Fan Fiction

Are You A Good Girl Or Bad Girl?[R] {HIATUS}

by SweetLips_Kmf09

Chapter 2

Grand Opening!!!

Hey everybody here is the beginning of everything! To let my other reader know this is not a celebrity story like where DBSK are celebrity they are just rich. Hahahaha basic it is like the same. The clubs is not like a stripper’s club but host club. At the club it is both a club and a host club because the girls and guys working in there talk to their customers. A new club (host) is opening, now the two girl club is competing to see which one goes down.

DBSK/PARTNERS and age

Kim Jaejoong-23/Jung Hyebin-22
Jung Yunho-23/Park Lynn-22
Park Yoochun-23/Choi JiHyun-21
Kim Junsu-22/Sie SoonBok-21
Shim Changmin-21/Brianna Wong-20

THE 4 OTHER BOYS/ PARTNERS and age

Park Jaebeom-22/Kim JiHye-20
Kim HyunJoong-23/Park Chaehwan-20 turning 21
Choi Seunghyun, Top-21/Song EunSoo-21
Kwon Jiyong-20/Kwon Min Li-20

Simple Korean word for those that don’t know.

*omo - OMG
*yah - Hey
*oppa - girl's elder brother/ boyfriend
*unnie - girl's elder sister
*ne - yes
*umma - mom
*ahjumma – old lady/ auntie
*bwoh – what
*hyung – guy’s older brother
* Annyeong - hello

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“Ahh shit we are going to be late!” Bri screamed at Lynn.

“Aish man shh…” Lynn hushed Bri at how she was over reacting.

“Woman! Not man I don’t have a freaken dick.” Bri yelled.

“Man kids these days.” Lynn rolled her eyes. And walk out of their apartment with Bri following behind. “Bri it’s ok only 4:49 pm.” Lynn whined.

“Ugh unnie you are so lazy! It is only 11 more minutes then we’ll be late, let go it is the grand opening and if we were late and the girls are going to yelled at me! You see as for you “old woman” they can’t yell at you but to me yes.”

“YAH this old woman have to send you to work every night you wanna get out and walk there instead.” Lynn snapped since the old woman thing came out.

“FINE! But you work there too.” Bri said being a smartass.

“YAH” Lynn waved her hand in the air about to hit Bri.

“Omo Omo it is going to hurt!” Bri said sarcastically.

“Why did you have to come over here, I could have gone today by myself.” Lynn asked.

“because I love you to be helping you today. You can thank god that I don’t live here or should I?” Bri answered.

“no please don’t I’m thanking god already.” Lynn said not want her to be here anymore than this. They got in Lynn Ferrari and drove off to DT.

~@ DT~

*scratch of disks as music plays*

“Yah Jaebeom stop that over there and help me with these bottles.” Taegoon walk backed outside to the truck carrying all the liquor. Jaebeom took off the headphone he had on and jumped off the DJ podium. Running after Taegoon, the door swung opening hitting Jaebeom in the nose making him fall down.

“FUCK who the hell.” Jaebeom looked up to see a person coming into the club in sweats and a beanie, he stood up. “WATCH WHERE YOU’RE GOING Jihye!”

“Shut up.” walking by Jihye punched Jaebeom on the arm which causing him to fall down again.

“ARGHHHH I SHOULD HAVE STAYED IN AMERICA!!!! I HATE STUPID KOREAN GIRLS!!!!” Jaebeom yelled out in English.

“Oppa!” Chaehwan and Soonbok ran up to him and yelled at him after he was just punch by Jihye. “What did you do to Jihye now? Ugh she got even madder.”

“GOD HELP ME I DON’T WANT TO BE HERE WITH THESE STUPID KOREAN GIRLS.” Jaebeom continued in english.

“PLUSH~ boy! You’re Korean too and also you wanted to be here too.” Lynn came in the club and smacked his head.

“AISH why is everyone hitting me. And you and Bri are late.” He yelled and pointed at the 2 that he thought were a few minutes off.

“Nun Uh!” Bri protested, pointing to her phone it was 4:59 pm. “Ha we actually came early today.” Bri stated, Lynn laughed. Walking off the scene where Jaebeom was still on the ground. Jihyun ran to the back yelling “UNNIES!!!” making her step on the unfortunate guy on the ground, Jaebeom.

