| Fan Fiction |
by UnknownViet
Forewords: 8/10
Forewords are good, but it feels like something is missing.
Poster/Background: 10/10
A really eye appealing poster (:
Plot: 15/20
I like how the characters aren’t idol singers and instead ulzzangs. But it’s still a typical love story
Creativity/Originality: 7/10
Like I said earlier, it’s a typical love story, so nothing new there.
Flow: 5/5
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
Not too many grammar mistakes.
Characterization/Details: 8/10
You described the characters well, but I feel like I don’t know the characters well enough.
Writing Style: 9/10
Your writing style is great, you space things out so that its easier for your readers.
Overall Enjoyment: 3.5/5
It’s a nice story, but too common of a plot.
Sub Total: 78.5/100
Bonus: 5/5
Your stories are fun to read, so I hope you write more ^^
Total: 83.5/100
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Reviewed by Asiankiddo