Fan Fiction

I Will Never Give Up *COMPLETED*

by Carmen Yip

Chapter 30

Triumph In The Skies II (Grand Finale)

Gallen Lo Ka Leung as Jerry Yip
Flora Chan Wai San as Fion Lam
Louis Koo Tin Lok as Louis Koo Lik Hong
Maggie Cheung Ho Yee as Kris Yip Hiu Bing
Bowie Lam Bo Yee as Bowie Lam
Jessica Hsuan Hester as Zoe Tong
Steven Ma Chun Wai as Steven Ma
Charmaine Sheh Sze Man as Charmaine Sheh
Kwong Wa as Koo Lik Hang
Melissa Ng Mei Hang as Mona Ng
Natalie Wong Kei Ying as Angel
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(a week later)(Bowie’s house)

BOWIE: Have you packed up for tomorrow’s trip?

FION: Emmm…

ZOE: You sounds dispirited… Jerry again?

FION: I’ve brought him to all the places we’ve went… but he doesn’t seems to recall anything…

BOWIE: Take it easy… He will, one day… Have a rest first, you’re flying tomorrow morning…

FION: Ok…
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(the next morning)(Jerry’s house)(8 a.m.)

JERRY: (just wake up, and sees Kris sitting on sofa) Good morning.

KRIS: (smiles) Good morning… have your breakfast first… (points to the table)

JERRY: Ok… (walks to the bathroom and comes out to have his breakfast)

(The radio plays a song… )
Who and who are together? Affinity has somehow, tied us together….
Regardless of the location, we will narrow the distance between us….
In foreign or distant lands, our hearts are still entangled….
Pass concern about forgetting the world, there will always be legends going on….

*FLASHBACKS*

FION: (taken aback) Why are you kneeling down? Get up!

JERRY: (childishly) No, I won’t.

FION: Ok, either you choose to kneel here for all your life or we’ll proceed to the café. We need to talk. (walks away)

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JERRY: I love you.

FION: (can’t believe it) Are you insane? I’ve a boyfriend already. Please give up.

JERRY: So what? I will never give up. You got the right not to love me, but not the right to prevent me from loving you, Fion.

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JERRY: (curious) What wish did you make just now?

FION: I won’t tell you.

JERRY: Let me tell you my wish. I wish that I could watch shooting stars with you every night, making wishes.

FION: Let’s see whether we got affinity then. (turns and walks away)
(they both look at each other and smiles)

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JERRY: I can’t blame you… I can only blame myself for being so naïve… I thought by loving a person, I can accept everything about her, including her boyfriend… I think it’s a moment of passion that had blinded my sight… Thanks for telling Zoe to inform me of your marriage… I can leave the scene now…

FION: (tears flowing out of her eyes) Jerry Ah… I’m sorry… I’ll always remember you bringing me to see shooting stars, and your 24 tulips… I can’t make it up to you in this lifetime…

JERRY: Not all things have to be repayed… I think you should forget all this…

FION: Why should I?

JERRY: (Imagine Jerry's voice is echoed for the best effects) For the sake of wiping all my memories of you… Leave the memories to me… I wish you and Lik Hang eternal happiness, Bye. (walks away)

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FION: Yes, and at this beach again. But there are no shooting stars in the day.

JERRY: (smiles) Oh… during the day the shooting stars (Lau sing) fall into the sea (Hoi) and become starfish (Hoi sing)…

FION: (smiles happily) Really?

JERRY: Yes.

FION: I’ve never heard of this before.

JERRY: You trust me so much, this is a lie.

FION: (looks at him and smiles) I know, I want you to feel guilty lying to me!

JERRY: But my next sentence is true.

FION/JERRY: (looking at each other, and spoke in unison) I love you.

(They walked closer to each other, closer and closer, until their faces touch, and their lips combined as one. Jerry held her tight in his arms, and they began to have the most passionate kiss… a few minutes later, they break free and Jerry happily hugs Fion, and Fion returns a smile, closing her eyes and enjoying Jerry’s lovely hug)

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FION: (gasping heavily for air) Some decisions are really tough to be made… Perhaps from the beginning it is a mistake… Actually, you are such an eligible man, you need not be so hard on yourself… No matter how willing we are to part, a fact is still a fact… You must know, it was hard for me to come to this decision too… I’m just an ordinary girl, and I don’t have many 8 years, and so much youth to invest… I’m placed a heavy bet on Lik Hang, I’m quitting, sorry… (looks apologetically into his eyes)

JERRY: (looking down) Emmm… I understand… I can only wish you eternal happiness… if you’ve found out that you made a wrong choice, you can come back to me… I haven’t given up…

FION: (weeping sadly) A… Agree me…

JERRY: What?

FION: (crying and can’t speak clearly) Don’t… torture yourself…

JERRY: (holding back his emotions) I should be the one apologizing… I have made your wedding so unhappy…

FION: (still sobbing) So… What plans do you have?

