Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 17

Kissing

Edison and Charlene will kiss each other in this story and Gillian will see it. What will Gill do??? Here it is~Enjoy~
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In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Michelle: Soinja Louis was goes over to France and see what he can bring back to awake you. He will back next week all right??...*after seeing Sonija Michelle went out and she meet Annie* Annie??

Annie: Hi Mich

Michelle: What are you doing here??

Annie: I just visit my friend. Sonija are she all right??

Michelle: Kind off. Louis was went over to France to see the patient that woke up after the car cash

Annie: Is it???

Jessica: *came out* Annie

Annie: Jess, Michelle's here as well

Jessica: I know I can see her

Michelle: I'd better go. Bye

Annie: Bye

Michelle: *went*

Jessica: HUH!

Annie: Jess

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Charlene: Edison today is my birthday. Can you go and have a dinner with me tonight??

Edison: Oh yeah today is your birthday, ok

Charlene: 7:00 at the old place, right??

Edison: No problem

Charlene: See you later*walked off*

Edison: Uh oh what about Gillian??*Ringing Gillian* Hello

Gillian: Ed??

Edison: Sorry I think I can't come with you tonight to watch the concert

Gillian: Why????

Edison: I have to stay back in the hospital tonight

Gillian: Ok then*sad voice*

Edison: Oh don't be sad. I promise will go with you and watch the concert again

Gillian: OK*then they hung up*

Edison: PHEW!

On The Street-----------------------------------------------

Raymond: Hi Mich

Michelle: *ignored Raymond*

Raymond: What's wrong???

Michelle: Are you talking to me?? You don't scare that I will fall in love with you???

Raymond: Oh I'm just messing with you

Michelle: Yeah right it's really funny huh?

Raymond: What should I do to make li tai sew je stops crossing with me??

Michelle: Then treat me a dinner

Raymond: No problem

Michelle: I want to go to eat seafood, then go over to...and eat sushi then......

Raymond: Wow that's a lot

Michelle: Are you go or not???

Raymond: Ok

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Gillian: *was so bored then she want to go to have a walk on the beach*

After the dinner Edison and Charlene have a walk on the beach as well

Edison: How's the dinner tonight???

Charlene: It delicious

Edison: Let have a sit*then they sat down*...

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Raymond: Wai where do you want to go now???

Michelle: Anywhere but not go home

Raymond: We don't have to go to work tomorrow. I know where we can go

Michelle: Where???

Raymond: You'll know*then they get in to the car and Raymond drove the car on the mountain. Then Raymond gets out of the car*

Michelle: *get out as well* Wai what are we doing here??

Raymond: To see the sun raise

Michelle: WHAT??! But it too early now

Raymond: Then we can wait

Michelle: *sighed*

At The Beach------------------------------------------------

Gillian: *was walking around and saw Edison* Ed??*And she saw Charlene sitting beside him as well then she walking over*

Charlene kisses Edison on his lips. He kiss her as well

Gillian: *wild her eyes*

Edison: *saw Gillian then he push Charlene out* Gillian!

Gillian: *so angry and try to run off*

Edison: Gill...!!!!*Ran after her* Listen to me*grabbed her arms*

Gillian: Let go me*her eyes full of tears*

Edison: Gill

Gillian: I know she is your ex-girlfriend and now she came back and you want to go back with her, doesn’t it??

Edison: No...

Gillian: You lied to me. You told me that you have to stay in the hospital and now YOU WNET OUT WITH HER!!!

Edison: Please listen to me today is her...

Gillian: GO away!! I don't want to hear any words from you again. Maybe we just break up, you need her than I*then she turned and walks away*

Edison: GILL!!!!

Early Morning-----------------------------------------------

Michelle: *was sleeping her head lean on Raymond' Shoulder8

Raymond: *woke up without wake up Michelle. Then he saw the sun rise*

Michelle: Opened her eyes* the sun raise already?? Why don't you wake me up??

Raymond: I saw you sleeping so deeply

Michelle: Where do you go now??

Raymond: Home

Michelle: Ok

Raymond: *smiled and drive off*
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In the next chapter, Raymond start feel like Michelle. Gillian now so mad with Edison she doesn't talk to him. Please read on and comment.