Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 24

Stay Back

Enjoy
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Raymond: My parents were split up when I still very young. That's why I swear to myself whether I find someone I shall live with her forever and ever and never split up. I don't care what will stop us be together but I'll never give up. Michelle...

Michelle: I'll go to Canada after Louis' wedding. I was thought about it very carefully. I think we have no fate to stay together*stood up*

Raymond: Michelle*caught her hand*

Michelle: *took Raymond' hand away and walking away*

Raymond: *stood up and yell* Give me time!!!!! I will prove it to you that whom am I loving!!!!!!!!!!!

Michelle: *but Michelle still walking farther and farther*

At Home-----------------------------------------------------

Tavia: There she is

Michelel: Wai*happy expression* Are you guys waiting for me??

Gillian: Michelle come over and sit down*

Michelle: *sat down* what???

Benny: Annie told us that I decided to go back to Canada, doesn't it??

Michelle: Yeah

Gillian: Why???

Edison: Because of Raymond that why...

Michelle: No it just my own suggestion 'cos no one

Gillian: You're living very happy here why do you want still want to leave??

Michelle: I wanted to try to live with my own and start a new life

Edison: But Michelle..

Michelle: Ok, there's about a month left? I felt a little tired. I go to bed first*stood up and walk into her room as fast as she can*

Others: Michelle...*sighed*

Michelle: *inside* Phew!!

At A Place (where you can take a wedding picture with the wedding clothes on)

Gillian: How do I look??

Michelle: Beautiful

Gillian: Really???

Sonija: Annie can you put this on for me??

Annie: Coming

Tavia: *cam in* Wai the manager tell you guys to go out now

Annie: Common let's go

Outside-----------------------------------------------------

Edison: Wow Gill you're look so beautiful today

Louis: So did you Sonija*then they start to take the pictures*

In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Michelle: *saw Raymond and Charmaine but she pretend to not seeing them*

Charmaine: Michelle!!!

Raymond: *turned over*

Charmiane; Common

Michelle: Oh Hi

Charmaine: What are you doing here??

Michelle: I...

Gillian: Michelle!!*Ran over* Where’s the report??

Michelle: Is it this one??

Gillian: Yeah thanks*then ran back in*

Michelle: I'd better go now

Charmaine: Ok bye, Raymond let's go over here*out her hands round Raymond’s arm*

Raymond: *looking at Michelle walking away*

Michelle: *phone rang* Hello Louis???

Louis: Michelle I forgot the report at home. Can you go back and get it for me???

Michelle: again???

Louis: Any problem??

Michelle: No, I'm going home now

Louis: Ok*hung up*

At Home-----------------------------------------------------

Michelle: *put her handbag on the table where you put your wines, beer... and then she when into Louis' room and searching the report. Hello report, where are you???*Looking around, suddenly she gasps. Put her hand on her chest, breathing hardly. Then she fell backward and tried to stand up and went out to get her handbag. She reached it and unfortunately she kicked the stool and fell down. The bag fell away over to the sofa. Michelle tries to reach it. Still gasps*

Raymond: *went home* Michelle????*Saw her lying on the floor* What's the matter??*Life her up*

Michelle: The bag...

Raymond: *then Raymond got the bag and took out the inhaler and gave it to Michelle*

Michelle: *she feeling better*

Raymond: Are you all right now??

Michelle: Nodded then Louis rang her again*

Raymond: Stay here I get the record for you*then he walked in and walked out* Common*lift Michelle up*

After A while-----------------------------------------------

Raymond: Where do you want to go I'll take you there?

Michelle: No, it's fine. Bye

Raymond: Bye*sad expression*

Michelle: 8coughing*

Raymond: *ran over* Are you sure you'll be ok??

Michelle: Yeah*still coughing*

Raymond: Common*dragged Michelle into his car* Get in*then he walked in as well and driving the car away* Where do you want to go??

Michelle: Dunno

Raymond: Are you hungry??*Coldly*

Michelle: A little

Raymond: the lets' go and eat something first

In The Restaurant------------------------------------------

Waiter: Can I help you???

Raymond: What do you want to eat???

Michelle: I want...

Raymond: I want...

Waiter: Ok

After The Meal----------------------------------------------

Michelle: Raymond you really don't have to stay with me

Raymond: No it's ok *then Raymond phone rang again* Charmaine??

Michelle: *angry face, she walking away*

Raymond: *Hung up* Michelle*ran after her*

Michelle: Now go to the hospital and stay with your girlfriend

Raymond: She's not my girlfriend. I just treats her like my friend that all

Michelle: Is it???*Not believing face*

Raymond: You can come with me to the hospital

Michelle: No thanks, I'm busy*then left*

~*~

Tavia: *wanna to sick*

Benny: Are you ok???

Tavia: Yeah

Benny: Let's go home instead

Tavia: Ok

Benny: Are you sure you ok???

Tavia: Yeah

Wedding Day-------------------------------------------------

Priest: You Louis Koo......

Louis: I do

Priest: You Sonija Kwok....

Sonija: I do

Priest: You Edison Chen...

Edison: I do

Priest: You Gillian Chung....

Gillian: I do

Priest: Now put on yours rings

They’re all on their vacation. The aeroplane that Michelle going to on there's something wrong with it Michelle has to stay tills it fixed
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In the next chapter, Michelle nearly got car cash. Tavia has to stays in the hospital. Why??? Please read on and comment.