Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 3

Disappointment In Love???(Sat Luen)??

Enjoy
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After Work--------------------------------------------------

Annie: Where do we go now??

Tavia: Pub???

Benny: Fine to me

Jessica: Me either

Tavia: Michelle are you coming???

Michelle: Ok

At The Pub--------------------------------------------------

Michelle: Louis over here*waving at him*

Louis: Sorry I'm late

Annie/Jessica: Louis sit over here

Louis: No thanks, I have a place here*then he sat down beside Michelle. If Louis sat over there with Annie and Jessica then he has to sit between them*

Raymond: *ran in, in hurried* Sorry I'm late*pick up the beer and drank it*

Michelle: What took you so long???

Benny: Nonsense

Tavia: Of course he have to took Charmaine home first

Louis: Charmaine who??

Annie: Our boss's daughter

Louis: Raymond are you went out with her??

Jessica: Louis! *Pushed him*

Louis: What???

Jessica: *look at Michelle*

Michelle: What??*Touching her face*

Jessica: *whispering to Louis* everyone knew that Michelle like Raymond now you...

Raymond: *heard it* what did you just say??

Michelle: Wai Jessica Hsuan who said that I like-him*stared at Raymond*

Jessica: But..*Pointing around*

Raymond: Wai, aim’s I that bad??

Michelle: No you is really really bad

Raymond: Aye

Everyone: *laughed*

Raymond: *phone ring* Hello...

Tavia: Oh it's Charmaine checking where Raymond is ooooooo

Raymond: *stood up and walked away to talk to Charmaine*

Michelle: *drinking the beer*

Louis: Michelle stops drinking. You drink too much tonight*took away the bottle from Michelle*

Benny: Wow Louis you treats Michelle too good. Some people here want to...

Jessica/Annie: *hit Benny at the back of his head* Shut your mouth Benny

Benny: a ya, that’s hurts,

Jessica: If you open your mouth again-

Annie: -you hurt even more

Benny: Tavia they bullying me*put his hands round Tavia' arm and put his head on her shoulder*

Louis: Cut it off Benne

Everyone: Ewe hu duc mao a li

Tavia: *smiled*

Raymond: *back* what are you guys talking about*sit back*

Everyone: *laughed *

But Michelle doesn't happy from now till the end of the pub.

After the pub everyone went home. Now is Annie turn to reserved the sit at the front of Louis car

At Home-----------------------------------------------------

Gillian: Hi *sitting in the sitting room read her book*

Michelle: I'm go and have a bath first*went in*

Gillian: Michelle...what's wrong with her??

Annie: I don't know but she too quiet tonight in the pub

Gillian: Do you think something was going on to her??

Jessica: I think she's in love

Gillian: How do you know that??

Jessica: A woman only worries about 2 things, first is money and second is love. You can see that she didn't worry about money then is must be love

Gillian: Do you think she disappointment in love (sat luen)?

Annie: She didn't go out with anyone yet. Then how can she disappointment in love???

Gillian: You're right

Jessica: If you guys want to know then go in and ask her

Gillian/Annie: Oh yeah

Jessica: You guys have no brain

Gillian/Annie: You're the one*then push Jessica and she fell on the sofa*

Jessica: Wai! Wait for me

Michelle's Room---------------------------------------------

Michelle: *notice that three of them standing outside* Common in

They went in and sat on Michelle's bad

Michelle: *putting the cream onto her face* yours faces showing me that you guys have something to ask me

Annie: Gill you ask

Gillian: No, Jess you ask

Michelle: *finished putting the cream on her face and turn around face to them* what is it????

Jessica: Are you all right??

Michelle: Of course I'm fine. Why???

Jessica: But we saw you today very different than everyday

Gillian: Are you disappointment in love??(sat luen)

Annie: If you does then tell us. Don't hide it inside. That's not good to you

Michelle: Are you three crazy?? I'm disappointment in love??(sat luen) I didn’t go out with anyone yet. How can I disappointment in love??(sat luen)

Annie: See told you

Jessica: But....

Michelle: No but. Now you three go out and go to bed. I'm feel so tired today *pushing them out*

Together: But we didn't finish yet

Michelle: Have a good night*then close the door after her*

Together: Michelle....

Michelle: *inside, sighed*
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In the next chapter, Raymond asks Michelle to go out with him because.... Because of what?? Please stay tune for the next chapter to find out. Comment please.