Changed. (OneShot) Sequel - Completed.
by UnknownViet
Chapter 4
Withering Memories
Title 5/5
The title suits the story pretty well.
Foreword 10/15
It could be more informative character wise, but otherwise it serves as a good introduction.
Plot 9/15
The plot is lacking in some points but otherwise, it's pretty good and enjoyable.
Originality 7/10
Some points of the story are rather cliched or overused. Other then that, it's a pretty original story as far as I've read.
Style of writing 13/15
The flow of the story is pretty good, but some sentences tended to be a little choppy. Otherwise, your style is really good.
Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation 15/15
I didn't notice any errors spelling wise, so you get full points for this.
Descriptiveness 9/10
In this field, all I have to say is that you could be slightly more descriptive.
Overall Appearance 10/10
I like the poster and the subtleness of the background.
Creativity 5/5
Total 83/100
____________________________________________________________Reviewed by Demongoddess