| Fan Fiction |
by Snowie Cupid
Love you lots...
kuv-hlub-koj Rux!!!!
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Title: .:.*.:.*Snow Fantasy*.:.*.:. {스노우 판타지}
Author: Snowie Cupid
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/snowiecupid7
Title: 5/5
Nice title. I think the asterisk represents the snowflakes so it really fits.
Poster/Background: 10/10
The poster is great. As for the background, the writings can be easily read. That's very important.
Forewords: 9/10
I like the forewords! From the foreword you can easily imagine what will happen next. Also, it is very interesting. It made me continue on reading. However, you didn't describe the characters briefly.
Plot: 15/15
I like it very much. Such a nice plot. Who would have thought that an orphan would be friends with a member of a group famous across the South-Asia region. You also explained what is happening detail by detail which is good because the readers can illustrate the scenario in their minds.
Creativity/Originality: 14/15
Very creative and original. I rarely read these kinds of story.
Writing Style: 10/10
I like your writing style because it is very descriptive and easy to understand. You did a pretty good job in describing the scene and the way the characters directed their speech. Even the spacing is good.
Flow: 10/10
The flow is nice. The changing of scenes is very clear.
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary: 9/10
You're really good in English! Very fluent but still, there are some errors in your grammar. Its just minor errors so it wouldn't entirely affect your story.
Characterizations: 4/10
As I said, you didn't describe the characters briefly. Ok, she is an orphan, she is friends with a member of a famous group. Then? What else? How about the rest of her friends. I only realized that there are more characters when I started reading every chapter.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I enjoyed reading it because of how you described the scene.
Total: 81/90
Nice work! You just need to improve you characterization then everything will be almost perfect. This is just my own opinion. Just take it as an advice..