Fan Fiction |
by LISA TRAN
Charmaine: RAYMOND!!! * Then she ran over and hugs Raymond in a sad mood*
Raymond: *shock*
Michelle: *wild her eyes*
Kevin: Ca je!
Charmaine: *faint*
Then they brought her to the hospital
In TEH hospital~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kevin: Doctor is she ok?
Doctor: She faint because she's too tired and WE ITHINK THAT she's have a kidney disease
Raymond: Do she need to do something to cure it?
Doctor: We don't know we have to wait to for the report. Maybe she'll need to have an operation
Kevin: Thanks Doctor
Doctor: *went*
In Charmaine's Room~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Charmaine: *open her eyes*
Kevin: *help her up* How are you?
Charmaine I'm all right
Tavia: What happened? Where's Steven?
Benny: T=Yeah where's Steven?
Charmaine; *start to cry*
Gillian: Stop crying tells us what happened?
Charmaine: He didn't love me. He only tricked me. He loved me cause of money...
After A While-----------------------------------------------
Everyone decided to go home but Charmaine grapped back Raymond's hand
Charmaine: Raymond stays here with me. I've got something o tell you
Raymond: I...
Michelle: *looking at Raymond*
Charmaine: Please
Raymond: Ok
Louis: Michelle
Michelle: Ha?????
Sonija: Are you ok??
Michelle: *glanced at Raymond then looked away* I'm fine
Louis: Then common
Raymond: *whisper into Michelle's ear* I'll call you
Then she went out
Raymond: *walked over and sat down beside Charmaine*
Everyone went home except Michelle she stayed back waiting for Raymond
Raymond: What do you want to tell me????
Charmaine: Sorry
Raymond: Sorry about what????
Charmaine: If I not believed Steven that he love me then I won't ran away if I'm not run way then I won't hurt you
Raymond: Oh, don't thinks about it anymore. It's just over
Charmaine: Did the doctor tell you that I got kidney disease??
Raymond: Yeah, but don't worry you'll be all right
Charmaine: *then she hug Raymond*
Michelle: *shock, she standing outside and saw Charmaine hugged Raymond again*
Charmaine: *cry again* I don't want to die. I really don’t want to die
Raymond: You're not dying. You'll be ok?? *Then pulled Charmaine away from him* Believe me
Charmaine: I felt so guilty that I ran away from our wedding day
Raymond: I just told you just get over it
Charmaine: Can we just start over again??
Raymond: Ha????
Charmaine: *she hug Raymond again* I really need. I don't want to loose you again. Please stay with me
Michelle: *standing outside heard everything*
Raymond: *looked up and saw Michelle standing outside *pull Charmaine out* Now let lie down and have some sleep the doctor said that you need a lot of rest*lift Charmaine down*
Charmaine: Don't go
Raymond: I'll stay here with you tonight. Now close your eyes
Charmaine: *closed her eyes*
Michelle: *try to leave*
Raymond: *ran out* Michelle *grapped her hand* Listen to me I...
Michelle: I understand you don't have to explain. She stills our friend she need our help
Raymond: *smiled* I'd stay here tonight
Michelle: Ok, I'm going home now
Raymond: I'll call you when you go back home ok??
Michelle: Ok*then she left*
In Michelle's Room------------------------------------------
Michelle: *she awake all night. Sitting at her bed and staring at the phone wait for Raymond to ring her but the phone didn't ring all night*
The Next Day------------------------------------------------
Annie: Michelle we go to see Charmaine after breakfast are you coming????
Michelle: Ha?????
Gillian: Michelle are you ok?? You look so tired. Aren't you sleeping last night???
Annie: How can she sleep, Raymond now staying with Charmaine at the hospital...
Gillian: Annie
Annie: Uh oh, sorry Michelle
Michelle: It's ok
In The Hospital---------------------------------------------
Gillian, Annie and Kevin came in: Charmaine
Raymond: Gill, Kev, Ann
Charmaine: Hi
Kevin: How're you feeling today??
Charmaine: Fine
Raymond: Where's Michelle?? WHy don't she come with you guys??
Gillian: She sad that she feeling not well so...
Raymond: What's wrong with her???
Annie: She's fine
~*~
Michelle: *walking around places. She looks really bad. Thinking about her and Raymond then Raymond and Charmaine then three of them*
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In the next chapter, Michelle got something o tells Raymond. What is it??? Please stay tune for the next chapter to find out. Comment please.