Fan Fiction |
by Carmen Yip
(Fion comes back home, with her eyes wet, walking towards the sofa) (Louis is sitting on the sofa, watching TV)
LOUIS: (eyes still sticking to TV) You’re back? (hears her crying) (turns around, walks towards her and holds her) What’s wrong, Fion? Don’t cry… Come, sit down. (helps her to the sofa)
FION: (Continues to cry) Louis… Louis…
LOUIS: What happens?
FION: (She just shakes her head constantly and refused to reveal anything) Don’t ask…… (Louis hugs her tightly)
(after half an hour, she starts to calm down and get out of Louis’ arms) (10.30p.m.)
FION: Louis, please keep this from Lik Hang.
LOUIS: (in a concern tone) What actually happened?
FION: I…… (Lik Hang returns)
LIK HANG: (sees Louis) Ah Hong!!! (surprised) When did you come back?
LOUIS: Gor… (walks towards Lik Hang) I just came back this morning, and met Fion at the airport, so we returned together… (hugs his brother) Why are you so late?
LIK HANG: Oh, I have a proposal to complete, so I stayed at the office…
(Fion walks to room)
LOUIS: Gor, I’m a bit tired… I’ll talk to you tomorrow… (follows Fion into her room)
FION: (sees Louis at door) What’s the matter? Come in.
LOUIS: (walks in and shut the door behind him) What actually happened, Fion?
(They sit on the bed to chat) (Fion tells him all about her and Jerry, and asks for his opinion.)
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(some background info)
Louis, Fion and Lik Hang have been childhood playmates, practically growing up together… They got along well, especially Fion and Louis, they went to the same primary school, and has been very close friends.
Fion would ask Louis for help and advice whenever she got any problems… She would not talk to Lik Hang because he always don’t have an eye for detail, and don’t care about trivial matters, unlike Louis, who is always so considerate. Since young, Louis has always cared about Fion, because he loves her much. Fion knows that well, but instead she fell for Lik Hang, who is talented and always excels in work.
8 years ago, when Louis was 20, he went to England to further his studies and upon his completion he continues to work in a hospital as a psychologist. The partial reason of his choice was that Fion has started a relationship with his brother. All these years in England, he had not have any girlfriends in England because he can’t forgets Fion.
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LOUIS: (sighs) How did you get into all these troubles? (shakes his head and walk to the table, with back facing Fion)
FION: (looks at Louis’ back, then look down and cries again) I know I’m certainly in the wrong… But since things have come this far, I know I can’t just back out… What should I do, Louis?(Louis had turned around facing her, she look helplessly into his eyes)
LOUIS: (Sighs) Why not you just break up with Jerry? And I’ll keep this from Ah Gor…
FION: (Cries a bit louder) Do I… really have to do that? Louis?
LOUIS: (unhappy) You can’t bear to part with him? Fion Ah, now he is the one who did you wrong… (turns his back against Fion again) And you are doing my brother a great disservice…
FION: (wipes her tears) Actually, Lik Hang just proposed to me recently…
LOUIS: (taken aback) Huh? Did you agree? (waiting anxiously for her answer)
FION: (shakes her head) I told him I needed some time to consider… Cos he wants me to quit my job… And we have some disagreements recently…
LOUIS: (mixed feelings) Yes, you really need to consider carefully who the one you actually loves is… But of course… I’ll root for my brother… (walks towards her and put his hands on her shoulders) Fion… (before he could continue his sentence Fion has already threw herself into his arms, crying. She had always enjoy Louis’ warm hugs because Louis is such a considerate person…)
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PS: Oh!!! So Louis is in love with Fion too!!! And they grew up together too!!! And he never gave Fion up, in his heart!!! Actually is he the one who will never give up??? Cos he knew Fion and loved her much earlier than Jerry do... Will Fion be touched by his loving care? What will happen to Jerry and Lik Hang??? Is this a pentagon relationship now???