Fan Fiction

Are You A Good Girl Or Bad Girl?[R] {HIATUS}

by SweetLips_Kmf09

Chapter 5

At Night [NEW POSTER]

THANX TO MIN LI FOR THE POSTER I LOVE IT VERY MUCH
SOORY PEOPLE UMM MY POSTER MAY NEVER COME POUT BECAUSE
THEY ARENT AS GOOD AS I THOUGHT LOL WELL AGAIN
THANK YOU MIN LI FOR THE POSTER HAHAH LOVE IT AGAIN
HERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER

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“HOLY SHIT……..” the girls ran to the person on the ground. Lynn shook the person on the ground trying to get her up.

The girls surrounded the person that fell down. “Yah Soonbok, wake up.” Lynn shook her trying to get her up.

Min Li started to cry seeing Soonbok not awakening.

The guys immediately rushed over there. Jaebeom jumped over the DJ podium to help. Taegoon ran as fast as he could around the bar table. Jiyong hugged Min Li from crying. Junsu saw that it was Soonbok and kneel down to help her. Touching her head he was going to pick her up.

“YAH don’t touch her you don’t even know her.” Taegoon took her body away from Junsu while Junsu just starred at her being carried away.

He putted her on the couch in the staff room. The girls surrounded her as Teddy and Danny came in.

“Hyebin you can take the night off see that Soonbok gets home.” Teddy was serious he cared for all the girls like they were his own daughters.

“Ne Teddy.” Hyebin obeyed the order.

“I send a doctor to your house to check up on her.” Danny looked at his phone for the best doctor he had.

“Ok girls I guess we are closing early today.” Teddy looked at them and they nodded.

…..

“Wow who was that girl? I hope she didn’t get hurt.”

“Umm excused us we would like to announce that the club will close in 10 minutes because of our personal business. Thank you for supporting us tonight though.” Danny and Teddy got off the stage. And customers began to go back home.

“It is only 12:45.” One passerby said.

“Hey they have their problems it ok.” Another passerby said. After everybody left the staffs began to leave too.

Hyebin packed hers and Soonbok stuff and dropped it into her car. Taegoon carried Soonbok to Hyebin’s car laying her down on the passenger side of the car. He smooth Soonbok hair and kiss her head.

“Be careful Soonbok” he whispered in her ear then closed the door. “Hyebin drive carefully.”

“Ne oppa I will. Goodnight.” Hyebin got into the car and left.

Jihye, Bri and EunSoo left the club grabbing on to Lynn’s keys and dangling in front of her to get her pissed off.

“YAH if you don’t want me to take those keys away you guys better go home right now.” Lynn bark at them.

“SHEESH ahjumma we’re going we’re going. AHHH!!!” Jihye screamed when Lynn chased them out.

“Crazy girls.” Jiyong said sitting on a stool waiting for Min Li. “Min Li are you done yet.” He yelled from the outside.

“Oppa I never told you to wait.” Min Li came out binding her hair.

Licking his lick he grabbed Min Li’s hand to stop her from binding her hair.

“Min Li leave that down so I can pull on it tonight.” He smirked and dragged Min Li to their house while Min Li playfully hit his chest.

…..

“Wow what happen here why is everyone gone.” HyunJoong appeared seeing barely anyone in the club.

“Umm they left and I am about to leave too.” Chaehwan grabbed her bag.

“Bye unnies, bye oppas.” Min Li said goodbye to Lynn and Jihyun who haven’t left yet and to the boy staffs. Going outside she totally ignore HyunJoong.

“Eh where do you think your going?” she turned around to see HyunJoong standing at the passenger side door.

“Going home.” She turned around again and walked a few more steps.

“Oh no you don’t.” HyunJoong ran after her making her laughing and running too. But she was a bit too slow. HyunJoong lifted her up on his shoulders and locked her in his car. He got in and started to drive. Smiling at her he reach for her hand and held it.

…..

“Ahhh I’m tired.” Jihyun said.

“Then leave I’ll just clean up then talk to teddy and Danny then leave.” Lynn assure her.

“Ok unnie, I’m going to call oppa to pick me up do you want us to wait for you.”

“Nah I’m good just go home today was rough for you guys.” Lynn answered then picked up the bottles and threw them away.

…..

“Oppa? Can you pick me up?” Jihyun said in the phone.

