| Fan Fiction |
by octavian
Appearance; Poster, Background, Font. -- [5/15] Points
`Your poster wasn’t a poster at all. It’s just a picture of Big Bang. It didn’t have a title on or the author’s name on it at all. Your background didn’t match and/or interact with your picture. The font was okay; it wasn’t hard to read and doesn’t hurt the readers’ eyes.
Forewords; Description, Small summary. -- [3/10] Points
`In your foreword, you gave a description of the main actress but the other’s you didn’t but just agave out their names and age. You did well in describing MiYoung but you didn’t give useful information of Big Bang at all. You didn’t even give out information of what role they are playing in the story. Also, your foreword didn’t have a small summary.
Title; Relates with the story in some way. -- [2/10] Points
`Hm…I don’t really understand how the title relates to the story at all. I’m confused on that, but your title was kind of interesting and made me kind of wonder about the title.
Flow of story; Is the story moving to fast? Is it confusing? -- [15/15] Points
`Your story didn’t move too fast nor did it more too slow. I think it went on a perfect pace. It went smoothly and isn’t confusing at all. It seems to me like you’ve thought over about your story before writing/posting it up.
Originality; Is the storyline or the ideas overused? -- [9/10] Points
`I don’t know if this storyline is overused or not. But it does seem similar to other stories that I’ve read. But your story, it’s very hard to decide on this. The plot just seems like it have never been used up before.
Grammar/Spelling; Is the story free from grammar/spelling errors? -- [10/10] Points
`I don’t remember catching any spelling nor grammar mistakes at all. I think it’s because the story was a little too long for me to remember or was it because of the excitements in the story that made me forgot about this. LOL
Story format; Does the story keep the same structure? -- [8/10] Points
`Your story’s format is just about the same size. Each chapter goes around the same pace and travels smoothly. But then at some point, I got confuse about the speakers.
Charisma; Does the story keep reader wanting more? -- [10/10] Points
`Yes, I’ll say yes, because it is very interesting. The story’s plot seems like it have never been used at all. With so much conflict, pain in relationships, and so much love and all, it makes reader wanting to know more of the story. Your story, it seems to be un-attractive because of the title at first, but then once a person reads it, they’ll be attracted to your story and lusting for more.
Overall Enjoyment; Reviewer's enjoyment of the story. -- [8/10] Points
`Well, I did enjoy your story. It’s very interesting in my POV. With so much conflict and pain and such, it’s a very interesting story. I think that the only thing that made it so unattractive is just the title. But other than that, I did like the story.
Total Points;
70/100
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you might think 70 is pretty low but i never saw anyone with a grade higher than that. maybe i should read other reviews. i shouldn't assume.