“UNNIES!!! Have you guys seen my hairbands!! I had like three!” Jihyun looked all over the table and on the ground. Her gray eyes looked cold but the happy look on her face was totally throwing off the cool cold look.

“Yah Jihyun throw away those contacts it doesn’t match you.” Hyebin yelled at Jihyun.

“But I’m still looking for my hair bands.” Jihyun whined while Hyebin was going to wave a hand up to hit her. Min Li ran to stop Hyebin.

“Unnie, unnie don’t hit her.” Min Li held on to Hyebin arm that was going to hit Jihyun. Min Li tried to hold back Hyebin with all her might.

“Jihyun unnie can you take those off please it will hurt your eyes and make your vision harder to see when you don’t even have them on.” Min Li pleaded for Jihyun to take the contacts off.

“NO! I don’t want to.” Jihyun yelled out.

“Found them!” EunSoo screamed to Jihyun.

“YAY thanks….. give it to me.”

“No not till you get those contacts off.”

“Why is everybody against my contacts and me @#$%^!&*!!!! Jihyun shout out her famous gibberish cuss word.

“YAH!!! Shut the hell you freaken ditz. EunSoo give Jihyun her hair bands” Jihyun smirked, “Jihyun take those contacts off,” she rolled her eyes, “YAH you listen or else ok!” Lynn roared at them because she got annoyed.

“Ne unnie.” Jihyun slowly took off her contacts.

“Hyebin stop pouting and Min Li you don’t have to hold her down anymore. Now everybody go get ready we have an hour left and you guys know how long you take now hurry.” Lynn ushered them to the backroom to get ready.

“Fine Umma.” The Jihyun, EunSoo, Min Li, and Hyebin said at the same time.

“Yah I’m am not your UMMA!!!! Lynn shriek at them.

Laughing, they counter back a comment to Lynn. “Ok then AHJUMMA!!!!” they all scream together then started to run.

“YAH!!!! I’m not that old yet damn you idiots.” Lynn ran after them trying to punish them.

All laughing and having fun, the nine of them was beginning to go get ready but were still playing around.

~@ club GG~

“OPPA~ come on lets go dance.” Tiffany pulled on Yunho’s hand. He rolled his eyes and shook off her hand and went back to talking to the girl next to him.

Changmin being the only guy without a girl by his side because he didn’t want one of the girls here, while many wanted him. He looked to the left, Junsu and Jaejoong with girls by their side whispering things in their ears. And to the right; Yoochun and Yunho had girls on their laps.

He looked away disgusted, Changmin looked around the club and settle his eyes outside. The rest of the group looked his way seeing him made a face. Looking at him his eyes traveled right through the window. Jaejoong worried about the maknae of their group if he wasn’t satisfied. Junsu shoved the girl next to him away and went to Changmin to look out where Changmin was looking too. They stared out across the streets at where many people were lined up to a club and waiting for a new club to open.

“Eh honey~” Yoochun said sweetly to the girl on his lap, “Whose club is that over there?”

“umm.” she stutter not wanting to tell.

“That club is a whore club they are so ugly, don’t even think about going over there you’ll throw up.” Jessica said the one with Jaejoong.

“Whatever.” Changmin said to ignore Jessica’s comment. Yunho and Junsu laughed.

While Changmin was stared over there again; the peoples behind started to get up out of the seats. “YAH Ken what time is it?” one of the guys said to his friend.

“Almost 6 why?” the one not knowing anything answered them.

“Ok now let’s go.”

“WHY! It’s my party and this is where you guys wanted me to be right.”

“BWOH! no this isn’t it, we just had to wait for the real club to open.” The three guys pushed their friend out the door and ran across to the other club. The girls that were just ditch rolled their eyes and left.

“Hyung can we go check it out.” Changmin asked out curiously.

“No you guys are staying here.” Tiffany said out.

“No worry hun we will come back if we don’t like them.” Yunho winked at her.

The guys stood up and left but not before Yoochun can give Yuri an air kiss, Yunho a smack on Sunny’s ass, a grope to Teayeon from Junsu, and Jaejoong… well you would know what he did of course being the player he is, slipping his hands into Jessica’s skirt. Changmin ran out first thanking to leave.

