Fan Fiction

Are You A Good Girl Or Bad Girl?[R] {HIATUS}

by SweetLips_Kmf09

Chapter 6

HOT DOC

Hey girls remember how I told all you guys that I lost you guys application???!!!! Hehehe clumsy me well I was wondering if you guys can give it to me again!!
Well if anyone need the app here it is again
Please send it to my email-> sweet_lips_kmf09@hotmail.com
APPLICATION

[NAME]: your name girls!!!!!! Of course

[AGE]: you don’t have to put this I have this one done hhehehehehe

[BIRTHDATE]: you can make up a birth date put the year as the age up putted up there but don’t make it too similar to any of the boys. This is also for the time line of ages.

[NICKNAMEÐNCITY]:???????? Is your character’s nickname and ethnicity

[APPERENCE]: OK! So here is the MAIN need for the storylines. I need you all to describe what YOU WANT YOURSELF to look like. I don’t care if you think that you are already “sexy” enough; just give me a description of yourself. “Yourself” can either be you or your character. Describe your looks like: tomboy, innocents, nerdy. From the body figure to eye color, well basically from top to the bottom. I would like it a lot if you don’t give me a picture of yourself.

[PERSONALITY]: rewrite your personality ok hopefully it doesn’t have to be long or short either one by your choice. But the longer it is the better chances of describing yourself or your character better. Well describe how you or your character is like here. Describe good. It doesn’t have to be in a paragraph you can put in bullets too if you like.

[LIKES]: PLEASE have 10 to 15 likes that you really like

[DISLIKES]: have dislikes!!!! I know some stories don’t have the dislike but I would want you to show me what you don’t like you can’t say anything. Again 10 to 15 dislikes.

[HOBBIES or TALENTS]: if you have any jot them down here. (Optional)

[EXTRA?]: I don’t have you girls’ family members/friends anymore so again: numbers, names you guys can asked to be related to anyone but the Dong bang boys also it won’t be a guarantee though????

[PARTNER]: PLEASE put in your guy!!!! muahahahaha

[PASSWORD]: Give me a hot picture of Yunho!!!!!!

[RANDOM QUESTION]: PLEASE ask any question if you have any problem ok I would be glad to help anyone who is confused.

[EMAIL]: your email!!! Just to comfirm

Ok girls good luck reapplying. >. GD’s part)

Min Li’s phone rang.

“Yeoboseyo?”

“Ah Min Li is that you?” the person on the other line asked.

“No this is Jiyong.”

“Omo…..umm this is Bri umm… never mind you guys umm can go back to what you were doing…beep beep beep.” Bri hanged up.

Jiyong squinted his eyes at Min Li phone. Tossing it back to the ground he hugged Min Li even tighter.

“Hmm, Jiyong who was that?” Min Li woke up to find her phone on the ground. “YAH! Why is my phone on the ground?” she slapped Jiyong’s back and got off the bed to get it.

“Ow!” Jiyong screamed.

When Min Li bent down to get her phone Jiyong swiftly pulled her on him. They were still naked. When Min Li finally noticed that she felt his member poking her butt.

“Jiyong let go.” Min Li tried to peel his hands off but it didn’t work. “Come on Min Li one more time.” Jiyong pleaded.

“Araso.” Min Li pushed him on to the bed. “But then it is my turn to take in control.” She smirked with her on top and him below her.

“What ever you want is yours babe.” Jiyong closed his eyes and wanted the pleasures began. She kissed his lips, giving him only pecks and not a full one.

Going to his ear she nibbled on it and whispered. “Jiyong, wait here I got something for you but don’t open you eyes yet.”

She got up from him while his eyes where still closed. Laughing quietly she grabbed all of her clothes and ran to the bathroom slamming the door with the lock locking it.

“YAH you!” Jiyong eyes shot open and notice her clothes gone. Banging on the bathroom door, he kept yelling for Min Li.

