Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 4

What Type Of A Person Do You Like???

Enjoy
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In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Louis: Hello Son. How are you today??*Putting the bunch of flowers in to the vase* I brought your favourite flowers, rose. You like it???*Put down the vase on the table*

Sonija: *lying there on the bed*

Louis: *sat down beside her* you have to wake up*holding her hand* you have to. I'll wait for you to wake, ok??

Michelle: *opened the door and went in with the flowers in her hands*

Louis: *dried the tears quickly* Michelle

Michelle: *put down the flowers* How is she today??

Louis: Just like normal

Michelle: Don't worry too much. She will awake*put her hands on Louis' shoulder*

Louis: *nod* I know

Michelle: Common, lets' goes out and relax. Did you know your face look really bad when you sad??? If Annie or Jessica sees this they will immediately stops liking you

Louis: *staring at Michelle*

Michelle: *weak laugh* I'm just joking. Don't worry Sonija I keep an eye on him for you

Louis: I'm gonna kill you if you say one more word

Michelle: *put her hands around Louis' arm* I know my brother always handsome

Louis: Certainly

Michelle: *laughed with Louis and they went out*

Outside-----------------------------------------------------

They met Annie and Jessica

Michelle: *whispering to Louis* I seem you like in trouble right now

Annie/Jessica: Louis

Louis: Hi

Annie/Jessica: Michelle why are you here???

Michelle: What?? Nothing I'm just has something to asked Louis. I'm going now

Louis: *whispering to Michelle* Are you going to leave me with them???

Michelle: *whispering back* you're doctor. You have enough smart to deal with this. Ok see you guys later*left*

Annie/Jessica: *ran over*

Louis: Are you two looking for me??

Annie/Jessica: I've got 2 tickets to go and see the movie to night

Louis: What???*Not really wanted to go*

Annie: Wai, do you want a fight now?? I asked him first

Jessica: I asked him first

Annie: No you didn't

Jessica: Yes I did

Annie: No you...

Louis: That’s enough*a tricked face*

Annie/Jessica: *they stared at Louis with fear*

Louis: *then smile* Let me see the tickets

Annie/Jessica: *gave Louis their tickets*

Louis: Wow, that's good you two got a same tickets then we can go together

Annie/Jessica: Ok*put their hands round on each Louis' arms*

Louis: *In his head “I put myself foot intro this chapter. God please help me" making a funny face*

At The Cinema-----------------------------------------------

Gillian/Edison: *handed hand buying the tickets*

Gillian: Here Louis, Annie and Jess

Edison: Hi Louis

Louis: Hi*not very please*

Gillian: You with...

Louis: Yes

Gillian/Edison: *nodded and tries to not laugh*

Annie/Jessica: Common it's time to go in now*they keep pushing each other away from Louis*

Louis: See*walking in*

Gillian/Edison: *walking at the back, giggling but in a low voice*

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Raymond: Michelle!!!!

Michelle: Raymond???

Raymond: hi

Michelle: Are you looking for me??

Raymond: Yeah I have 2 tickets here to go to see the cinema

Michelle: You want to ask me to come with you??

Raymond: At first, I want to go and watch it with Charmaine but she said that she have to go to a Ball so...Are you want to come??

Michelle: That's why you asked me to go with you???

Raymond: Yeah

Michelle: *not very pleased with this*

Raymond: Common

After the Cinema--------------------------------------------

They all meet each other’s at the end of the movie outside the cinema

Tavia: Raymond and Michelle...

Raymond: Stop think into another way. ME and her are just friends

Benny: Really???

Michelle: Of course, do you think I choose him to be my boyfriend??? Don't even think about it

Raymond: Uh I didn't want you to be my girlfriend either

Gillian: Michelle I didn't see you go out with any boy. What type of a person do you want to be your boyfriend????

Edison: Common Michelle tell us

Michelle: Em...He have to be tall, handsome, have fringe, tan and care about me

Everyone looking at Raymond

Michelle: What???

Raymond: Are you talking about me???

Michelle: You??? Uh*walked over to Louis* I like a person like Louis

Louis: Me????

Annie/Jessica: Michelle are you going to reserved Louis us me???

Michelle: Of course not, I just say that I love anyone like Louis

Annie/Jessica: That's better

Louis: *shove his arms away and stand beside Michelle

Michelle: *smiled*

Benny: Common let go somewhere to eat. I'm starving right now

Tavia: Me too

Raymond: Where do you want to go???

Gillian: Lets' go and eat seafood will we??

Everyone: Ok
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In the next chapter is about Raymond and Charmaine. Please read on and comment