Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 20

Sonija Woke Up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enjoy
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Louis: How's Soinja???

Edison: She's really bad now

Nurse pushed Sonija out

Edison: Push her to #546 room

Nurses: Ok

Edison: Ok, catch you later*left*

Louis: I'd go and see Soinja now*trying to leave*

Jessica: *but Jessica pull him back*

Louis: What??

Jessica: I want to know who is she??

Louis: I don't have time to talk to you let go me*panic voice*

Jessica: You're not going anywhere if you not telling the truth

Louis: *getting angry* SHE'S MY GIRLFREIND, OK????!!!!!!!!!!!

Jessica: What do you yelled at me for?????*Her eyes full of tears*

Louis: Then stops fussing*then he left*

Tavia: Jess...

Jessica: *push Tavia out of the way and ran*

Everyone: Wai!! Jess!!!!!!!

~*~

Michelle: *standing outside saw Louis sitting near Sonija his eyes full of tears*

Raymond: Michelle*put his hand round Michelle*

Michelle: *lean into Raymond and cried*

Tomorrow----------------------------------------------------

Edison: *taking Gillian home from the hospital* my car's over here

Gillian: *followed then they met Charlene*

Charlene: Hi

Edison: Hi

Charlene: You taking Gillian home???

Edison: Yeah

Charlene: I'd better go see you then*went*

Edison took Gillian home

At Edison/Louis/Benny/Raymond's House-----------------------

Michelle: *ringing the doorbell*

Raymond: Opened the door* Michelle???? Common in

Michelle: *went in* Hi

Benny: *watching Louis*

Michelle: *looked over*

Louis: *drinking*

Michelle: Louis why are you drinking???

Benny: He won't listen to you

Michelle: *took away the wine from Louis*

Louis: WHAT ARE YOU DOING??? GIVE IT BAKC TO ME

Michelle: No!! Do you know what are you doing right now???

Louis: I'm do what's none of your business

Michelle: Sonija now still lying in the hospital. And you sit here drinking???? You suppose to in the hospital looking after her

Louis: Looking after her??? She's dying

Michelle: She’s not die YET. If you sit there and do nothing then she will die, I can tell

Louis: What do you want me to do???? If she not wake up today then she will die*sad*

Michelle: You know say it today if Soinja not wake up today then she will die. But today is not over yet. Common listen to me go in and wash your face then go to the hospital

Louis: *nodded and went in*

Edison: Well done Michelle

Benny: Louis really listens to you

Michelle: Of course...*suddenly Michelle gasping*

Raymond: Michelle what's the matter???

Michelle: *quickly took out the inhaler and put it into her mouth*

Raymond: Are you ok???

Michelle: Yeah I'm fine don't have to worry

In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Sonija: *grapping Michelle's hand*

Michelle: Sonija???? You're awake????????*Then she press the button on top of Sonija's bed* Thanks god you're awake

Sonija: *looking at Michelle*

Michelle: I'll go and call the doctor wait for me*ran out then she met Edison out* Edison Sonija she awake

Edison: Really???

Michelle: I go and tell Louis now. Common go in and see her

Edison: *went in*

Michelle: LOUIS!!!!!!!!!!

Louis: What so happy Mich????

Michelle: You know what??? Sonija she awake????

Louis: Really???* A big happy expression on his face*

Michelle: Common goes and sees her

Louis: *gave Michelle a hug* Thanks*Then he left*

Raymond: *Saw that a sad expression on his face*

Michelle: *saw that* Raymond

Raymond: You and Louis....

Michelle: *smiling* I tell you a secret

Raymond: What is it???

Michelle: Louis - Is -My -Brother

Raymond: What???

Michelle: *nodding*

Raymond: But Why......

Michelle: Because he doesn't want his mum knew it. We're same dad but different mums

Raymond: Oh

Michelle: Now you don’t have to worry about Louis and me...

Raymond: What are you talking about?? I didn't worry about you and Louis*lied*

Michelle: You lied I and see the expression on your face while you saw Louis hugged me

Raymond: No I'm not

Michelle: Yeas you did*they repeat it many times*

5 Hours Later-----------------------------------------------

Louis: How are you feeling Son?

Sonija: *still couldn't speak yet. She nodded*

Louis: Good

Edison: *came in*

Louis: What did the report say??

Edison: the report said that Sonija was fine now. But she must need to do a lot of exercise

Louis: Ok

Edison: Catch you later then*went out*

In Annie/Gillian/Jessica's House----------------------------

Michelle: Sonija she woke up

Annie: Really???

Gillian: When????

Michelle: Just this afternoon

Gillian: I could imagine that Louis is really happy right now

Michelle: Yeah

Annie: Shh..

Jessica: *came out*

Gillian: Hi Jess

Michelle: I have to go now

Annie: Ok bye

Michelle: Bye*stood up*

Gillian: Bye

Michelle: Bye Jess*then she left*
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In the next chapter, Sonija can go home. Michelle move back to Gillian' house. And Louis organise a party to celebrate Sonija could go home. By the way, Louis wants Gillian and Edison go back together as well. Please read on and comment.