“Min Li, Jagiya~ please come out.” Jiyong pleaded, she didn’t answer him so he gave up. Putting on a white beater and jeans he looked through Min Li’s phone which she forgot to pick up. (he looks like this hahaha totally looking through Min Li’s phone LOL just look at him.-> http://www.8hitz.com/pictech3/Kwon_Ji_Yong_02.jpg)

He looked through her phone and saw a guy in her picture file. The guy was doing lots of poses pouting out his lips and kissing the camera. Jiyong tightly held on to the phone, squeezing it in his hands.

…..

Bri looked at her phone where she had just called Min Li.

“Did they spend the night together?” Bri chuckled to herself. She dialed Chaehwan’s number.

“Yeoboseyo?” Chaehwan breathe into the phone.

“Chaehwan? Are you ok?” Bri was worried.

“Yea I’m ok I was running around.”

“Oh… ok hey do you want to go to the mall with me today.” Bri fixed her Nike shoes.

“Umm… we can but I have to go check up on Soonbok first ok.”

“AH shit I totally forgot to go check up on Soonbok. Hahaha umm unnie thanks for reminding me.” Bri scratch her head and headed to the front door.

“Ok so unnie we’ll meet at Hyebin’s.” Bri confirm.

“Sure ok bye.” Chaehwan hanged up first.

“Bye.” Putting her phone in her butt pocket she opened the door and was going to leave. Somebody’s hand held on to her, looking back behind her she saw her dad.

“Ne Baba?” she looked at her dad.

“Yah Bri don’t mix Chinese and Korean together.” Her father replied.

“But Baba you are doing it too you see.” Bri laugh at her father.

“Ok, ok… so where are you going?” her father asked her.

“Umm out to see a friend.” Bri answered her father questionably because her father had never done this before.

“Ah is it that one friend from yesterday.” Her dad squeaked out.

‘Aish! So this was it all about!’ Bri thought to herself.

“ANIYO!!!!BABA!!! I’M LEAVING!” Bri barged out the door.

“Aish you did it again.” Her father yelled at her at mislanguaging but not knowing that he had done the same too. Like father like daughter.

…..

Chaehwan was still fixing her shoes. Going to the mirror she fixed her hair and began to walk out the front of her door. She passed the window and a red blotch caught her eye from the outside.

Walking to the window she saw HyunJoong outside with a bouquet of roses. Instantly she turned the other way.

“Aigoo~ why is he here?” she walked back and forth in her living room trying to think of something.

Seeing him move forwards to her front door. Chaehwan panicked and went through the back door. She closed it quietly so HyunJoong won’t hear it from the other side. walking around the side peeking if HyunJoong was still there, he was.

HyunJoong rang the doorbell twice.

“I swear I just saw her.” HyunJoong said out loud. He paced to the land lady’s room.

*Knock knock*

“Annyeong ahjumma I’m sorry to disturb you but can you see if Chaehwan is home?” HyunJoong asked the landlady.

“Say no Mrs. Han say no.” Chaehwan chanted at the side.

“I’m sorry I can only open if you are family to her.” The landlady replied to HyunJoong.

“Oh but I’m…”

“Sorry honey but I can take a message for her.” The ahjumma tried to help out HyunJoong.

*rustle rustle*

The ahjumma and HyunJoong looked to the side of the building… nothing there. HyunJoong caught a glimpse of a purple blouse.

“Oh ok then just tell her HyunJoong oppa came by.” He smiled innocently at the ahjumma.

“Will do ok bye.” The ahjumma closed the door on HyunJoong. He turned around to go back to his car.

‘Chaehwan what are you playing at?’ he knew she was there.

Driving to a different direction he came from he disappear turning the corner.

“*breathe* HyunJoong oppa sorry but I don’t know what to do or what I’m doing.” Chaehwan stepped out of the side of the building and ran down the other side of the road.

“Chaehwan, Chaehwan you should have checked first.” HyunJoong smirk seeing Chaehwan run down the street the opposite way from him.

HyunJoong knew that she was there so he made a U-turn hastily when he turned the corner to see if Chaehwan was there. Apparently she was. He followed her close behind but far enough, a red car past Chaehwan and stop in front of her.

