| Fan Fiction |
by h u e i _ R A Y
Linda : I felt dizzy. [Slowly closed her eyes]
Bosco : Linda! Linda! Linda! [Slightly slapped her face]
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* Bosco brought Linda to an abandon house in a rural village. He tied Linda up and he left. He went home and prepared for his another planning. Raymond went back to their apartment while Fala and Fred came over because of Linda.
- RL’s apartment -
Michelle : Raymond, how’s the photography session? Hey, where’s Linda? She didn’t return with you all?
Ray : Oh, she is with Sharon and Chris. She will stay overnight in Sharon’s house because they want to have pillow talk.
Michelle : Oh I see. Need I to prepare supper for you all?
Fred : Is okay, auntie. We will settle it ourselves.
Ray : Yeah, let’s talk in my room.
Michelle : Okay. You all chat. I won’t disturb you all.
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- Room –
Fred : Are you sure you she’s not around or she’s just playing with you?
Ray : Nope. I’m sure that she’s not there. I have a bad intuition that she might be in danger now.
Fala : Should we lodge a police report?
Ray : She’s been missing for only few hours, even if we lodged a report, the police won’t bother too.
Fala : But will Linda went somewhere to celebrate her birthday?
Ray : I went to all the places that she might go but she’s not there, I planned surprise for her birthday but now, I really afraid about her!
Fred : Don’t worry, Raymond. I think is okay.
Fala : Will she got kidnapped?
Ray : What? Don’t scare me. I couldn’t afford to lose her.
Fred : Don’t think negatively. She will be fine!
Fala : Yeah, we must be optimistic right now. She will be fine definitely!
Ray : Maybe she wanted to give me surprise, right?
Fala : Gor, Fred and I will go home first. You rest earlier, okay?
Fred : Yeah! I believe that she will be fine.
Ray : Thanks. Bye! Fala, don’t let dad know bout it yet.
Fala : Bye!
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- Wong’s mansion –
Tavia : Bosco, where are you just now?
Bosco : I kidnapped Linda and she is now in an abandon house.
Tavia : Really? What are going to do?
Bosco : I want Raymond to watch how I torture his future wife. I want him to know how I feel when I saw Natalie with all sorts of tubes.
Tavia : Great. I also want them to payback for what they did to Kevin. They lead to all this! I want to follow you and torture Linda.
Bosco : No, don’t go with me. You need to look after yourself and the baby. I’ll settle myself.
Tavia : Don’t worry, I will take care of myself there. I want to see how they suffer.
Bosco : Okay!
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- abandon house –
Linda slowly gains her consciousness and she found that she was tied up in an unfamiliar places. She doesn’t know where she is. She looked around and now, the door was flung open and she saw two figures walking towards her.
Tavia : Hi, my pretty cousin! Enjoying here?
Linda : What are you trying to do with me? Why am I here?
Tavia : You asked me? I want you to suffer and I’m here to revenge. That’s simple.
Linda : So you and Bosco wanted to revenge but I did nothing wrong!
Tavia : Nothing wrong? Since we are kids, you always get whatever you want too. You got a lovely mother and a protective Raymond besides you. He did everything for you. I hate you so much, do you know?
Linda : You really hate me that much? Why? I treated you as my real sister since we are kids. And you, Bosco, why must you did this to me? What have I done to you?
Bosco : Me? Very simple. You and Raymond caused Natalie to be in the hospital and now the doctor said that my baby might be Down syndrome. Oh, I forgot to tell you another thing, that is don’t blame me for all this just blame yourself for being Raymond’s fiancée. I want the Lam Family to have the same feeling as me when I lost my precious ones.
Linda : Both of you are nuts. You blamed us for all this? You all are so unreasonable. Bosco, I know you are not like that. You got to walk out from the darkness. Don’t listen to Tavia. She’s just using you to achieve her goal! I know you well Bosco, you are not like that! Where’s the Bosco that I know earlier?
Tavia : Linda Chung! Stop trying to separate us. You got Raymond and I got Kevin but why you always spoil my things? Raymond and you caused my baby to grow in a single parent family.
Bosco : Don’t talk so much, I wont listen to you anymore. You don’t understand me at all. No matter what you said, I wouldn’t care. I will let Raymond witness with his own eyes how I torture you. {Laughed cunningly}
Linda : Help! Help!
Tavia : Save your energy, Linda. This is a deserted area, no one out there too. No one will come and rescue you!
Bosco : Tav, bring over the DV cam and record. I want Raymond to know what exactly happening to Linda.
