Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 5

Asthma

Enjoy
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At L, E, B and R's House------------------------------------

Edison: Raymond when did you and Charmaine start????

Louis: Thanks for reminding me

Raymond: What???

Louis: What..?? You didn't tell us that you have a new girlfriend

Benny: Yeah Raymond

Edison: Don't know who always said that we are best friends

Raymond: I know it was my fault. Sorry ok??

Louis: You can't get it over within the word sorry

Edison/Benny: Yeah

Raymond: Then what do you want???

Edison: I have a question and really wanted to ask you

Raymond: What is it??

Edison: I just want to know that Charmaine is your 4th or 5th girlfriend

Benny: Or 3rd???

Louis: You all wrong. I know the answer

Edison: What is it???

Benny: Common Louis

Louis: Em...

Raymond: I'm gonna kill you if you tell them

Edison: Common Louis

Louis: Common goes in to my room and I tell you

Benny: Ok*they trying to run in*

Raymond: No Louis*try to stoop them*

Benny: Don't mind him

Edison: Go on Louis*they chasing each other around the house*

After A While-----------------------------------------------

They all sat down

Edison: Please Raymond tell us

Louis: This his 9th girlfriend

Raymond: Louis!!!

Louis: What?? We just care about you

Benny: Yeah

Edison: Louis, is it Raymond dumps them or they dumps Raymond??

Louis: Mostly they dump him

Benny/Edison: *laughed*

Raymond: Stop laughing

Louis: Oh don't angry. Charmaine suit you than them

Edison: Yeah

Raymond: Aye, I'm not wasting my time talking with yeh about this. I'm going to bed

They laughed even more loudly

At Work-----------------------------------------------------

Tavia: Wai, Benny told me that Charmaine is Raymond the 9th girlfriend

Jessica: Really??*Handing her the profile*

Tavia: But mostly they dumps Raymond than Raymond dumps them

Michelle: What are you guys talking' bout???*Put her hand on Jessica' shoulder*

Annie: They talking about Raymond

Michelle: Raymond????

Suddenly Charmaine came in with Raymond

Everyone stoop up: Charmaine

Charmaine: I've hot something to tell you

Michelle: What is it??

Charmaine: Raymond you tell them

Raymond: We start to build a company in Xuon Hoi.

Tavia: Xoun Hoi???

Charmaine: Yeah and we decided Michelle to go up there and follow this case for our company

Michelle: Me??

Raymond: Yeah

Michelle: How long do I have to stay there???

Raymond: About a month

Michelle: A month that a bit long

Charmaine: If no one object then Michelle...

Michelle: I refuse

Charmaine: Why???

Michelle: Why do you have to choose me? Why it cannot be Jessica or Annie????

Charmaine: You don't have to know why. Beside you work me and you have to do anything I tell you to do so except you are not work here*then work in to her room*

Michelle: Errrrrrr*angry*

Tavia: Michelle don't be like this

Annie: Yeah a month is not a long time

Jessica: Yeah we always on your side

Michelle: Thanks

Tavia: Then we must have to had a party for Michelle tonight

Michelle: No...it's grand

Annie: Ok we go to Raymond's house to recognize the party

Jessica: Ok let back to work

After work everyone went to Raymond's house and have the party

Raymond: Charmiane do you think you don't have to shout at Michelle today???

Charmaine: It wasn't my fault. Are you go out with me or talking about her??

Raymond: Ok, where do you want to go now???

Charmaine: Let me think...Em...now we go to have the dinner and go and watch the movie then go up to the mountain

Raymond: Wow that too much things..

Charmaine: Are you go or nor??

Raymond: Ok go...

Charmaine: Common

On The Mountain---------------------------------------------

Charmiane: The sky so lovely tonight

Raymond: If you want then we can go here again the next time

Charmaine: Ok *then they started kissing*

In R, L, B and E's House------------------------------------

Michelle: Did Raymond tell you when did he come back???

Benny: No Why??

Tavia: Are you missing him???

Michelle: I miss him??? Rubbish*but between 1 or 2 minutes Michelle at the door once a time*

Louis/Edison: 1,2,3

Edison: Yes I win

Louis: *have to drink the beer*

Raymond came home

Michelle: Raymond

Raymond: Wow whose birthday today??

Annie: You look very happy when you see Raymond came back

Raymond: Really??? Are you missing me??

Michelle: Elk, I wanna sick

Gillian: This party is for Michelle she has to go to Xoun Hoi tomorrow

Michelle: Raymond let eat some food or drink

Raymond: No...I'm too full now. I want to have a bath8went in*

Michelle: *went into the toilet suddenly she have a Asthma. She couldn't breath. Michelle tries to reach the handbag and get out the...(I don't know what is this call but it help you can breath again) then Michelle went back out*

Gillian: *look at Michelle quietly sat on the sofa alone* Michelle are you ok??? You didn't feel like well

Louis: What???*Worrying* Michelle are you sick???

Michelle: No I'm fine

Louis: Common I'll bring you home. You have go to the airport tomorrow early.

Michelle: Ok

Jessica: But we want to stay here a bit later

Louis: Ok see you, common Michelle
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