They walked out coolly across the street and when they came to the line it had already been filled up to the next block turning the corner both filled with girls and guys. Comparing the new club to GG they people there at GG were mostly guys, and here….. they looked up to see the name of the club … “DT GRAND OPENING”.

“Yo Taeyang!” Jaejoong yelled out seeing Taeyang the guy blocking the entrance to the club.

“What’s up Jae.” Taeyang replied.

“So this is your club eh?” Junsu said out in his squealing voice that made everybody looked at him.

“No I’m just working here as the bouncer.” Taeyang answered Junsu’s question.

“So are there lots of girls here.” Yoochun asked another question.

“See for yourself.” Taeyang ended the conversation and let them in the club even though they had just cut the whole line.

“Yah why do they get to go in oppa” a girl yelled out in the back to Taeyang.

Yoochun walked back there to the girl. Holding her chin and he said in a soft tone, “You wouldn’t mind if we go in first right.” The girl blushed extremely red and all she could do was nod. He walked back smirking into the club.

In the club, it was dark with little light but spacious. Tables near the wall with cushioned seats connected in a U like a couch while the dancing floor was in the middle. The bar table was made out of glass with many different kind of liquor and drinks behind the table. There were seats in front of the bar in case people would want to sit there. A podium was in the corner like for a DJ. About 10 minutes after there were already lots of people in the club.

5 more minutes passed they were getting bored and the club was packed, everybody was confused not knowing where the DJ and bartenders were. When Junsu turned around about to leave but the lights started to flash, the music banging from the corner starting with the song “Number 1” by Big Bang. The light center up on the podium the DJ was suddenly there, holding one hand to his ear which was holding up one side of his head phones to his ear.

The music stops and everybody set their eyes at the DJ. Jaejoong impressed that this was a actual club and how good the DJ was doing. The DJ jumped over his music station and introduce himself.

He had flat hair and was in bagged jean with a black blinging belt hooked around his waist. Huge headphones around his neck, a white hat with NY sign, a white shirt that was hugged on to his body showing off his muscle which made girls squealed at seeing him, a white suit jacket over his under shirt and to pull it off even better he had on white Nikes, with graffiti marks on it.

“Hey what up this is DJ Jaebeom-minda well I hope you guys enjoy your time here. Just holler out a song and I’ll play it for you. Hoping that you guys have fun here being our costumers. And you guys can call me DJ Jay it is all ok.” He finished his speech but girls were still screaming at how hot he looked. The rest of the employers came up to introduce themselves.

“Annyeong Taegoon-minda here. I’ll be your bartender at your service.” He wink to the girls down there. Many girls blushed which cause him to bit his bottom lips smiling at those girls down there.

“Yo this is Taeyang the bouncer to the club. Have fun but do anything else I’ll kick you out.” The girls awed for Taeyang at how strong he was.

As the guys walked behind into the shade other people keep coming up. A few girls came up in white tube dresses with black belts under their chest.

“Annyeong.” Three girls stood there and greeted the crowd while guys wowed them. “Min Li-minda” her black hair draped down on one side of her shoulders showing a hint of brown in them. Her dark brown eyes showed cheekiness in her smiling with dimples appearing. Her long leg curved with her body curves.

“Bri-minda.” Her long, curly hair shined in the light while her eyes showed a tinkle of sparkle as the light reflected off her eyes. Her light, caramel colored skin made her skin looked smooth.

“And Jihye-minda.” Jihye raised a victory sign. Her pasted shoulder length hair waved in the air when the air blew. She is short with tan skin the pulls off the calm look where it looks like she can talk to anybody.

“We are the youngest here so we would be happy to be a good host to you guys and girls.” Smiling; each one of them bowed and left behind.

“Annyeong we’re Chaehwan, Jihyun, and Soonbok.” They bowed and looked at the crowd.
“Being your hosts will be our pleasure.”

Chaehwan’s long black straight hair hanged down her back making her cheek puff up when she smiles. Her big brown eyes tells all that she is the shy type and her skin glowed below the light.

Jihyun had short hair till her shoulder and had the tips flared out. But her eyes had contacts of black speckles there. Smiling to the crowd the dimple on her right cheek crease into her cheek.

