Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 7

Happy Birthday

Enjoy
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In The Pub--------------------------------------------------

Louis, Edison and Gillian arrived

They: Hello everyone

Raymond: Charmaine*stood up* this is Louis, Edison and Gillian

Charmaine: Hi

They: Nice to meet you*shaking hands with Charmaine then sat down*

Raymond: Louis and me knew each other when we were young

Louis: wai Raymond

Raymond: What???

Louis: Your girlfriend look so pretty and nice

Charmaine: *smile*

Raymond: Of course*put his hand round Charmaine*

Charmaine: Oh yeah Louis, where is your girlfriend???

Louis: I...

Raymond: He haven't got one yet

Charmaine: What??? It's unbelievable, you handsome, kind and nice how can you not have one yet???

Louis: Really??? I'm handsome??

Charmaine: Yeah

Benny: But there has 2 people sitting here waiting for him to choose them

Annie/Jessica: Shut up Benny Chan

Benny: What I'm just telling the truth thing

They stared at him

Benny: Ok ok ok

Charmaine: *smile* Are you guys always like this??

Raymond: Yeah they always like to argue when they meet each other

Tavia: Where do we go after this??

Edison: Lets' go and have a good dinner tonight

Gillian: Why???

Edison: Today is Raymond' birthday

Charmaine: Really??? Why don’t' you tell me???

Raymond: Do you think you have to give me my presents???

Annie: We already prepared it. We give you after the dinner

Raymond: Fine

Jessica: Common lets' go now

After The Dinner--------------------------------------------

Everyone giving his or her presents to Raymond

Louis: Raymond this is my one and this Michelle's one. She gave it to me at the airport

Raymond: Thanks

Charmaine: But I didn't have a present for you today

Raymond: It's ok

Benny: You can buy him one tomorrow

Tavia: Yeah

Jessica: Let see what Michelle got for you Ray

Raymond: *opened it* Its a watch

Gillian: Wow it lovely. I wish someone could buy me one

Annie: Edison, you hear it?

Edison: Hear what???

Tavia: Gill wants you to buy her that watch

Edison: Which watch???

Gillian: Don't talk*angry, drinking her drink*

Louis: Oh I think Ed he a bit tired today. Lets' go home. It's too late now

Gillian: Ok*stood up*

Outside-----------------------------------------------------

Benny: Tavia I'll take you home

Tavia: Ok, Bye

Everyone: Bye

Edison: Gill I'll bring you home

Gillian: No thanks, I go home with Annie ku ti*then she left with Annie and Jessica*

Edison: Gill!!!

Raymond: Ok see you guys at home

Charmaine: Bye

Ed/Louis: Bye

Raymond: Louis*look over to Edison*

Louis: I know what to do

Raymond: Common Charm

Louis: What are you doing tonight??

Edison: Nothing

Louis: Nothing??? Ok I won't force you if you don't want to say. But one thing you must to say

Edison: Say what???

Louis: Sorry you Gillian. You made she sad

Edison: But...

Louis: No but

Edison: But how do I make she happy back???

Louis: Aye*shook his head and walking away*

In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Girl: Gill someone put the flowers here for you

Gillian: Me???

Girl: Yeah, I have to go now. Talk to you later

Gillian: *pick up the flowers*

Edison: You like it???

Gillian: This flower is you give it to me???

Edison: Sorry I know last night is my fault

Gillian: You want me to forgive you only gave me this flowers??

Edison: Of course not. Look*show Gillian the watch*

Gillian: When did you buy it???

Edison: Let me put it on for you

Gillian: Ok

At Work-----------------------------------------------------

Charmaine: *received a bunch of flowers and a card. It was Steven. She went over to Steven' room*

Steven: Come in

Charmaine: What do you mean???*Throw the flowers into Steven*

Steven: You know that I love you ages ago

Charmaine: And you know that I'm not love you

Steven: I don't think that I will loose for that Raymond. I don't know how can you love that person. I don't think that you cannot get your heart from Raymond Lam

Charmaine: I say it one more time. I won't love you
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Oh no, Steven tell Charmaine that he love her. What will she do???
In the next chapter, Louis gets car cash. Will he be all right?? Stay tune for the next chapter. Comment please