HyunJoong studied her face expression. She looked scared at first. Slowly she nodded still with a terrified expression and got into the car. The car zoomed away. HyunJoong kept up with it. He didn’t know who was in the car but assumed that there were 2 guys and Chaehwan in the car.

…..

“Oppa, can you send me to Hyebin’s house?” Jihyun asked Siwon.

“Sorry Hyunnie but I have somewhere I got to go. Ask some one else ok sorry again.” Siwon answered her and she nodded.

He kissed her head and left out wearing a business suit.

Jihyun pouted and tried to call the other girls to come and pick her up too. none of them picked up their phones at all.

“I guess nobody can pick me up.” She took a step outside seeing that it was bright, really bright. Squinting her eyes, she poked her head.

“Why is it so bright?” she suddenly thought about vampires and laughed. “I guess walking won’t kill me right?” Jihyun walked past a bakery. Looking at the name “LOVE’S BAKERY” she went inside.

“Umm can I have these?” She pointed to the heart shaped cookies.

“That will be 4940 won.” (About 3.95) the girl smiled to Jihyun. Jihyun gave her 5000 won. Receiving the change back she walks out with her box of cookies.

“*bumps* mianhae.” His deep voice told her.

“It oks mianhae too.” Jihyun walked away without even looking at his face continuing to go to Hyebin’s house.

The guy smiled and when in to the bakery.

…..

*vibrate*

“AISH stupid phone.” She held up her phone to see who it was.

♪ Yah Lynn are you going to check up on her today?
~EunSoo

“I guess is should right.” She spoke to herself.

Getting up she was in her lingerie. White laced bra and heart pattern panties. The light from outside shined in too so her house was lighted.

…..

“Snap, Snap”

He looked at the picture of her that he just took. She was in her lingerie.

“Ah~ my beautiful Lynn you are gorgeous today.” He smirked and took a few more pictures of her changing.

“Yes got one.” He looked at the picture. Lynn had looked outside seeming that she looked at him.

“One day honey you will be mine.” He looked at the couple of hundred pictures he just took and add it to the memory stick.

“14975 pictures,” he stared at all of them, “just 5025 more pictures to go until I hit 20 thousand.” He looked up at Lynn’s window where she had already disappeared. “Good bye, my lovely model, until later honey.”

Driving away he took one last glance till later when he will see her again.

…..

“Ah shit I forgot I don’t have my car.” Lynn was out of her apartment and stood in the drive way. She ran to the corner knowing that she was going to be late.

“Aish Chaehwan you owe me!!!” Lynn screamed. ‘That stupid bet was for you and HyunJoong if you don’t hook up with him I will kill you.’ Lynn yelled at Chaehwan in her head. She began to run again once the light turned green.

*HONK HONK*

Some cars honked at her. Ignoring them she kept running.

…..

“UAGH!” EunSoo stepped out the car and stretched.

“So who do you think that was?” Jihye came out from the car.

“umm I don’t know I get the feeling that I was HyunJoong oppa but I don’t know either.” Chaehwan jumped out from the back.

Closing the door, they saw Jihyun and Bri came from the opposite direction of the side walk to the apartment.

“Yah what is that.” EunSoo pointed to Jihyun’s box.

“My food.” Jihyun replied.

“You guys shush let go.” Chaehwan lead the way to Hyebin’s apartment. When they were about to knock on the door it opened.

“Ah annyeonghaseyo.” The guy bowed to the girls, his smile was innocent with a hint of cuteness.

“Annyeong.” They replied back looking at him.

“Ah mianhae I need to leave but it was nice meeting you girls though.” Bowing again, he walked around the group of girls and then smiled one more time before leaving to his car. They look at him in his silver lotus eagle sports car. (http://www.gglotus.org/gghotnews/lotus-eagle/eagle1a.jpg)
He waved a hand out the window to them and pulled out from the parking lot.