Soonbok’s lips pouted out but very small only. Her layered black hair sit just right below her shoulder blades. While her long eyelashes blinks in front of her almond shaped eyes with her high cheek bones.

“Annyeong and kamsahamnida for coming, I’m Lynn.” She have a little bit more development in the chest than the others while her waist was small. Giving off the leader vibe her hair was layered where some of her hair is cut to her shoulder then others down lower. Her hazel eye shows that she isn’t full Korean. Her lips were shiny and pouty too.

“Hyebin here.” Hyebin raised her hand. Her large eyes show innocents with her face. Her shoulder length hair dangles behind her hair. Her lips small and shaped into her perfect smile.

“And finally but not least, EunSoo.” EunSoo said happily. Her long, black hair was tied up in a pony tail while her bangs are to her eyes. The light-tanned skin she had made her look taller than usual. Her glasses was black but gave her the cool fun look to everyone.

“We are your host here, so we would like to get to know you guys and girls better if you would only want to we would never force anything.” Lynn continued, the girls bowed and got off the stage.

As the girls left the DJ podium 2 tall figure appear out from the shadows. The 2 figures were both guys and caused some girls to scream at their hotness and guys to bawl out at their coolness.

“Annyeong this is Danny and Teddy here we are the CEO of DT. We are so happy to have already so much customers and hopefully this here is a treating to all you guys and girls. Drinks are free till 10 pm ok. Welcome your stay here and as Taeyang said don’t cause trouble.” Danny winked at some older women that were there to see them.

“Yes as Danny said we are the CEO of DT. This is our promotional club and is the first DT to be open not counting the other clubs that are named differently. Well enjoy your time here.” Teddy continued then left the stage. As the introduction was done Jaebeom let out music while the girls served drinks to the people at the table and talked to them.

As the club started Changmin and the rest were in total shocked they were surprise at how hot the girls were. Even though there were only nine girls there it made up for more than 50 girls in GG... When the dong bang boys past the girls, the girls just looked at them and smiled back. Jaejoong and Yunho past the girls smiling and nodding their heads Changmin seemed to not keep his eyes out for where he was going and bump into somebody.

“Yah watch where you are going.” A guy pushed him and he fell down. Junsu and Yoochun was going to punch the guy that just pushed Changmin on the ground but four girls came running over there to help.

“Sir, sir please don’t cause a ruckus here we wouldn’t want you to be kicked out on the grand opening night.” Min Li held back the guy that shoved Changmin to the ground. He smiled at Min Li and left.

“Ahjusshi please don’t hit any body here.” Soonbok took a hold of Junsu and told him. He looked at her up and down then bit his lips because he didn’t know what to do. Should he say no and be a bad boy or listen and be the good boy it confuse him…. No wait she confused him. All Junsu could do was nodded like a little boy which made Soonbok smile widely at him and let him go.

“Yah old guy.” Yoochun looked at her. “Yea you don’t be barging in our club and start a fight.” Jihyun bluntly said it out. He raised his left eye brow and smirk.

‘Old guy eh’ Yoochun thought to himself and walk towards her. He was about to topple over on purpose but someone pulled her away.

“Hyunnie!” Chaehwan pulled Jihyun and apologized for her actions.

“Yah Chaehwan we don’t have to apologize to him.” Jihyun yelled back.

“Unnie let just go.” Walking away Chaehwan pulled Jihyun away. Yoochun chuckled and walked back to the table.

“See did you hear that he just laughed at us, OH MY @#$%^!&*!!!!!” Jihyun yelled which caused Yoochun to laugh even harder.

“Umm sorry for what my unnie said to your hyung.” Bri slowly helped Changmin up.

‘it ok my fault too.” he smiled at her and she did back.

*Thump, thump, thump.* ‘aish stupid heart stop beat so hard.’ Changmin yelled his heart. Bri helped Changmin up from the ground but Changmin slipped and fell on top of her.

“Umm this is awkward can you get off.” She pushed him off of her softly, her hands on his chest. when she got up she swept the dirt off her dress, she bowed and turned around to go back.

“*Thump, thump, thump.* “ARGH!” Changmin slammed his hand on his chest.

“Calm down Tarzan your Jane isn’t here.” A voice behind him said. It was low and deep. Changmin turned around to see TOP.

