Fan Fiction

Y O U N G L O v E [completed]

by crystal

Chapter 8

Afterschool
Note: julian and edison are raymond's friends.

julian: mann. finally its a friday

edison: where do u guys want to go

raymond: i'm not in the mood, u guys go on ahead

julian: whats up man?

raymond: i have to bring my freakin grade up. i can't fail biology

edison: common, u can study later

julian: we are going to meet up with charmaine and them

raymond: fine, count me in

edison: then come on, where's ur car man?

julian: when will u two get ur liscense?

raymond: soon

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tavia: where do u guys want to go?

ron: lets go bowling

tavia: yea

michelle: i'm going to stay home

tavia: but why?

michelle: i want to get all my hw done for the weekend

tavia: michelle

ron: come on michelle, its going to be fun

michelle: no, u guys go on ahead

tavia: fine

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Michelle's house

Michelle's POV: i wonder did he emailed me back.

michelle checked her email and she recieved no new emails.

Michelle's POV: what should i do now? he is not even on.

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Bowling ally

edison: haven't been bowling for such a long time

rain: raymond, its your turn

raymond; alrite

julian: a strike!

rain: good job raymond

charmaine: julian its ur turn

tavia and ron entered the bowling ally

raymond saw ron: sup?

ron: hey dude

raymond: hey (to tavia)

tavia smiled

tavia and ron just played, while raymond and his buds play

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Michelle's house

ring ring ring

michelle: hello

tavia: michelle, u should of came

michelle: did u guys have fun

tavia: a blast, its was pretty crowded too

michelle: oh, wow

tavia: u know that guy in our bio class, the one that sits behind u

michelle: u mean raymond??

tavia: yea, him, he was there too

michelle: really??? i wished i came

tavia: what?

michelle: yea, i said i wish i came to bowl with u and ron

tavia: oh, i thought u wished u came cuz of raymond

michelle; oh no

tavia: can i sleep over this weekend?

michelle: sure

tavia: ok, i'll come after i take a shower

michelle: ok

tavia: bye

michelle: bye

michelle was really happy that tavia is going to sleep over and something just made her more even happier and instant message from.....

dragondude: hey

smartgirl: hey, did u get the email i sent u

dragondude: yea i did. i am so happy for u

smartgirl: haha thanks

dragondude: is that guy as nice as me?

smartgirl: well, i dont know

dragondude: haha

smartgirl: i know u are very nice to me and

dragondude: and,how about him?

smartgirl: i think he notices me, but then i am scared to talk to him

dragondude: start a conversation with him, and since u guys have so much in common, it should be no problem

smartgirl: i guess

dragondude: try that sometimes

smartgirl: ok

dragondude: what are u doing right now?

smartgirl: i've been waiting for u to go online!!

dragondude: oh, sorry for keeping u waiting

smartgirl: its ok

dragondude: christmas is coming!!

smartgirl: yea, i know i have to start going christmas shopping

dragondude: am i on ur list?

smartgirl: it can be if i am on urs

dragondude: u are already on mines. lol

smartgirl: then u are on mines

dragondude: my favorite color is green, just in case u want to know

smartgirl: lol. i'll make a note of that

dragondude: now, what do u like??

smartgirl: i like green too

dragondude: is there anything u want in specific

smartgirl: clothes??

dragondude: haha

Mrs. Yip: michelle! tavia's here!

michelle: ok mom!!

smartgirl: i'll talk to u later

dragondude: ok, i'll email u

smartgirl: ok

dragondude: bye

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i'm going to end it here

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