Fan Fiction

One By One : A Murder Thriller [Completed]

by Shattered - Michelle

Chapter 14

12 / 16 / 2004 Part I

Pardon me if this story doesnt make much sense.its really so hard that i want to give this story up.sorry..

Just remember this is FICTION.please dont freak out because of my story!
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[3am]

[Benny was asleep,but suddenly he heard a knock on the door]

Benny:Who's that?

[A figure entered the room]

Benny:Oh,so its you

[The murderer told Benny something]

Benny:Ok

[The murderer leaves the room]
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[9am]

Michelle:Im so full now

Bosco:*Yawn*

Sammul:Didnt sleep a wink last night?

Bosco:Too frightened to

Sammul:Me too,i fell asleep at 3am *yawn*

[Tavia and Rain had cried their eyes swollen]

Benny:Wow,two pandas

Tavia:Hey!who are you calling pandas?

Ron:You girls cried your eyes swollen?

Rain:Yes,so?

[Ron,Benny,Bosco and Sammul started to laugh]

Rain:What's so funny?

Raymond:Dont be mean,Ron

Rain:See?Raymond cares for us,unlike you bunch of idiots

[Rain grabs on to Raymond]

Tavia:He's Michelle's!let go of him

Rain:Why get so work up?

Tavia:You are known for stealing people's boyfriends!

Michelle:Enough Tavia,i trust that Rain would not do such a thing

Benny:Anyone intrested to go for a walk?

Ron:You going,Sam?

Sammul:Sure,why not?staying here gives me the creeps

Ron:Ill go

Bernice:Me is going nowhere

Leila:Ill come

Tavia:Not me

Rain:Im not coming

Bosco:Ill go

Raymond:Michelle,how about you?

Michelle:Ill let you decide

Raymond:Hmm,lets have some private time together.ill love to have a walk

Benny:So who's coming with me?excluding Mich and Ray

[Ron,Sammul,Bosco and Leila raised their hands]

Benny:Lets go!

[Benny,Ron,Sammul,Bosco,Leila,Michelle and Raymond left the mansion]
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[10am]

[Benny,Ron,Sammul,Bosco and Leila]

Ron:This is a really lovely island,too bad..

Sammul:Too bad what?

Ron:Its stained with blood

Leila:If i ever get out of here alive,ill swear ill never return here again.ever!

Bosco:Im pretty sure ill die,this murderer is cold blooded

Sammul:Forget about this,lets just enjoy ourselves,for now when we still can

Benny:Im tired,lets go back

Sammul:But i dont want to stay in that spooky place

Ron:My dear Sammul,it isnt that safe here either

Sammul:But i like the fresh air

Bosco:I want to go back too

Leila:Ill stay with you,Sammul.i dont feel like going back either

Sammul:Great!

Ron:Lets go

[Ron,Benny and Bosco headed back to the mansion]
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[Michelle and Raymond were on another part of the island]

Michelle:Im really scared,Raymond

Raymond:I am too,who wouldn't be?

Michelle:I dont want to leave you,we just got together

Raymond:Lets make a marriage vow

Michelle:What!?now?

Raymond:In case we die,we'll still be a couple forever

Michelle:Lets get everyone to witness our "marriage"!

Raymond:I didnt know you were so anxious to be Mrs Lam

Michelle:Very funny!
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Me shall update soon