Fan Fiction

Y O U N G L O v E [completed]

by crystal

Chapter 6

Afterschool

ring ring

michelle picks up her cell phone.

mcihelle: hello

tavia: hey its me, wanna go shopping?

michelle: again?? i have lots of hw

tavia: come on, u can do it at my house tonite

michelle: no, i better stay home

tavia: oh fine

michelle: bye

tavia: bye

michelle hung up the phone.

michelle is walking towards the parking lot where her mom picks her up. and while walking, raymond was walking the opposite direction.

raymond spotted michelle: hey michelle

michelle smiled as raymond walked pass her.

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Michelle's house

michelle had just finish her hw.

michelle's POV: it only 5, should of went with tavia. Maybe i can go online now.

michelle signed on to her AIM (AOL instant messenger)

michelle's POV: where is everyone? what to do now? maybe talking in a chat room?

michelle entered a chatroom

smartygirl: hi everyone

many people started IMing michelle.

dumb45444: hey, are u horny?

superman: hello there, u from?

dragondude: hey

michelle thought dub45444 would be a nasty guy to talk to. so she answered superman and dragondude

superman and mcihelle

smartygirl: hi
superman: asl? (age, sex, location)
smartygirl: 16, female, and california
smartygirl: and u?
superman: 20, male, new york, guess i'm too old for u, bye

dragondude and michelle

michelle: hi

dragondude: how are u?

smartgirl: good u

ragondude: its been a really cool day

smartgirl: how old are u?

dragondude: 17, u?

smartgirl: 16

dragondude: u got a boyfriend?

smartgirl: no

dragondude: i am guessing u are a 10th grader

smartgirl: yes

dragaondude: hows life in school for u?

smartgirl: its ok

dragondude: just ok? is it boy problem?

smartgirl: yea, how u know?

dragondude: by ur screen name "smartgirl" "smart"

smartgirl: lol

dragondude: lol, tell me ur problems, maybe i can help u

smartgirl:u help me?

dragondude: yea, dont worry, i am not those flirty guys

smartgirl: lol

dragondude: so what is it?

smartgirl: well, there this guy in my class

dragondude: ok

smartgirl: he is an 11th grader

dragondude: older guys eh? lol

smartgirl: hey

dragondude: just kidding, its good

smartgirl: ......

dragondude: does he have feelings for u?

smartgirl: i dont think so

dragaondude: don't give up so early

smartgirl: but i think he has a girlfriend

dragondude: u never know when they are going to break up

smartgirl: i kind of know her, and she is very nice, i don;t think anyone would want to break up with her

dragondude: hey, ur not him, u would never know

smartgirl: what should i do now?

dragondude: what does girls suppose to do?

smartgirl: i dont know thats is why i am asking you

dragondude: well, i can tell u this, guys likes girls that care about them and especially notice them.

smartgirl: how do i get him to notice me?

dragondude: maybe something about u that will attract him. to keep it simple, offer to help him

smartgirl: like what?

dragondude: like offer him an eraser cuz u don;t see alot of guys carrying erasers with them

smartgirl: i am kind of shy to talk to him

dragondude: well that is what thing u have to work on

smartgirl: i know

Mrs. Yip: Michelle!! Dinner!!

michelle: ok! MOM! i'll be right there!

smartgirl: hey i have to go

dragondude: ok bye

smartgirl: thanks

dragondude: no problem, good luck and oh yea if i am not on, u can email me at dragondude@yahoo.com

smartgirl: ok, bye

dragondude: bye

smartgirl signed off

ring ring ring

michelle: hello

tavia: michy, u should of came shopping with me, there was a sale. but ask ur mom if u can come to my house and u can borrow my clothes and outfits

michelle: yea, ok, i'll come after dinner

tavia: ok

mcihelle: hey, u wanna go shopping tomorrow afterschool/

tavia: don't u have hw to do?

michelle: i can do it later on

tavia: whoa mich

michelle; hey, i'll talk to u later

tavia: ok bye

michelle: bye

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