JERRY: Give me some space to think… Perhaps I’ll return to Japan… I think I will leave tomorrow… Thanks for loving me before… We’ll meet if fate decrees us to…

FION: (throws herself hard into his arms) Jerry! (he hugs her tightly)(both of them are crying and feeling so much pain in their heart… Why? Why has the cruel fate played such a trick on them? They were thinking… Perhaps they could never find another person that they would love so much ever again… But reality is reality, Yes… They had to part)

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(Jerry was crossing the road, he was so absent-minded because Fion is getting married tomorrow… Out of nowhere, a car sped in his direction… )

*END OF FLASBACKS*

JERRY: (mumbling) Fion… (Shouts) Where is Fion? Where is Fion?

KRIS: (shocked and runs up to him) Huh? She should be at home…

JERRY: (reaching for the phone) Yes… yes…

KRIS: You regained your memory?

JERRY: (excited) Yes… (calling Fion)(nobody answers) Nobody answers…

KRIS: You called which number? She has moved in with her brother…

JERRY: (calls again) Hello, Fion?

BOWIE: I’m not Fion, she’d just left the house…

JERRY: Where is she heading?

BOWIE: Are you Jerry? She’d gone to the airport… she is flying to Vancouver at 11.30 a.m… She… (Jerry already hung up)
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(Jerry hailed a taxi, and hops in)

JERRY: To the airport, thank you. (passes by a shop) Please stop in-front for a while, thanks… (after ten minutes) We can go now… (THOUGHTS: Hope I can make it in time, and give her a surprise…) Mr. driver, can you go a bit faster, it concerns my future happiness…

DRIVER: (chuckling) Really? Ok, I’ll try my best…(accelerates)

JERRY: (smiles) Thanks a lot…
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(8.45 a.m)(At the airport)(Someone taps his shoulder)

JERRY: (turns around, shouting) FION!!!

MONA: (chuckling and shaking her head) I’m not Fion… Nice flowers…

JERRY: Mona, it’s you… what are you doing here…?

MONA: I’m leaving the country, with my new boss-cum-boyfriend…

LIK HANG: (walks up to Mona) Jerry? Why are you here?

JERRY: (shocked) Lik Hang? (to Mona) He is the one you are talking about?

MONA: Yes… what’s the matter? You know him?

JERRY: Yes, certainly… Are you emigrating?

MONA: We’ll see how…

JERRY: (looks at his watch) Sorry, I have to go now… Keep in touch… bye… (walks away hastily)

MONA: You two are acquaintances?

LIK HANG: He was the one… (repeating their story)
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(Departure Hall)

JERRY: (Looking around and shouting Fion’s name like a lunatic…) Fion… Fion…

STAFF: Sir, can I help you…

JERRY: I’m sorry, I’m looking for my friend.. she’s… (sees Fion from far)(runs towards her) Fion!!!

FION: (turns around) Jerry? Why are you here? Sending me off?

JERRY: (hugs her tightly) Fion!

FION: What happened?

JERRY: (break free) I’ve recovered my memory, I remembered all the things about us…

FION: (happy tears drop) Really?

JERRY: (nods his head) This is for you... (passes her the flowers) No 24 colours, but i've got you your favourite violet tulips... (Kneels down) Marry me, Fion… (takes out a small gift box from his pockets) I’m serious… I’ll love you… forever…

FION: (Crying and smiling) Get up first!

JERRY: You agree first! (nods her head) That’s great! (hugs her tightly in his embrace) I have a surprise for you…

FION: (Smiling curiously) What more do you have up to your sleeves?

JERRY: (takes out a pass) Here…

FION: (smiling) Why? Are you filming in TV City today?

JERRY: I’m serious…

FION: Don’t joke…stop fooling me with this fake pilot pass…

JERRY: Do you know what my occupation is?

FION: You’ve mentioned an MNC offered you the position of manager…

JERRY: I’ve rejected the offer long time ago…

FION: Why?

JERRY: I’ve secretly applied to become a pilot months back ago…

FION: (can’t believe it) That’s ridiculous! Why?

JERRY: Because my childhood ambition was to become one… and I never liked business, studying business was just an economic decision… and most importantly, it’s because of you…

FION: I can’t believe it… you’re a pilot now??? (smiling and nodding his head)

JERRY: (smiles) Do you want to quit your job after our marriage? I can support you…

FION: (Firmly) No.

JERRY: Why?

FION: (smiling) I want to keep an eye on you, in case you flirts with another air-stewardess…

JERRY: (smiling and nodding his head) Oh I see… so I must keep an eye on you too… in case you flirts with another pilot… (they both laughs) Finally, we can triumph in the skies, together…

(Fion looks deeply into his eyes… while Jerry pulls himself closer to her, and plant a kiss on her lips, she returns another… and soon they are interlocked and engaged in a kissing competition… the audience applauded)

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