Fan Fiction

DEVIL IN MY VIEW [R] [COMPLETED]

by Sweet_love_23

Forewords

Da Dong stood still, taking the pain as tears flowed down his confused eyes.
"Tell me you'll stop stealing!" The Devil screamed.
"I promise not to ever steal again!" Da Dong lied.
The Devil grip on to the stick that is two inches thick in diameter and slamed in as hard as he could into the flesh of the boy.
Da Dong never screamed. He only let the tears of anger run from his eyes, but NEVER would he scream in defeat.

A few yards away, stood a girl at the age of 10 who smiled in victory. She loved seeing Da Dong cry and loved it when her father punished him.

"If I ever catch you stealing again, I'll kill you; you hear me?!" The Devil growled.
The Devil release the death grip and the boy fell to the ground. Da Dong felt so weak that his wounds were only the minor problem at the moment. He could feel his life being eaten away. Da Dong used his last strenght to get up on his foot.
"Why don't you just die already?!" The little girl yelled as she pushed Da Dong back into the ground.
Da Dong didn't bother fighting back. He knew that he was weak and needed to save his engery for later.
He know that the girl was trying to get him mad; she's a bitch and she knows it.

The girl smiled that same smile the Devil had on and turned to leave.
"I know it was you." Da Dong said wipping blood from his arm.
The girl stopped and turned to face him.
"What are you talking about, orphan?!" She played innocent.
"I saw you took it."
"I didn't take anything!" She deny.
"Selina!" The Devil's mate called from inside the house.
"I'm out here!" The Devil's offspring called.
"Get inside Selina! Lunch's ready!"
"Okay mommy!" She grin and made a face at Da Dong.
"Da Dong! Come do the dish!"
"Okay." Da Dong answered in a weak voice.
The girl stuck out her tounge and skipped inside.

Da Dong quickly got up and went inside to go do the dish. If he was lucky enough, maybe he could get some left over from the Devils lunch.

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DEVIL IN MY VIEW [R]

A Sweet_love_23 storyline

Starring:

Jiro Wang: An orphan. He was later taken in by a rich couple who replaced him as their missing son. After his rough childhood, he became cold and heartless.

Selina Ren: She bullied Da Dong [Jiro] as a child. She wished for nothing eles but for Jiro to die. But after he went missing, she decided to forget the boy she hated so much. After the years, she grew up to be very kind and loving. She also lost her mother during her teenage years.
But can her evil past be forgotten just because she's now changed?

Arron Yan: Rich, Spoil, and Hot. Can it get any better? He loves his life. Arron never liked losing or being the underdog. He always has to be at the top, the best.

Hebe Tian: Total nerd. She was born and raised by a poor family. She knows how life is like without a father and she always tries her best to help out her mother. Hebe has respect for everyone and is always friendly. She is down to earth and never expects anything extreme to happen to her.

He always said that she was the devil.....
But what happens when he himself turns into the devil???

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hey!!! Sweet_Love_23 here again with a new story!!!
haha how cool is that??!! lol jk.
Well, I'm just glad to be back! (not that I was ever gone!)

ohh and how do you like my ugly poster??? lol... I don't even want to know. Nevermind that!! I made it myself because I didn't want to bother others. I suck.... hehehe...

just a quick reminder... this is an R rated story so PLEASE, little kids DO NOT READ. (not that I discourage reading, just that this is not the type you should be reading) and this time around, I'm not giving warnings for R rated parts so don't blame me .<

And if you are intrested in reading my first R rated story it's called:

Stay With Me

www.winglin.net/fanfic/sweet_love_23_

and it's sequal

Stay With Me 2

http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/sweet_love_2/