“Hyung!” they high five each other and TOP follow Changmin to the rest of the group. Jaejoong finally found a table and was join by the rest of the group and TOP. Yunho starred at TOP.

“TOP is there anyone else coming here that you know?” Yunho said to TOP.

“Oh umm Jiyong, HyunJoong hyung and YoungSaeng hyung are coming. Why are you guys here, don’t you guys always play with those girls over there at GG.” TOP did a thumb pointing backwards behind them.

“They got tiring. And this is a Grand Opening why not be here plus the girls here are hot no wonder there are only a few of them. All the hidden beauties are here. See look at me.” Jaejoong comment the club and himself. TOP shook his head and answered, “Jiyong and hyung told me to come today since I wasn’t doing anything. So..” he turned his head to face all of them, “you guys haven’t got any girls from here yet?” The guys didn’t answer him. Turning his head around he spotted a girl at the side with killer legs. She walked closer going to hand some body their drinks.

“Hey HOTTIE!” TOP said out loud to the girl with killer legs. EunSoo looked at the person who called out hottie. TOP nodded and pointed a finger for her to come. She smirked and shook her head but walk towards TOP. While girls who saw what he did shook their heads knowing what TOP wants but what his is getting.

“Watch and learn from the master.” TOP said coolly like he was better than all of them. As EunSoo arrived at the table she smiled at them.

TOP looked her up and down slowly and said sensually. “So hottie you wanna be my girl?”

She smiled even bigger and went down to his ear. “Hottie? It’s ok I am good, I don’t need to be anyone girl, but I do get hot and sweaty seeing you do every little thing you do but you don’t even know my name for us to get it started. It not nice to not know a hottie’s name right.” She said sexily in TOP’s ear while breathing out hot air on TOP’s ear slowly panting each word for him to hear.

She stood back up and bit her lips for him then winking at him and left. Top smirked and shook his head at what had just happen to him. He got played.

“HA did our TOP just get played by a girl.” HyunJoong popped out from behind them. HyunJoong laughed at TOP letting the rest of the group know that TOP just got played. YoungSaeng appeared afterwards and they all tried to squeeze in but since it couldn’t fit HyunJoong, Jaejoong and Yunho when to go since in the next table.

…..

“Jihyun don’t do that he was one of our customers.” Chaehwan said.

“So he is Siwon friend and I don’t like him, when ever he come over he is so annoying.” She said pouting.

“Oh shove it.” Jihye said, “we are at work so don’t be acting that way, remember what Danny and Teddy said no causing trouble even though we are employees here.” They nodded.

All the girl was suddenly at the bar table just talking to each other. Lynn ran over there and hugged Chaehwan.

“Hey, hey you guys want to place a bet.” Lynn who always placing bets came over to them just to have a bet.

“Ok let’s do it.” Jihye and EunSoo said out immediately. Those both always try to win against Lynn but always lose because Lynn cheats but that is all about the game you can cheat all you want to win.

“No unnie you’ll win again because you will cheat.” Chaehwan and Min Li said at the same time.

“Hey nobody’s telling you not to cheat.” Lynn shrugged.

“What is the prize?” Hyebin, usually the first one to asked out the prize.

“Ok since everyone have to play in this one and it was my bet then ….” She paused for a minute, “my Ferrari.” Lynn said out.

Soonbok gasped. “unnie but you love your car.”

Lynn shrugged again. “it is worth it.”

“Let’s all do it now.” Five out of the eight girls said.

“YES!” Lynn put a fist up in the air and pulled it back down. “Ok the prize will be my Ferrari for a week but I get to pick the assignment of the bet.” Some of the girls nodded excitedly and the other ones nodded in defeat.

“Ok, ok, ok, calm down.” She said to the girls but it was her that was panting hardly, she was almost laughing. “Ok *breath* the assignment is to get a guys number.”

“HA that is easy!” Hyebin said.

“From those guys.” Lynn pointed to the group at the table.

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Wahhh hahahaha leaving a trail for you to love…
Hahahahaha
Well I been working all week at this sorry that it isn’t that good
Girls or boys comment!!
I be waiting on your comments
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Oh and happy Birthday to my dongsaeng Shin Dong Ho from U-Kiss
He is so cute but boi leave the bowl cut and go back to the corn rolls.
Next chap soon!!!!

June 29, 2009