The car past Lynn while she was still running to Hyebin’s apartment. Lynn’s head follow the car. ‘Ha my car is better!’ she commented in her head. Still running her eyes spotted her stunning 2009 Red Ferrari Scuderia Spider.( http://zoosviat.com/ferrari/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/9080908003mini1l.jpg)

Lynn ran to hug it. “Aw my car is Jihye treating you well.” Lynn swiped her hand on to the door handle.

“YAH Lynn you just missed a hot guy! And stay away!” Jihye screamed at her.

“I don’t care! And shut up!” Lynn walked up to the apartment.

“Soonbok are you ok now.” The six people surrounded her.

“Yep all good. Doc said that I was dehydrated and that I had too much acid in my stomach.” Soonbok laughed.

“So was that the doctor?” Bri asked Soonbok and she nodded.

“Damn he was so hot! Are you playing “Doctor” with him?” EunSoo smirked.

“I know like when Soonbok was doing her check up she was blushing the whole time.” Hyebin said.

“Was not. And what are you saying you were doing it too.” She argued back.

“Hey all of us blushed when he only said hi.” Chaehwan breathe in.

“He was really cute though. Too bad he isn’t your doctor but Danny’s.” Jihye stated. They all sighed.

“Stupid people only fall in love easily like you guys.” Lynn stated.

“OH but I bought cookies for us you guys want any?” Jihyun offered.

Each person took one cookie. They 7 of them sat in a circle. “Yah where is Min Li? I thought she said she was going to be here.”

“OMO I called her this morning and you know what… Jiyong oppa picked up. Which only means….”Bri left the ending off.

“Means what?” Jihyun gawk at Bri.

“That they had sex duh!” the rest yelled at Jihyun. “Oh.”

…..

“Wait ok I got to take this.” Hyebin stood up and went to her room. There was a text message waiting on her phone for her to reply.

♪ So cutie when are we going to meet up.
~Withheld

♫ Umm sorry I don’t know this is?
~Hyebin

♪ If you don’t then it is the better right?
~withheld

♫ Please leave me alone
~Hyebin

Hyebin turned off her phone.

“Aish that girl!!!!” he yelled at his phone.

…..

“Yunho-ah.” She crawled into the tub with him. He was lying there with soap bubbles all over him. He though he was alone until he heard breathing. He looked at her she only had a towel over her body. Slowly he pulled off the towel that she had in the water revealing her smooth skin.

“Come a bit closer.” He leaned backed and wanted her to do the work. She sat on him biting her lips as usual. He loved it when she does that. Stroking his hair with all the water and bubbles Yunho’s hair became wet.

“Yunho-ah umm can I…” she couldn’t finish but he knew it already. He pressed his lips on to her now making her the one leaning to the tub. He trapped her under him in the tub. His hands moved to go touch her breast. Pinching them he felt them harden.

She moaned letting him know how good it felt. He lowered his hands to her in between stroking in and out. He doesn’t know if it is the water of her juices but come thing was coming out.

He slipped his tongue into her mouth exploring her tasting her mouth. It tasted like sweet mint. Grinning he got up and pulled her with him to the bed.

O.O O.o o.O o.o O.O O.o o.O o.o O.O O.o o.O o.o

OMO OMO OMO Yunho what are you doing!!!!!!!!!!?????
Hehehe sorry there was like barely any guy scene in here
Muahahahaha
Whoo sexy doctor???? Stay tune to see who is the sexy doctor!!!

And sorry peoples Bri and Lynn had a lot more scenes in this one LOL
Those loser hahaha I will try to write people with more scenes in a chapter!!!!

And
Happy birthday Hiroki Nakadoi !!!! you are 24 hehehe it is all ok you still look like 17
Damn those Japanese people they can never age at all
Hehehe well happy 24th birthday!!!!
If anyone wonder who this is it is the leader from PC’s boy group Lead. PC is a Japanese company who also holds the famous Taegoon!!!!!eek Taegoon he is so hot too!!!!!

Girls or boys comment!!
I be waiting on your comments
SweetLips_Kmf09 Hwaiting

Next chap soon!!!!

July 26, 2009