Fan Fiction

One By One : A Murder Thriller [Completed]

by Shattered - Michelle

Chapter 23

12 / 21 / 2004 Part I

[11am]

[Everyone were gathered in the main hall]

Ron:Im hungry

Raymond:But you just had breakfast!

Ron:One slice of bread wasnt enough for me

Michelle:If you are so hungry,i can give you my slice for lunch.ive not be having a good appetite

Raymond:Are you ok,Michelle?

Michelle:Yes,im fine

Rain:Ill give you my whole slice,i rather starve then eat rubber

Ron:Thank you Rain

Bernice:Are you guys bored?lets go out and play

Michelle:Play?

Ron:Thats a good suggestion

Raymond:I want to leave the house too

Michelle:Count me out,im not feeling well

Rain:But we cant leave you here alone

Michelle:Its fine

Raymond:Are you sure?

Michelle:Yup,have fun

Everyone:Bye

[Everyone.except Michelle left the mansion]
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[12pm]

Rain:Wow,i havent had much fun for such a long time

Bernice:Eww,we stink.lets go for a shower

Raymond;Wait,where's Michelle?

Ron:Maybe in the room?

Raymond:Oh no,please dont let anything happen to her
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[Michelle and Raymond's room]

[Raymond pushed open the door]

[Michelle was lying on the floor]

Raymond:Michelle!

Ron:The killer got her?

Bernice:No visible wounds again?

Rain:Oh no Michelle

Raymond:Michelle!

[Raymond held her body tight in embrace]

Raymond:Why did you leave me?

Rain:We'll excuse you

[Rain,Ron and Bernice left the room]

Raymond:Remember we were supposed to get married legally?you were supposed to be Mrs Lam

[Tears started to roll down Raymond's cheeks]

Raymond:Im sorry Michelle,i shouldnt have left you here alone.please know that ill always love you

[Raymond leaned forward and planted a kiss on her lips]

[Raymond was about to leave the room,but suddenly..]

Michelle:Ray...ray..

Raymond:Michelle,you are not dead?

Michelle:Im..not..dead,silly.i fainted

Raymond:Are you ok?

Michelle:Yes.im so touched by your words,i love you too Ray

Raymond:Im so glad you are fine.but why did you faint?

Michelle:I think im having a fever

[Raymond touched her forehead]

Raymond:You are burning hot

Michelle:Ill be fine

Raymond:Ill keep you company here

Michelle:No

Raymond:Why?

Michelle:You stink

Raymond:Oops,ill go have a bath
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Ill update soon