Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 18

Feelings

Enjoy
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Michelle: *went home and saw Gillian sitting near her door with sadness* Gillian what was happened???

Gillian: *look up at Michelle*

Michelle: *opened the door* Common in*lift her up and they went in the house*

Gillian: *sat down*

Michelle: Tell me what was happened??

Gillian: Michelle*then she hug Michelle and cry then she told Michelle everything she saw and said to Edison last night*

~*

Edison: *ringing the doorbell*

Annie: *opened the door* Ed??

Edison: *Ran in and looking for Gillian*

Annie: What is it?? What's up?? What are you looking at????

Edison: Do you see Gill????

Annie: Gill??? No, did she not go out with you last night??

Edison: *sighed and ran out*

At Michelle' House------------------------------------------

Michelle: What are you do now??

Gillian: I don't know

Michelle: *then Michelle's phone ring* Hello, Ed?? Are you looking for Gillian???

Gillian: *shook her head telling Michelle to tell Edison that she's not here*

Michelle: She's not here*then hung up* Why don't you let him know that you're here??

Gillian: I just don't want to talk to him now

Michelle: You look so tired let go in and have a rest

Gillian: *went into a spare room and sleep*

Few Hours Later--------------------------------------------

Michelle: *watching telly*

Gillian: *came out*

Michelle: You're wake??*Stood up and and pull Gillian over and they sat down* Are you feel ok now???

Gillian: Much better*low voice*

Michelle: Its so bored here lets' go out

Gillian: I don't want to go out

Michelle: Oh common, you have to relax don't lock yourself in the house all the time. Common go in and wash your face

In The Centre-----------------------------------------------

Gillian: *still look like a body without the soul*

Michelle: *saw Gillian like that* Where do we go now???

Gillian: Wherever you like

Michelle: Wow!! Look at his dolphin made of glass*then she pulls Gillian in and brought it*

Gillian: Michelle I really want to go home

Michelle: Oh...Raymond!!!*Calling him*

Raymond: *saw Michelle, Edison going with him* Wai!!!*Then they went over*

Raymond/Michelle: Hi

Edison: Gill

Gillian: Lets' go home Mich

Michelle: *don't know what to do*

Edison: Please let me explain*begging*

Gillian: If you not come home, I'll go myself then*walk away*

Edison: *follow Gillian*

Michelle: *shook her head with a sighed*

Raymond: Do you know that they had a fight last night?

Michelle: Of course I know

Raymond: What can we do two help them back together???

Michelle: Common!

Outside-----------------------------------------------------

Raymond: Where do you want to go now???

Michelle: Anywhere but not with you

Raymond: Do am I really ugly that you don't want to see me???

Michelle: Whatever

Raymond: But today is my birthday do you think you have to do something??

Michelle: O...*someone push into Michelle and the dolphin fell out and broke* AH!! *Pick it up* It's broke

Raymond: Then go in and buy another one

Michelle: This is the last one*upset*

~*~

Gillian: *walking on the road*

Edison: *still following her*

Gillian: *stopped walking and face-to-face Edison* Will you stop following me??

Edison: If you not to cross with me then I...

Gillian: There's no way

Edison: It's nothing

Gillian: I saw you kissed her and then you tell me it is nothing???

Edison: I know I'm not supposed to kiss her but...

Gillian: But you still love her that why you KISS her*angry face*

Edison: Sorry

Gillian: *walked away*

Edison: *sad face*

That Night--------------------------------------------------

On The Beach------------------------------------------------

Raymond: *came and saw Michelle very angry*

Michelle: *kicking sand into the sea*

Raymond: Michelle *went over to her* What...

Michelle: *turn around and start throwing sand at Raymond cashing him around*

Raymond: Hey stop it!

Michelle: *fell*

Raymond: *caught her in time*

And they look at each other for a while

Raymond: *kiss Michelle on the lips*

Michelle: *kiss him too*
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In the next chapter, Gillian will faint because she doesn’t eat these few days. There's something wrong with Sonija and she nearly die. But Louis not backs yet. What will happen? Please stays tune and comment please.