Fan Fiction

What Can I Do To Make You Love Me????(Completed)

by LISA TRAN

Chapter 9

Mrs Koo

So hi there people hope you'll like this chapter
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The next day------------------------------------------------

Louis: *woke up* Michelle

Michelle: Ha??*Woke up too* you're woke??

Louis: I want a drink

Michelle: Ok *pored out the water* Here you go

Edison: *opened the door* Hi Michelle

Michelle: Hi

Edison: How are you today??

Louis: Better, of course

Michelle: *smiling then her phone ring* Hello. Yeah ok one minute. Louis your mum

Louis: Hello, yeah I'm fine ok, ok bye

Edison: Your mum Louis???

Louis: Yeah

Michelle: What did she say??

Louis: She arrived here in 10 minutes

Edison: Ok, nor hou chu ye la. Bye

Louis/Michelle: bye

Edison: *went out*

Louis: Michelle goes home and washes your face, right??

Michelle: What about....

Louis: I'll be fine don't worry

Michelle: Ok see you later*went out*

At Work-----------------------------------------------------

Charmaine: ok end of the meting

Everyone went out

Charmaine: Raymond, can you come with me to meet Mr Chueng??

Raymond: I can't I have a meeting right now with Mr Kwok. Steven you'll go with Charmaine

Charmaine: Him??

Raymond: What's the matter??

Steven: Ok

Raymond: See you later *kissed Charmaine on her cheek before he left*

Steven: Can we go now???

Charmaine: *not very pleased*

After The Meeting-------------------------------------------

Charmaine: Wai! Where do you want to bring me?? Stop the car!

Steven: *he drove Charmaine up to the mountain*

Outside-----------------------------------------------------

Charmaine: What do you think you doing??? Take me back to the company

Steven: See, the view is very nice here

Charmaine: I’m have no time to standing here with you

Steven: Anytime that I free I always go up here

Charmaine: Steven I said…

Steven: *kiss on her lip*

Charmaine: Um…*try to push Steven out. Then she kissed Steven too*

After The Kiss----------------------------------------------

Charmaine: OMG, what am I doing??

Steven: Common lets’ go back down

Charmaine: *went back to the car without a word*

In The Hospital---------------------------------------------

Michelle: Louis see who ‘s come??

Louis: Mum!

Mrs Koo: Louis

Louis: Why do you come here??

Mrs Koo: I missed you that why I come down here

Michelle: I make a call…See you later

Mrs Koo: Are you ok??

Louis: Yeah

Mrs Koo: I’m so worry about

Louis: Oh you don’t have to worry. Michelle will look after me

Mrs Koo: She’s your girlfriend??

Louis: Ha?? No she is not my girlfriend

Mrs Koo: Really????

Louis: Yeah

Mrs Koo: But I can see that she is really caring about you

Louis: Of course we know each other when we were young

Mrs Koo: Whatever

2 Weeks Later-----------------------------------------------

Louis: I rented this house for you. You like it??

Mrs Koo: Yeah it’s really nice

Louis: I’ll bring your suitcase into the room for you *took the suitcase and brought it in to her room*

At Work-----------------------------------------------------

Michelle: *was talking to Annie and Jessica*

Charmaine: *came out* Annie photo copy this for me *handed the file to Annie*

Annie: *took it*

Michelle: *saw the watch that she gave it to Raymond now was on Charmiane’s wrist* Why…

Charamine: This?? Raymond gave it to me

Michelle: He gave it to you???

Charmaine: Yeah*then walked away*

Michelle: *so angry*

After Work-----------------------------------------------------

Michelle: *met Raymond in the car park*

Raymond: What do you want to ask me??

Michelle: I gave the watch to you. Why are you gave it to Charmaine??

Raymond: Oh the watch. The watch is for a girl how can I wear it

Michelle: *rolled her eyes* that watch is for boys and girls. If you don’t want it then you can tell me don’t have to give it to somebody else*then she left*

Raymond: Wai…*shook his head*

In Mrs Koo’s House------------------------------------------

Michelle: *ringing the door bell*

Mrs Koo: *opened the door*

Michelle: Hi is Louis here???

Mrs Koo: No he gone out buy some stuff for me

Michelle: Oh

Mrs Koo: Common in

Michelle: Thanks

Mrs Koo: Sit down

Michelle: *sat sown*

Mrs Koo: 8gave a cup of tea for Michelle*

Michelle: Thanks

Mrs Koo: Where did you work???

Michelle: I work in a company about houses

Mrs Koo: That’s not bad *suddenly Mrs Koo squeezing her stomach. She looks really painful*

Michelle: Auntie are you ok??? What…

Mrs Koo: 8she fainted*

Louis: *came back* Michelle*ran over to his mum* what happened???

Michelle: I don’t’ know she just fainted

Louis: Call the ambulance

Michelle: Oh
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In the next chapter, Charmaine ask Raymond to marry her. Louis mum has cancer.
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