Fan Fiction |
by LISA TRAN
In these few days Louis stayed with Sonija to do the exercises. Edison said that Sonija could go home 3 more days.
Michelle: *Came in* Louis, Hi Sonija
Sonija: Hi Michelle
Michelle: How are you??? Better??? I hope so
Louis: *sitting beside Sonija on the bed* Are you not go to work today???
Michelle: No I'm off today. Gillian said that they come here to see Sonija in minutes
Gillian, Benny, Annie, Raymond and Jessica came in: Hello
Michelle: They're come
Sonija: Hi
Then they introduced themselves
Michelle: When do Sonija can go home????
Louis: 3 more days
Gillian: Louis your girlfriend looks too pretty
Sonija: Really??
Gillian: Yeah
Annie: Where do you stay when you can go out the hospital???
Michelle: Of course she stays with Louis. And I, I will move back to your house
Annie: Really??
Michelle: Um Uh
Sonija: Jess are you all right?? You look too queit
Everyone: *looked at Jessica*
Jessica: I gotta go, see you then*left*
Sonija: Did I say anything wrong???
Louis: No, it's ok, don't worry
In The Car Park---------------------------------------------
Benny: Where do we go now????
Louis: I want to go home
Tavia: Go home?? But OI don't want to go home yet
Michelle: Then you can stay with Benny*push her into Benny*
Edison: WAI!!*Ran over* Where are you guys going to go??
Raymond: We don't know yet but Louis wanted to go home
Edison: Can I join???
Benny: Sure
Gillian: I want to go home too, see yeh*then she left*
Michelle: Gill!! What's wrong with her???
Louis: Aren't you talking back to each other???
Edison: Yeah but...
Louis: Ok bye*he left as well*
At The Party------------------------------------------------
Raymond: Common goes over and talks to her
Edison: But...
Michelle: But what???
Benny: Edison your ex-girlfriend wants you
Edison: Charlene???
Tavia: Yeah, she over there
Edison: *looking around*
Raymond: *shrugged*
Michelle: Don’t look at me
Benny: You have to finish off yourself
Edison: *went over to Charlene*
Michelle: There Annie and Kevin*then went over*
Annie: Wai
Kevin: Hi
All: Hi
Kevin: Where's Louis I want to see her girlfriend
Tavia: There, they over come
Kevin: Louis
Louis: Kevin
Kevin: I think you Sonija Louis' girlfriend
Soinja: Nice to meet you
~Music on~
Benny: Common let dance
Michelle/Raymond, Annie/Kevin, Tavia/Benny, Gillian/Edison, Loui/Sonnija
After The Dance---------------------------------------------
Edison: Listen everyone!!! I've got something to tell you guys
Raymond/Michelle: What is it???!!!!!!!
Edison: ...*then he comes down to Gillian* Will you marry me?????
Everyone: OOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooo
Charlene: *have a shook*
Gillian: *didn't say anything only stared at Edison*
Annie: Common Gill
Tavia/Benny: Say yes
Michelle: Go Gillian.... *everyone says it as well*
Edison: Ha???
Gillian: *smiling*
Edison: Will you marry me???
Gillian: *nodded*
Edison: YES!!!!!*Lift Gillian up and twirl her around*
Gilian: Put me down
Charlene: Congratulation
Gillian: Thanks
Charlene: *phone rang then she left*
Everyone: *cheery*
Gilian: RAYMOND!
Raymond: What???*Gave him a shock*
Gillian: What is that????*Pointing at his watch*
Annie: Oh Michelle has it as well*raise Michelle’s hand up* See
Louis: Oh two you...
Michelle: What??? You can be with Sonija. Why can I not be with Raymond??
Louis: I didn't say anything
Sonija: Stop kidding with her
Tavia: When do you two want to get marry???
Benny: Yeah
Edison: If you want you can marry in the same day with us
Michelle: Not that fast. I'm only went out with him 3 months
Gillian: So??
Michelle: So
Benny: At first I thought Michelle is Louis girlfriend
Michelle: *smiling*
Louis: Let me tell you, Michelle is my sister
Everyone: What????
Annie: Why don't you tell us???
Michelle: Cause we don't want Louis' mum knew about this
Benny: Why???
Louis: Because we're same dad but different mums
Tavia: All right
Benny: Kevin do you find Charmaine yet??
Raymond: *raise his eyebrow*
Tavia: *pushed Benny by her shoulder*
Michelle: *looking at Raymond*
Kevin: No not yet
Charmaine: *ran in* Raymond!!!!!
Everyone: *turned around*
Raymond: Charmaine????????
Charmaine: *sad looking*
Raymond: What's going on????
Michelle: *looking at Charmaine the look over to Raymond*
Charmaine: *hug Raymond*
Raymond: *shock*
Michelle: *wild her eyes*
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In the next chapter, Charmaine was fainted and Raymond brings her to the hospital. Raymond stays back looking after Charmaine. Michelle see that she feel jealous but pretend she didn't see anything. Will Raymond g back with Charmaine or stay with Michelle???? Please read on and comment.