Fan Fiction

One By One : A Murder Thriller [Completed]

by Shattered - Michelle

Chapter 28

12 / 25 / 2004

Finally,the long awaited day.there would a chapter explaning the so called clues,although some were unintentional.then ill explain about the story[and who i intended to write as the murderer]
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[9am]

[Michelle came out of her room]

[A guy was eating in the kitchen]

Michelle:So its you?

[The guy turned around]

Michelle:Sammul!

Sammul:Surprise its me?

Michelle:Why did you kill everyone of them?

Sammul:You really want to know?

Michelle:Yes

Sammul:Because all of you caused my sister's death

Michelle:Your twin sister,Lisa[Fictional chracter]?

Sammul:Its all your fault!

*Flashback*

[The fourteen of them plus Lisa were hiking in the forest]

Michelle:Im so hungry

Everyone:Me too

Raymond:Can someone go get some wild fruits or something?

Kenneth:Im too tired

Shirley:Me too

Lisa:Ill go,im still able to walk

Everyone:Thanks

Sammul:Sis,ill come with you

Lisa:Ok

[Sammul and Lisa went to get fruits]

[Suddenly a poisonous snake bit Lisa]

Lisa:Ouch

[The snake escaped]

Sammul:Sis

[Sammul realised she was poisoned]

Sammul:Are you ok?

Lisa:Y..es

Sammul:Help!help!

[The whole group of them rushed towards them]

Kenneth:What happened?

Sammul:My sister has been bitten by a poisonous snake

Bernice:What should we do now?

Sammul:Can someone help me carry her?she's too weak to walk

Everyone:But we are so tired

Sammul:Fine,ill carry her on my own

Lisa:Leave me here,Sam

Sammul:No,i must get you out of here

[Sammul carried Lisa and ran with all his might]

[Sammul was really tired and stopped for a break]

Bosco:Are you ok,Sammul?

Lisa:Im..dying..Sammul.good bye,take care

[Sammul put her down]

Lisa:Im sorry Sammul

[Lisa's eyes closed and her hand dropped on the ground]

Sammul:Sis!

*End of flashback*

Michelle:But why are you blaming us?

Sammul:If only one of you had helped,we would have made it.Lisa would not have die

Michelle:I know we are to blamed but..

Sammul:Ha ha ha

[Foam started to drip down Sammul's mouth]

Sammul:Ive poisoned myself.now the blame for our deaths would go upon you.you would also have to die

Michelle:Bet you never guessed it,Raymond isnt dead

[Raymond came into the mansion]

Sammul:You..

Michelle:It was a trick.i did not kill Raymond

Raymond:I saw you looking from the window when we were on the beach

Michelle:Im so glad i trusted you

[Michelle gave Raymond a hug]

Sammul:Oh well,at least i killed twelve of them

[Sammul collasped and died]

[Suddenly,they heard a boat arriving]

Raymond:We are saved!

[Michelle and Raymond ran out of the mansion,hand in hand]
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Yup yup thats the end!thats how the movie ended!

Now ill explain the stuff to you!