Fan Fiction |
by LISA TRAN
In the Hospital---------------------------------------------
Michelle: Sonija
Sonija: Michelle
Michelle: *walked over to her* How are you doing??
Sonija: Fine, but the doctor said that I still need a lot of exercise
Michelle: That's not bad. Where's Louis?? He not stays with you??
Sonija: No he just go and get a drink for me
Michelle: Louis!!!
Louis: Michelle??? What are you doing here????
Michelle: I missed you so I came here to see you. Are you not want to see me??
Louis: Course not
Michelle: I'm just messing with you
Louis: here your drink Sonija
Sonija: *took it* you can go and do your work now
Michelle: I’ll stay here with Sonija
Louis: Ok, if something wrong just calls me right? *Then he left*
Michelle: Common lets' have a work
Sonija: Ok*then went out to the yard*
Outside The Yard--------------------------------------------
Sonija: *staring at Michelle*
Michelle: *notice* What????
Sonija: You look sad, what's wrong tell me?
Michelle: Nothing wrong
Sonija: Oh common
Michelle: *weak smiling* it's truth there's nothing...*then she saw Raymond and Charmaine. They're talking and laughing and joking* Lets' go somewhere else*try to walk away*
Sonija: *made she stop* you sad because Raymond hanging around with that girl??
Michelle: No...It’s just...
Someone bumped into Charamine and she fell into Raymond
Raymond: Are you ok???*Helped she up*
Charmaine: Yeah
Raymond: You hurt your hand. Is it hurt???
Charmaine: Not really
Raymond: Lets' go in and...*he looked up and saw Michelle standing there watching them*
Michelle: Common*pulling Sonija way*
Raymond: Michelle*ran over to him*
Michelle: *stopped and folding her arms but not looking at Raymond*
Raymond: Michelle I...
Charamine: *fell again* Raymond *calling him*
Michelle: Come over to her she calling you. Common Soinja*walk away*
Raymond: *try to run after Michelle but..*
Charmaine: Raymond
Raymond: *then he went over and lift her up*
Charmaine: Lets' go in
Raymond: *nodded, he bend his head over to look at Michelle then he went in with Charmaine*
Few Hours Later---------------------------------------------
Raymond: *came and looking for Michelle. Then they both of them went out* Where do you want to go???
Michelle: Anywhere
Raymond: Then lets' go and watch a movie
Michelle: Ok*they holding hands*
Raymond: *then he went in and brought the tickets*
Michelle: What's it on???
Raymond: 7:30
Michelle: But there’s an hour till the movie. What do we do??
Raymond: We can go somewhere and eat something
Michelle: Ok
Raymond: Common*then Raymond' phone rang* Hello, are she ok now???? Ok I'll come now*hung up*
Michelle: What's that???
Raymond: Charmaine fainted in the hospital. She wants to see me.
Michelle: You want to go and see her but we brought the tickets..
Raymond: I'll be back here before the movie start ok??
Michelle: Promise??
Raymond: Promise*then he left*
Clock: 7:30
Clock: 8:00
Clock: 8:30
Michelle: *phone rang* Hello, Raymond???
Raymond: Sorry Michelle I think I can't come. Sorry. I gotta go, I'll call you later ok??
Michelle: O...*Raymond hung up before Michelle finish her sentence*
5 Days Later------------------------------------------------
Michelle: *she felt really mad now. Raymond didn't come and see her about five days*
Gillian: MICHELLE LOUIS HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Michelle: *went out*
Louis: Michelle
Michelle: *sat down* Louis
Louis: What???
Michelle: I want to go back to Canada
Louis: What???
Gillian/Annie: You want to go back to Canada??
Louis: Why???
Michelle: Cos I don't want to stay here
Annie: Because Raymond???
Michelle: Don’t remind him
Louis: I’m not allow you to b=go back to Canada
Michelle: Why not???
Gillian: Michelle please don't leave
Michelle: Why not????
Louis: I affair that no one look after you that's why I told you to came back to Hong Kong. Now you want to go again??
Michelle: Because of your words that’s' why I'm felt really hurts right now. You know that I like Raymond when I was young. But he didn’t like me. He only treats me like a friend. Just a usually friend.
Raymond: *try to ring the doorbell but he hear Michelle's voice then not ring the doorbell he standing here eavesdrops*
Michelle: It's really hard that I could forget about Raymond and start a new life over to Canada. Then you wanted me to go back here. Watching him goes out with another girls. Did you know how much I hurts*her eyes full of tears* Now, I can have him and stay with him but now...*close her eyes and took a breath deep then opened her eyes again*
Louis: Why don't you tell Raymond hoe you feel while he with Charmaine???
Annie: Yeah
Gillian: I can see that Raymond love you
Michelle: I hope it will real but it's hard to...I just don't want to stay here. Not in one second...
Raymond: *heard everything but he didn't come in he just left*
That Night--------------------------------------------------
Michelle: *calling Raymond out to the beach*
Raymond: Ok
At The Beach------------------------------------------------
Michelle: Raymond!!*Sitting on the beach waving at him*
Raymond: *went over and sat down beside Michelle*
Michelle: It's really fresh here
Raymond: Yeah*not rally happy*
Michelle: How's Charmaine???
Raymond: she's fine
Michelle: *nodded with a smiled on her face* Raymond...
Raymond: Michelle I've got something to tell you
Michelle: What is it???
Raymond: ...
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What did Raymond want to tell Michelle and what does Michelle want to tell him??? In the next chapter, Edison/Gillian and Sonija/Louis's wedding day. Please read on and comment.