Tavia : Okay. [Took out the DV cam and start recording]
Bosco : Linda, remember don’t blame me for all this. I just want Raymond to suffer. [Slapped Linda repetitive and kicked her stomach]
Linda : Ouch! Raymond, if you see this, remember don’t come and save me or do anything. They are nuts. Remember!
Tavia : Hey bitch! Don’t talk that much. [Slapped Linda]
Bosco : Raymond Lam, you felt your heart aching? Now you know how I feel when I saw Natalie lying unconsciously on the bed?
Tavia : [stopped recording]. What should I do with this tape?
Bosco : Send it to Raymond together with this laptop. Be careful! [Tavia walked out]
Linda : *cough*. Why must you do all this Bosco? Stop all this and I promise that we won’t lodge a police report. Stop while you still got the chance.
Bosco : Stop it, Linda! It makes no difference to me. I planned so long for this and you ask me to let go everything? At first I really thought of letting go and went overseas. But when I saw how lovely you and Raymond were, the burning sensation slowly arose. Raymond’s dad destroyed my family and I want the same thing happen to him.
Linda : Why must think negatively? I know that Nat doesn’t want to see you like that too.
Bosco : Stop mentioning about Natalie and don’t act as if you understand her well! You are not! Shut up now!
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- RL’s apartment -
* Ding Dong! Ding Dong*
Ray : Who’s there? [Opened the door]
Fala : Gor, why there’s a laptop at your doorstep?
Ray : I don’t know either.
Fred : It was there when we came so we brought it in.
Fala : Gor, there’s an envelope and Linda’s name was written on it. Is a CD.
Ray : Turn on the laptop and play the CD.
Fred : Okay [played the CD]
Fala : Oh my god, is Linda, Bosco and Tavia! Linda was kidnapped by them.
Ray : Linda! Linda! What the hell is Bosco trying to do?
*beep…beep…..beep…….*
Ray : Hello.
Bosco : How’s the CD? Interesting?
Ray : What the hell are you trying to do? You want to revenge then just come to me, there’s nothing to do with Linda!
Bosco : You really love her that much? This proved that my decision to kidnapped Linda was absolutely right!
Ray : Now, tell me what you are up to? Where are you?
Bosco : Buddy, I’m also eager to see you too. Turn on the laptop’s webcam. I’ve given you some tips on the location! Think properly and you’ll know. Remember to come alone and don’t try to report to the police or else I don’t know what might happen to her later. Good luck, by the way, remember to be here in half an hour time! [Shut the phone]
Ray : Bosco! Bosco!
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Fred : What did he said? He kidnapped Linda? We must report to the police!
Ray : No. he warned me not to report to the police. Please, Fred! I don’t want something bad happen to Linda. Turn on the webcam. Bosco said I’ll know where the location is through the webcam.
Fala : [point to the screen]. Is Linda and Bosco. But where are they?
Fred : I think this is somewhere in Sha Tin. I recognized the field out there.
Ray : Wait! I know where it is. I’ll go now!
Fala : Gor, let’s report to the police first! Is will be too dangerous for you to go alone. You don’t know what they are up to. Or you let Fred to company you along.
Fred : Yeah. Let me go with you.
Ray : No, all Bosco want is me. I’ll settle this on my own. I’ve dragged Linda into this so I don’t want anyone to be involved with this again.
Fala : Gor! You know how much I worried bout you.
Fred : Fala, let Raymond settle this on his own. I believe he could do this.
Ray : Thanks for believing me, Fred! Look after my sister. Fala, I promised that I’ll come back safely with Linda! Don’t worry. Fred, I want to talk to you privately. *dragged Fred to another corner*
Fred : What you going to tell me?
Ray : Fred, I know that Fala will be extremely worried about me. I told her that I’ll return safely but I’m not sure whether I could do it a not. No one knows what might happen to me. Fred, if I didn’t return here in 3 hours time, report to the police about this.
Fred : But we don’t know the exact location!
Ray : Don’t worry! I’ll turn on the GPS system in my phone then you will be able to detect where I am. Promised me that you will only do this after three hours. I want to convince Bosco to surrender!
Fred : Okay, I know what I should do. Just go and save Linda now! Be careful. [Waved to Raymond]
Fala : What did my brother told you?
Fred : He told me to look after you because he knew that you are worried.
Fala : Fred, shall we report to the police?
Fred : No, I promised Raymond that we wont report to the police. Can you please believe Raymond?
Fala : Is easy for you to say! He is my brother and not yours!
Fred : I don’t want to argue with you over this matter.