“No fine your own ride.” Siwon playfully said.

“OPPA~!” she screamed in her phone.

“Fine where are you?” Siwon laughed at her.

“AT WORK YOU DUMMY!” Jihyun said even louder but laughing too.

“Ok I’ll pick up in 30 min.” Siwon said.

“Oppa! That is so long oppa….oppa!!!!!!!” Siwon hanged up on her.

She closed her phone and stood outside in the cold.

“What’s a pretty lady like you doing out here.” A guy greeted her and came to stand next to her. Jihyun being freaked out moved away without looking at the guy.

He saw her moved and in one swift move he trapped her to the wall. His legs moved her legs spreading them.

“YAH what are you doing.” Jihyun screamed.

“SHH! It’s just me.” Yoochun backed up the light and Jihyun saw him.

“You freaken HOBO get off of me.”

“Yah I’m not doing any thing I’m just cold.” He opened her jacket and dug himself into her jacket.

“Umm… Hello!!! Personal space.” She felt his breathing on her neck. A warm sensation rose up in her body. Yoochun began to kiss her neck.

“Ah~” Jihyun let out a little moan then covered her mouth.

Yoochun’s eyes got perky; he peeled her hands away and kissed her. He gently kisses her making every second last. Jihyun was breathing hard when the kiss broke apart. Her breath was all smog and night gave away the cloud of air coming out her breath.

“You liked that didn’t you?” Yoochun snickered.

“No I had kissed better people.” She said out making Yoochun angry. Again he grabbed her face and kissed her but this time it was rough, his hand trail down to her shirt pulling it up.

She pulled his face away from her and pulled her shirt down. Then looking up at him “no way are you going there you haven’t even earn it.” She laughed then pushed Yoochun away.

“Fine I just give you something to remember me by.” Yoochun slammed Jihyun to the wall slowly he kissed her shoulders. Going to a certain spot, he swirled his tongue on that spot and started to suck.

“Yah stop it. Yoochun stop it.” She pushed his head away but there was a piece of saliva on her shoulder. She wiped it and looked at what he did.

“YAH WHY DID YOU GIVE ME A HICKEY!!!” she yelled at Yoochun who just wiped his lips with his right thumb.

“To show to other that you are mine.” Yoochun said.

“YAH you don’t even know me.” Jihyun said.

“Oh but I will.” He smile and began to come closer to her but a light beamed.

“Jihyun are you there.” a voice called out walking out from a gray BMW.

“Siwon oppa.” Jihyun got happy and glared at Yoochun then went to the car.

“Siwonnie take me home.” Jihyun said tiredly hugging on to Siwon’s arm.

Siwon who couldn’t see how that person shrugged and got in to the car.

“What the hell I just gave her time on cloud nine and now she is with Siwon!” he frustrately rubbed his hair. “And I wait all this time out here for her too what the hell is going on?”

…..

They got out buy Jihye’s and EunSoo’s house. Bri walked out.

“Thanks unnie it’s ok I’ll walk to my house from here.” Bri thanked the other two.

“Bri are you sure.” EunSoo answered.

“Yep I’m going, see y’all guys later.” She needed to walk a couple block home.

“Hopes she get home safe.” EunSoo said turning back around to going in the house but Jihye was still in the car examining all the different technology in it.

…..

Bri walked home slowly, enjoying the stars under her. This is one of the reasons she liked to walk home.

The music jammed in his car as he drove past her. Looking at the rear view mirrors he saw her. Turning down the music he reversed back to talk to her.

“Eh umm… you.” He had the window rolled down but she only saw the darkness talking to her. She ignored that person and kept walking.

“YAH I’m talking to you.” He yelled finally getting angry. He jumped out of his car and held her shoulders from the behind then turned her around.

She saw him and was surprised. “Hey you’re the Mr.…. umm that slow guy that made me lost.”

He chuckle. “I have a name.”

“I do too.”

“Again it is Changmin. But I never got yours personally.” he smirked.

“Umm I’m Bri.” She said. “But anyways nice meeting you out here on the streets I got to go home. Bye.”

“Do you need a ride?” He pointed to the white convertible.

“Umm no thanks I can walk home.” She just wanted to get away from that guy.

