Fan Fiction

One By One : A Murder Thriller [Completed]

by Shattered - Michelle

Chapter 16

12 / 17 / 2004 Part I

Changed my mind about making a video,sorry guys
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[8am]

Michelle:Wake up hubby!

Raymond:I want to sleep

Michelle:Raymond Lam Fung!

[Raymond shot up]

Raymond:Yes dear

Michelle:Dont be so lazy

Raymond:But there's nothing else to do here,im bored

Michelle:Im bored,i want to go to the beach

Raymond:Get Tavia to go with you

Michelle:Tavia's getting closer and closer to Rain.now she's spending all her time with her

Raymond:Dont be jealous,your darling hubby would give you a kiss

Michelle:No thank you,just wake up and come with me

Raymond:Im so hurt,you embarassed me in front of everyone yesterday

Michelle:I did?

Raymond:You didnt let me kiss the bride

Michelle:Fine,ill let you kiss me now

[Raymond kissed Michelle lightly on the cheek]

Raymond:Thats better,ok,ill come with you
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Bosco:Im hungry

[Michelle and Raymond came out of their room]

Ron:Can you make breakfast now?we are starving

Raymond:Cant you make the sandwiches yourself?

Michelle:We are off for our private time

Raymond:Lets go,Michelle

[Raymond and Michelle left the mansion]
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[9am]

Ron:So what are we going to do now?

Bernice:Lets all stay in our own rooms

Bosco:Anyone keen for a walk?

Benny:I dont think we should leave the mansion,it looks like it is going to rain

Rain:Should we get those two lovebirds back?

Sammul:Dont worry about them,they'll come back when it rains

Tavia:Lets go Rain,ill show you the fashion magazine i bought the other day

Rain:Ok

[Everyone went to their rooms]
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[11am]

[Benny was lying on his sleeping bag]

[He heard a knock at the door]

Benny:Come in

Murderer:Hello Benny

Benny:What..do you want?

Murderer:I want your life

[The murderer covered Benny's mouth and stabbed a knife through him]

[Benny died instantly]

Murderer:Thats for knowing my secret

[The murderer went back to the room]
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[11.30pm]

[A light rain started]

Raymond:Oh no,its raining

Michelle:Its ok,in fact,its more romantic

Raymond:If we make get out of this island alive,would you marry me legally?and officially be Mrs Lam

Michelle:Yes,but if we get out alive.which,i doubt we would

Raymond:Who do you think would die today?

Michelle:I dont know,i have no idea who is the killer

Raymond:But why does he or she want to kill us?

Michelle:For all you know,there could be a psycho among us

Raymond:Thats scary

[The rain started to get heavier]

Michelle:I think we better get back

[Raymond and Michelle ran back to the mansion]
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I will update soon