michelle

At Home-----------------------------------------------------

Michelle: *went home with her hurting leg*

Jessica: I'm go to bed now

Annie: I’m go to bed*went in*

Michelle: Gill...

Gillian: *went in without a word*

Michelle: *sighed*

The Next Day------------------------------------------------

Michelle: Louis did he feeling better???

Louis: Raymond???

Michelle: Yeah

Louis: He just like that

Michelle: I didn't mean to hide it from him but...

Louis: I know...

Michelle: Louis I want to move out

Louis: Why????

Michelle: After that happened Annie, Jessica and Gillian no one talk to me. When they see me come home then they make an excuse to go away from. I don't want to live like this anymore

Louis: Do you find a place yet???

Michelle: No

Louis: Then come to the house that I brought it for my mum

Michelle: Ok

Louis: When do you want to move out???

Michelle: Tomorrow

Louis: That's fast

Michelle: I don't care I want to move out ASAP

Louis: I come and pick you up tomorrow morning

That night Michelle and Jessica have a big fighting.

In The Morning----------------------------------------------

Michelle: *all packed*

Gillian: *the first words after Raymond's wedding* Michelle are you really have to move out???

Michelle: Yeah

Gillian: But...

Someone: *ringing the doorbell*

Michelle: Louis*go and get the door*

Louis: Are you ready Michelle???

Michelle: Yeah

Jessica: Louis

Louis: What???

Jessica: She made Raymond now look like a ghost you still hanging around with her???

Michelle: Common Louis

Jessica: Wai! Do you have any manners??? I am talking to Louis

Michelle: Are you coming Louis?

Louis: Oh

Then Michelle moves out to Louis' mum's house
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In the next chapter, Raymond talks to Michelle again. Louis gets ready to go to France cause...Please read on and comment.