Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 28

Don’t Leave Me

Hope Michelle will be ok. Here is it ~ENJOY~
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Gillian: *rushed in* Michelle...Michelle she got stuck in the lift

Everyone: What???

Louis: Michelle might got an asthma in the lift

Tavia: *get out of bed* what should we do????

Benny: Don't worry too much Michelle has the inhaler with her. I don't think she'd in dangerous

Tavia: Oh God, the inhaler is now in your hand

Benny: *realize* Oh yeah

Sonija: Common

~*~

Charmaine: I feel a bit hungry

Raymond: Lets' go eat something first

~ALARM SOUND~

Kevin: What is that sound???

Charmaine: Is that fire alarm??

Everyone: *running around*

Raymond: *saw Louis, Sonija, Benny, Tavia and Gillian rushing to the lift* Louis!! Common *to Charmiane and Kevin. They went over*

Others: Raymond

Raymond: What's going on???

Gillian: Michelle got stuck in the lift

Raymond: What???*Shock*

The lift fixers coming

Men: Out of the way...*they trying to open the lift*

Raymond: How can Michelle get stuck in the lift???

Everyone: *shrugged*

Inside The Lift---------------------------------------------

Michelle: *(standing) breathing hardly, banging at the door* Help...*she said weakly*

Raymond: Common fixers*anxiously*

Charmaine: *watching Raymond, how worrying, how scaring, how anxiously Raymond expressions*

Michelle: *coughing* please open the door...*wanted to faint then Michelle flashback while she with Raymond. The tears running down from the eyes*

The fixers opening the door

Raymond: *Rush to the door and try hardest to open the door. No matter what'll happen in his mind only want to get Michelle out of the lift*

~The Door Opening~

Michelle: *staring at Raymond*

Raymond: *stared at Michelle as well*

Michelle: *then Michelle fell down*

Raymond: Michelle...*calling her* Michelle*he ran in and lift Michelle up*

Louis: Call Dr Cheung

Gillian: *went*

Michelle: *haft faint half wake*

Raymond: Please Michelle don't die. I cannot live without you. Don't leave me. Please you wake up you could give up everything even my lift...

Michelle: *not really hear what Raymond has said then she fainted*

Charmaine: *standing outside heard everything*

Kevin: Charmaine, are you ok??

Charmaine: I'm fine*then she left*

Kevin: *followed*

In Michelle's Room------------------------------------------

Everyone went home except Raymond

Michelle: *opening her eyes but still looking pale*

Raymond: Michelle...

Michelle: I'm death???

Raymond: No you still alive you're not death

Michelle: *tried to sat up*

Raymond: * helped her up and his tear dropped down Michelle's hand*

Michelle: Raymond

Raymond: After this I realize that I couldn't live without you. When you were fainting. I thought that if anything that happen to you. I will not live in this planet myself. You will go with you

Michelle: *crying* Raymond*hug him*

Raymond: Michelle*hug her too*

A Month Later-----------------------------------------------

Tavia: Wai Michelle are you all right??

Benny: You look really quiet*

Gillian: Don't tell me that you and Raymond break up again??

Michelle: Don't say his name in front of me! *Sharply*

Jessica: Hi Everyone

Gillian/Tavia/Michelle: Jess*gave Jessica a hug*

Michelle: You look so different

Jessica: More pretty??

Gillian: You're always look pretty

Jessica: Really?? Let me present this is Bowie

Others: Hi

Bowie: Hi *shaking hand*

Sonija: Common come over and starts the dinner

Tavia: Common

Everyone sat down

Michelle/Raymond: *pick up heir chopsticks and about to get the piece of meat at the same time*

Michelle: It's mine!

Raymond: I got it first!

Others: Hey! What's going on with you two again??

Michelle: He made me waiting for him nearly two hours without a call

Raymond: I did call you but no one hearing

Michelle: You liar

Raymond: I'm not

Michelle: Yes you are

Annie: Excuse me; I think I have your phone Michelle

Michelle: Ha??*Took out the phone* this one is not my

Annie: That's my phone your one is here. It has load of messages*they swap back*

Raymond: See I'm not lying

Michelle: So, it's still your fault. You not suppose to let me waiting for you

Louis: Can you two just leave the argue a side

Michelle: Fine then
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