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*Raymond recognized the place that he saw in the webcam. That was a rural village in Sha Tin. That was the common outing between Bosco and him. They found that place when they were both teenagers. They always went there because there was a rural area so their family members wouldn’t know that they meet there. Raymond drove as fast as he could! He came down from his car and walked to the field that he saw earlier in the webcam. Bosco saw him from far and he quickly hides behind the door. Raymond saw an abandon house and he rushed over to the house. He slowly turned the door knob and walked into the house. Suddenly, someone knocked him from behind and he fainted. Bosco took out a rope and he tied him with Linda.
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Fala : Fred, my brother had left for more than an hour. What should we do now?
Fred : I also don’t know. Raymond told me to give him three hours. He told me that he will convince Bosco to surrender.
Fala : No, we cannot wait anymore. What if something bad happened to them? I must report to the police now.
Fred : *thinking*.
Fala : Don’t hesitate anymore, they are in danger! I don’t think it is possible for Gor to convince Bosco. Please!
Fred : *nodded*. Let’s call my cousin, Ken! I’m sure he could help us. *took out his mobile and dial Ken’s number*
* Conversation *
Fred : Biu Gor? I’m Fred here. I’ve something important to discuss with you!
Ken : What’s that? You seem nervous!
Fred : My friend’s fiancée was kidnapped and now even my friend went to negotiate with them. I’m worried about him.
Ken : What? Did you lodge a police report?
Fred : NO! my friend refused to report to the police. We knew who kidnapped them. I’m coming over to your station right now!
Ken : Okay! I’ll tell my team to get ready. Continue later.
* End *
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- abandon house -
Linda : Ray! Ray! Wake up!
Ray : *slowly awake*. Linda! You are safe.
Linda : Ray!
Bosco : Wow, so lovely? Don’t worry, I’ll make sure both of you die together. I’m not that cruel to separate two love birds!
Ray : Bosco, I know you want to revenge for your dad and Kevin, so this had nothing to do with her. Is enough for you to keep me here.
Bosco : *laughed*. Linda, you are right to choose him over me. But too bad, I want both of you to be dead today so none of you will be leaving here.
Ray : Bosco, you still got the chance to stop everything from going worse. You got to think of Natalie and your future son! They need you.
Bosco : Don’t mention about them in front of me. If Linda and you didn’t appear at that time, Natalie and I will now be together happily! So, now I want you two to payback what you had done to me! *threw a bottle towards the window and broke one of the window*
Ray : Don’t you remember that you are wrong too? If you didn’t fool around with Linda and Nat, then this wont happened. Face the reality, Bosco! Don’t blame it all on us! *picked up a piece of broken window trying to cut off the rope*
Bosco : Stop acting in front of me. Tavia told me that you brought Linda to that restaurant purposely! You want Linda to know about my affair because you love her!
Linda : Is not like that, Bosco. Tavia bluffed you. Tavia is the one that suggested and reserved for a table in that restaurant! Raymond doesn’t know anything.
Tavia : You really think that Bosco is that silly to believe you? All you said is just because you want to be safe.
Bosco : Yeah, you thought I’m really that silly? I’m silly last time, but now I’m not! Don’t try to fool me.
Ray : Buddy, that really had nothing to do with me!
Bosco : Don’t call me buddy! I’m no longer your buddy. Since the day you began this war, we are no longer friends. Your dad destroyed my family. I’m sure that my dad’s death had something to do with your dad. My mom was in a wheelchair because of your idiotic parents too!
Ray : I don’t know what you heard from Tavia. But I’m sure that whatever she told you is all bullshit! My parents did nothing!
Bosco : I’m sure your parents doesn’t told you the truth! Now, I want you to totally disappear in this world. *took out a gun and point to Raymond*
“No! Please don’t do this, Bosco. No!” Linda yelled at Bosco. “I’m so sorry, Linda. I got to do this”, Bosco replied.
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- police station -
”Do you know where Raymond is?, did he tell you the location?”, Kenneth asked Fred. “He said that he will turn on the GPS system in his mobile so that I will find his exact location.
“Vivien, try to locate his location now, we need to be fast before anything happen. Derek, get the others here and I’ll start briefing!” Kenneth commands them to move on. “Yes sir!” they replied.
“Fala, don’t worry so much, I’ve confident that we could save them.” Ken tried to comfort them. “Thanks so much. Fala, I think we should inform Auntie Michelle and your dad about this matter”. Fred told Fala.
“Urm… okay, but I don’t know how should I start.”. Fala replied. “I’ll stay by your side, don’t worry”!
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I changed to narrative style slowly hope you’ll like it.
thanks