Unerased Memories [ONE-SHOT][COMPLETED]

by Stepha.nie

Chapter 3

[REVIEW] Starmagic Creations

Rubric:
Title: 9/10
This title fits your story very well. The story revolves around her unerased memories. Very good!

Poster/Bg: 5/10
You don't have a poster or background yet, but I gave you points because you are getting one!

Forewords: 8/10
Pretty good forewords, but you could give some information about the characters.

Plot: 11/15
It's not bad, but I just feel that it is not very full, like the story isn't completed.

Creativity/Originality: 13/15
It is pretty creative, and different.

Writing Style: 8/10
Your writing style is nice. It is very clear and easy to read. Good!

Flow: 7/10
It kind of seemed like you were rushing it a little bit. Maybe you can slow down and allow the story to end by itself because it seemed like you were rushing it along.

Overall Enjoyment: 12/15
I liked your story!

Bonus: 2/5

TOTAL: 75/100

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Thanks for the review, promise will improve more in my next story. Between, how do you know i actually asking for a poster? LOL

Peace,
Stepha.nie