“Come on the least I can do is sent you home since I made you lose the … car right?” Changmin smiled out his white teeth and gently pull her hand to the white convertible. He opened the passenger seat and closed it for her.

‘Wow this is weird.’ Bri thought to herself.

“Umm where do you live?” He asked for directions.

‘Should I tell him, he might be a stalker, but if I don’t will he leave me alone.’ Bri kept thinking to her self not answering him.

Changmin lay back on the seat. “If you’re not going to tell me we might have to be in my car the whole time. I just don’t want a pretty girl to walk home alone it is dangerous at night.” He smiled happily.

“Okay… umm here this is where I live.” She ended up telling him.

…..

“Ahjusshi can you help me.” Hyebin asked the manger of their apartment. He came and got Soonbok from the car and put her in her room.

“Thank you ahjusshi.” Hyebin bowed.

“Honey what happened to her.” The ahjumma came in.

“Ahjumma Soonbok fainted at work so we just came home earlier than usual.” Hyebin smiled and the old couple went back to their room.

“Soonbok argh I hope you don’t get any more sick.” Hyebin pleaded on her knees in front of Soonbok.

…..

“Ah Jiyong I’m so tired” Min Li said when Jiyong carried her on his back.

Don’t worry babe you be full of energy in a minute.” He pushed her on the bed. Kissing her he took off her shirt and her bra revealing her round boobs. As his hands fondle with her chest making she moaned in during their kisses. Her hand draped over his shoulder and her legs wrapped around his hip.

“Min Li you’re squeezing me.” Jiyong complain.

“So you going to rip me.” she pouted.

“What are you saying we already do it before how am I going to rip you.” Jiyong was confused.

“Because you are …….huge.” she said the last part fast.

He laughed. “But it wont hurt instead it will be all pleasures.” He began to take off her pants throwing them to the side. Slowly his finger went inside her panties and stroked her inner thigh.

“AHHH!” she moaned at his little touch.

“Min Li you are already so wet.” Jiyong lifted his finger to see her juices.

“Ew put that down.” She answered embarrassed.

Jiyong quickly took off all his clothes. He intertwines his finger with hers. And pushed in he grunted while she moaned. “Min Li ah you are so tight.”

Going a slow pace they made love romantically kissing each other and having no other care for in the world. Jiyong increased his pace slamming into her. She lifted her hips higher to get him to go faster. Thrusting in and out his member grew bigger ready to explode. Trying to get him to cum first, Min Li moved her hip up into his member, which made Jiyong groan in pleasure. Then afterwards Min Li climaxed. Their sweat body held close to each other. Laying on the bed together they both fell asleep, Min Li’s head on Jiyong’s shoulder.

…..

Lynn finished the meeting with Danny and Teddy and was about to leave.

“Yah Lynn you need a ride?” Taegoon and Taeyang offered.

“No I need a walk.” Smiling to them she turned around and left.

Walking out from the back it was darker. She pulled her phone out from her pocket. It was almost 3 in the morning.

“Yawn. I shouldn’t have stayed that long.” She grumbled out.

*RUSTLE RUSTLE*

Lynn heard things rustle behind her, she looked back to see nothing. Tilting her head to the side she kept walking.

She now hears footstep following behind her. She stops, it stopped. Walking again she swiftly turned around again to look behind her. A blow of wind came making a whistling noise with footsteps again.

She was now scared and saw the corner of the block. Reaching over there she turned.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” she screamed with fright when she bumped into Yunho.

“Yah what wrong.” He held his chest when she screamed.

“Yah you scared me.” she said.

*bump, dashes*

Yunho and Lynn looked at the street that Lynn had just come from. They saw a figure move but wasn’t sure of it.

“Umm do you need a ride home?” Yunho asked sacred.

“Umm I think that will be good.” Lynn held on Yunho’s shirt and went to his car.

…..

“Damn I almost got to talk to her. But he came. ARGH! DAMN IT.” He yelled as he walked out from the alley.

“Stupid fucken guy!” the guy yelled and walked away wearing a hat.

…..

Sorry guys this chapter isn’t that great I didn’t but any heart in it. Sorry I had summer school so I had to focus on that.

Umm Happy 17th Birthday LEE TAEMIN!!!!! I hope you and SHINee very good health in the future even though Onew look like he is sick. Happy birthday!!!!

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Next chap soon!!!!

July 18, 2009