Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 16

Stupid Raymond!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enjoy
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Michelle: *put all her stuffs in her room* Finish at last *then she jumped on the sofa*

Louis: I'm going to France next week

Michelle: When are you coming back?

Louis: I'm going over there for one week. I'm going

Michelle: Bye

Louis: *went*

Michelle: What should I do now? Oh yeah shopping

In The Shopping Centre~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Michelle: *bought her stuff them went home*

That Night Outside the Pub~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Michelle: *waiting for Raymond*

Raymond: *came out drunk*

Michelle: Raymond

Raymond: *sat on the ground* You again?

Michelle: Will you stop drinking? You know we’re all really worry?

Raymond: Get away *trying to stand up*

Michelle: I know you're very sad cause Charmaine went. But don't you know that this is a good lesson? At least you know that she don't really love you. Long hurt why not short hurt? It's up to you if you want to be like this. I'm not coming here again to convince you anymore. You might think I'm a crazy person coming here convincing you every time

At Work~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Raymond: Hi everyone

Benny: Raymond.... am I dreaming you're back

Tavia: I'm very glad that you're all right now

Raymond *smiled and look over at Michelle*

Michelle: *saw Raymond looking at her but she look away*

Raymond: So where do ye want to have lunch today? I'll pay

Everyone: Yeah!!!!

At Lunch Time~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tavia: Aren't you coming with us?

Michelle: Ha? Ha? No..no I'm not going

Tavia: Fine *went*

In Hospital~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Charlene: Ed you want to have....

Gillian: *came in* Time for lunch!

Edison: I know. I'm waiting for you.

Gillian: Let's go

Edison: Wait! Charlene, do you want to come with us?

Charlene: Mmmmmm....

Gillian: Ed!!!!!!!!

Charlene: I don't think so

Gillian: Ed are you coming?!!!!!!

Edison: K then bye *went*

After Work~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Michelle: *walking*

Raymond: Michelle *went over to Michelle*

Michelle: Hi

Raymond: Where are you going?

Michelle: Home I think

Raymond: Then do you want to have dinner with me tonight??

Michelle: Who'll pay?

Raymond: Me

Michelle: Ok

After Dinner~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Raymond: Thank you

Michelle: Thank you me what?

Raymond: For convincing me last night

Michelle: You're welcome

Raymond: But I have a question to ask you

Michelle: What?

Raymond: Why did you cry last night?

Michelle: Did I?

Raymond; Yeah. Do you like me?

Michelle: Who said that I like you?

Raymond; Louis said *lying*

Michelle: *thinking "I didn't tell Louis that"* What if I really like you?

Raymond: Well then stop liking me. Cause I don 't want to start another relationship now

Michelle: Well listen up Raymond Lam I have never like you *went*

Raymond: Wait I'm only messing

Michelle: *already gone*

In Michelle's House~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Michelle: *very mad so she screamed* Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! *then she saw a picture of Raymond cause that's the picture they all took together. She put the picture down on the table* Stupid Raymond. If I Michelle Yip likes you then I'm not Michelle Yip.

At The Airport~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Louis: Please look after Sonija for me. Call me if there's anything wrong

Michelle: I know *gave Louis a hug* Take care

Louis: *went*
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In the next chapter, Charlene and Edison kiss and Gillian see them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Read on to find out what'll happen. Comment please.