Fan Fiction |
by LISA TRAN
Charmaine: *came out from Steven's room*
Raymond: Charmaine
Charmaine: Ray..Raymond???
Raymond: What happened?? Your face look really frighten
Charmaine: Ha?? Nothing
Steven: *came out from his room* Hi Ray
Raymond: Hi
Charmaine: *not dare to look into Steven's face*
Steven: *look at Charmaine smiled* I gotta go now. See ya. Bye Charmaine
Raymond: Common Charm
Charmaine: Oh
In The Car Park---------------------------------------------
Benny: Raymond!!!!
Raymond: What???
Benny: Are you come to the pub tonight??
Raymond: Charmaine??
Charmaine: No I want to go home
Raymond: Ok, I'll take you home. Benny I'll take Charmaine home first
Benny: Ok, see you later
Raymond: Common Charm
In The Pub--------------------------------------------------
Raymond: *came in and sit down* Where's Louis??*pick up the beer and drink it*
Edison: He said that he not coming tonight
Jessica: Why???
Edison: *shrugged*
Raymond: Wai, both of you...mu xi la
Edison: Mu xi
Gillian: Michelle called and said that she coming back tomorrow night
In The Hospital---------------------------------------------
Louis: Sonija look what did I brought for you. It's a ring. You like it??? Let me put it on for you, right??*Put it on for Sonija and grabbed a book from the table* what chapter do we on??? Let see. Oh chapter 17*and start reading it*...
In The Pub--------------------------------------------------
Gillian: Edison Do you know the girl in SMO ben fon??
Tavia: Which girl??
Gillian: She's name is Sonija Kwok
Annie: Who is she???
Edison: She got a car cashed 2 years ago and got brought in there. She is Louis' patient
Jessica: Did she wake up??
Edison: No she unconscious after the operation
Gillian: But I saw Louis so care for her
Tavia: Of course she is Louis' patient
Gillian: No he treats and cares her very different than others people
Jessica: You mean they dau ye??
Gillian: I’m not sure but...
Edison: You believed her??
Gillian: It's truth
Raymond: If you guys want to know then why don't you go and ask Louis??
Benny: I'll call him. He turned off his phone
Tavia: Maybe he at home
Benny: No one there
Tavia: If Gillian said everything is truth then Louis must be at the hospital
Raymond: Then lets' go and see is him there
Outside The Hospital----------------------------------------
Jessica: Louis! *Calling him*
Louis: *was on the opposite side of the road* WAI!!*Waving at them and try to cross the road. Suddenly, a big car rushing up. It seem like the car was out of control*
Everyone: LOUIS WATCHES OUT!!!!!!
BANG!!!!!!
Louis: *lying on the road*
Annie: OMG
The Next Day------------------------------------------------
Everyone came and visits Louis: Good morning Louis
Louis: Hi *his leg was broken*
Annie: Are you ok???
Jessica: How's your leg??
Louis: I'm fine now
Gillian: Michelle said that she coming back tonight
Louis: All right
Everyone looks isn't really happy
Louis: Common cheer's up. I'm fine now. You guys face look really bad when you sad. Michelle said that to me
Edison: He know to joking then that mean he fine now
Louis: Are you guys not going to work today??
Benny: OMG
Tavia: Today is Sunday
Raymond: Do you think there is something wrong with his brain??
Benny: Edison I think you must have a serious check and see his brain is ok or not???
Everyone: Yeah*catching Louis*
Louis: Wai..I said I'm fine now. Let go me
That night--------------------------------------------------
Michelle: *loc ky then she call to Gillian* Hello it's me. I'm back now
Gillian: Michelle???
Michelle: Yeah. Where are you guys now???
Gillian: In the hospital
Michelle: Hospital???*Walking faster* Why???
Gillian: Louis got a car cashed last night
Michelle: Ha! Louis got a car cashed??? Are he ok now??
Gillian: Yeah he fine but he broken his leg
Michelle: No I'm just not too fon sam. I'm coming to the hospital right now*hung up and went out of the airport and try to get a taxi. Then Michelle goes directly to the hospital. She got out of the car and start running then she fell and hurt her ankle. But Michelle ignored it and goes to Louis' room. She opened the door* Louis*ran over* Are you all right???*Take off her handbag*
Louis: Yeah I'm fine
Michelle: *touched his leg* Li hac xi nor la
Louis: *smiling I'm fine now don't worry*
Michelle: Yi...Your mum said that she coming here tomorrow
Louis: Tomorrow??
Michelle: Yeah
Annie: Michelle
Michelle: What??*Turn around*
Jessica: What happened your ankle??
Louis: Ha?? Let me see
Michelle: I just hurt it on the way to the hospital. I'm fine
Raymond: Are you sure??
Michelle: Yeah. What time is it??*Look at her watch* Ha 12 o'clock now?? You guys must go home now
Everyone: WHAT??
Annie: What about you??
Michelle: Of course I have to stay here look after Louis
Jessica: But so did you have to go to work tomorrow
Michelle: I'm not go to work tomorrow. Stop asking. Now go home
Louis: Michelle you don't have to stay here with me
Michelle: Now the only thing you can do is having some rest. Lie down
Benny: Fine then. See you tomorrow Louis
Annie/Jessica: Bye Louis
Louis: Michelle you real...
Michelle: Lie back down!
Louis: Ok ok ok
Everyone left
Michelle: *stay here all night with Louis*
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In the next chapter, Steven tries to kiss Charmaine on the lip. Louis's mum comes to Hong Kong. Michelle find out that the watch she gave to Raymond now is on Charmaine's wrist. Stay tune for the next chapter.