| Fan Fiction |
by MIzconfuz3d
Title - Poise:Rise of Vengeance by MIzconfuz3d
URL - http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/poise1
Status - Completed
Reviewed by HidayahF @ I-Love-Twilight
Title: 5/5
I think the title is very perfect for your story.It catches the readers to read your story.And also,it's original and different.I'm wondering where do you get that idea for the title?Hehe.
Poster & Background: 9/10
Erm your poster is totally great,neat and cool.Love it a lot.Just I don't like the texture a bit.Why don't you put a background?It looks so plain.I'm not forcing you though.I'm just giving my suggestion.
Forewords: 10/10
People always put the same thing.Summary,character biography etc.But you?It's a bit different.You made something different that makes the readers wants to click 'next'.
Plot: 14/15
I think,this is totally different.But it's a bit too usual.But cool at the same time.
Creativity/Originality: 12/15
Like I said on the plot section,it's a bit too usual.Plus,this looks like a vampire story.But,I love vampire storylines.What don't you make it different from another vampire stories out there?
Flow: 9/10
Well for this,I think this is not too slow nor fast.It's ok for me.But sometimes,I have to click 'previous' to understand all of it.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 7/10
Well,I didn't saw many spelling errors.Don't worry.It's not a big problem.All you have to do is check your spelling 3 times before you post the chapter up on winglin.You'll be fine if you do that.
Characterisation: 8/10
Honestly I said that I'm totally hate JESSICA!!!She is so..ughhh!!But,you described Jessica && Yoona very well.I love it.And also,ahh Donghae.He's a bit too rushed.That's what I think.
Writing Style: 9/10
Aish!I'm not really good in criticize others writing style.Because all of us have different writing styles.Some people use Dialogue and some people use paragraph.So,I think that 9/10 is okay for you.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
You know what?I really enjoy this story!Because this story is totally good!I really want to see more of your stories later!I'm in love with this story.Hehe.
Sub Total: 88/100
Bonus: 5/5
Like I said,I enjoyed this story a lot.Hope to see more of your stories later!I know that you can be a perfect writer in the future!