Fan Fiction

I Will Never Give Up *COMPLETED*

by Carmen Yip

Chapter 11

Unfaithful?

Gallen Lo Ka Leung as Jerry
Flora Chan Wai San as Fion
Melissa Ng Mei Hang as Mona
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

(Morning) (At airport, Fion just back from her trip) (Suddenly a man sneaks behind her)

MAN: (Blindfolds her) Guess who I am?

FION: Hey, you… (pushes his hands away…) You… (surprised) Hey, when did you come back? Did you inform Lik Hang?

MAN: (puts his hands around his shoulders) Come on, let’s talk as we go…
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

(At night, in pub) (Around 8 p.m.)

JERRY: (sees Mona) Hey, Mona, why are you here again?

MONA: (drunk) (sobs) He… He had met with an accident… (cries loudly) He is dead… (puts her head on Jerry’s shoulders)

JERRY: (shocked) WHAT! (Puts his hands on her heads and stroke her slowly) Don’t be too sad, it’ll be alright… It’ll be alright.

MONA: (lifts her head up and lifts cup) Come, have a drink with me…

JERRY: Ok, (lifts her cup up) Cheers.

(they continue for about half an hour until both are really drunk)

MONA: (puts her head on his shoulders again and cries) WHY? Tell me why is heaven making a fool out of me? Why? Why…

JERRY: (puts his hand on her back, stroking her to console her) Alright… It’ll be alright, come on, let me send you home… (suddenly Mona kisses Jerry on the cheek)

(Fion was stunned when she saw this. She just entered the pub and stood near the entrance, watching them from a distance. Her heart starts to sink. She simply can’t believe her eyes.)

JERRY: (taken aback) You are really drunk… Let me send you home…

MONA: Home? I have no home now… His wife came to look for me last night…

JERRY: Huh? Then where are you staying at now?

MONA: My luggage is still at his place, I’ll collect it tomorrow and rent a place temporary…

JERRY: Emmm, what about tonight?

MONA: I don't know… (Continues to cry)

JERRY: (Empathizes with her) Why not stay over at my place tonight? I have a spare room. (gives her a smile)

MONA: (Gratefully and smile in return) Thank you… Let’s go…

(They stood up and put their hands on each others’ shoulders for a support. They are both walking unsteadily and laughing in a silly manner. As they approached the entrance, Fion turned her head against them. They walked out of the pub and hails a taxi. Fion chases out and hails a taxi to follow them. Their taxi stops in front of Jerry’s apartment and they went up. Fion stood under the building and looks towards Jerry’s unit. Soon, the lights are off.)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

PS: Oh no, is Jerry being unfaithful to Fion? How would Fion respond to this? Mona seems to like Jerry... Or is that just purely misunderstandings? Will they really break up? And who's the man? How is he related to Fion?